英语作文写我自己范文五年级【一】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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英语作文写我自己范文五年级【二】
马虎的奇奇：
你好！
我和你是同一个人，我的名字也叫奇奇。每一天清晨，我们一齐上学；课间，此时我们一齐游戏；傍晚，我们一齐做作业。这天，我给你写信，是因为你最近太粗心，导致好多次机会都与你擦肩而过。
记得三年级时，你每次语文月考几乎都是前三名，数学和英语也名列前茅。但是，最近你一反常态，尽干一些粗心大意的事情。比如期末复习时，数学很好的你总是因为芝麻大小的错误丢掉分数：不是计算错啦、看错数啦，此时就是公式背乱啦，此时鬼明白你有多少种错法呢！要明白小升初时，差一分和差十一分已经没有任何区别了，那时你再后悔又有什么用呢？
再想想今年的期末，本来卷子不是很难，由于你答题马马虎虎，竟把默写了千百遍都没有错过的一道题答串了。煮熟的鸭子飞了，结果呢？基础只得了六十三分，总分与九十分无缘。
看到这两个例子，你还不警醒吗！你的疏忽大意，在生活中也闹了不少笑话。那次，你用微波炉热牛奶喝，插上插头就去看电视了，等打开微波炉一看，顿时傻了眼：原先牛奶还没放进去呢！哈哈哈~~~连我都想笑了！
其实，改掉粗心大意的毛病并不难，只要你有足够的毅力和信心。同时这也反映了一个问题：基础知识不够扎实。如果你能做到这些，我想，成功就离你不远了。此时困难像弹簧，你弱它就强！我期望你能早日摆脱马虎的纠缠，更上一层楼。
就说到这儿吧！后会有期，再见！
祝你
学习进步，身体健康
英语作文写我自己范文五年级【三】
Computer is a very useful machine. Some of them are big, but some of them are very small .Many people like playing computer. Computer has many functions, so that people can do a lot of things by computer, like watching movies, listening to the music or playing games. It can make our lives very colorful and convenient. Various people can make good use of computer. Children can use computer to learn and play games. Parents can use computers to work. I think computer is a kind of wonderful and interesting machine, so I like computer very much.
电脑是一种很有用的机器。有的电脑很大，但是有的'很小。很多人喜欢玩电脑。电脑有很多功能，人们可以i用电脑做很多事情，比如说看电影，听音乐或者玩游戏。它可以使我们的生活充满色彩和便利。各种各样的人都可以好好利用电脑。小孩子可以用电脑来学习和玩游戏。父母可以用电脑来工作。我认为电脑是一种神奇有趣的机器，所以我很喜欢电脑。
英语作文写我自己范文五年级【四】
想起那天中午发生的事情，那一幕幕仍然历历在目，我的心到现在仍然无法平静。
那天中午放学了，同学们陆陆续续地离开教室。教室里逐渐冷清起来，最后只剩下我和小明两个人了。
看到同学们都离开了，我和小明也打算跟着离开。小明走过讲台边时，不小心碰到了讲台上的一个柜子。“吱”地一声，柜子竟然打开了。里面竟是一沓沓新的单行本，整整齐齐地放着。估计这是老师为班里同学准备的作业本。
“我以前怎么没有发现呢？哈哈。”小明的笑声在教室里回荡着，他的目光贪婪地地望着这一切，像一只饿狼看见了肥羊一样。突然，发他闪电般伸出右手从柜子里拿出两本单行本塞进书包，并对我说：“你也来拿啊！”说着，又把一本递给我。我正要伸手去接，手伸到一半却定住了。这时我的心已经乱成一团了，心里好像有两个人在打架。一个说：“不能拿，这是小偷的行为！”另一个说：“拿吧，反正只拿一本而已，老师不会发现的。”“不偷东西，为的不是不被老师批评啊！人要有道德，有良心，一个人的意志坚定了，是不会受外界影响的'！”……这声音更响亮了，像一道曙光，把我心中的乌云拔开，光明一片。我整个人立刻清醒过来了，“是啊，无论如何也不能偷东西！偷集体的东西是可耻的！”我把伸到一半的手抽回来了，我心里暗自庆幸：庆幸自己最后还是战胜了自己的贪念，没有犯错误。
于是，我诚恳地对小明说：“这不能拿，是偷窃行为，你还是放回去吧。”“神经病，不拿白不拿，这么多拿几本老师不会知道的。”小明冲我做了一个鬼脸，又拿起几本塞进书包里。我还想劝他，他充耳不闻，一意孤行地继续把本子往书包里塞，起码塞了二三十本。最后他就背起沉重的书包匆匆地离开了教室。
第二天，小明偷班里的单行本的行为被老师发现了，老师批评教育了小明。
这件事，令我深刻地悟出了一个人生道理：人生处处存在着分岔路口，也许，正确的选择不能给人带来利益，但一定要懂得拒绝诱惑，做正直的人，战胜心中的坏念头。人必须一次次战胜自我，才可以一次次让自己的思想品德得到升华。只有战胜自我，才能铸造一个好的人生，迈向成功。
