My dearest Mother,
The mother's day is coming and I would like to say “Happy mother's day” in this letter. I love you and thank you so much for everything you did for me. This day,I will stay away and can't give you my appreciation at home. I know I will watch myself,so don't worry about me. I am doing very well on my study. My schoolmates and teachers are all very nice. Though I can't be at home, I hope you have a wonderful mother's day.
Love,
Your son
Dear Mom,
I recently read the book, Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mom by Amy Chua. I found that you and Ms. Chua have a lot in common in parenting. Today, I’ d like to share some of my views on this topic.
Childhood memories of your strict “dos” and "don’ts" came flooding back. Because count- less hours were invested on practicing musicalinsUu- ments, there was not even a slim chance for me to participate in parties and school plays, let alone fully enjoy the authentic pleasures of family life.Moreover, deprived of the freedom to choose hob- bies, I sometimes felt that I was just like a lonely pup- pet manipulated by others. Dear mother, do you be- lieve that time and time again I woke up from beau- tiful dreams with tears streaming down my face?
However, though Ive labeled it as a brutal regimen when I was young, as I became heavily involved inme outside world, I’ve come to realize that it was quite rewarding to have been tiger trained. As George Eliot putslt,"It never rains roses: when we want to have more roses, we must plant trees". This is as true of 0ur growing up, especially in an unprecedentedly stressful so- cietyr, Fortunately, tiger parenting has equipped me with exceptional study habits,thus helping me stand out in the intense competition. Furthermore, it has endowed me with strong willpower as well as inner self-poise, which bas proved to be a most pre- cious quality of mine. Finally,thanks to your firm discipline, not cmly have I cultivateda discerning taste in art, but I’ve also built my own set of moral values. In view of all these facts, tiger parenting has benefited me in the lorlg run despite the cost of the immediate joy of a normal carefree cbildhood.
Now, looking back on my childhood with your specialparenting method,I want to extend my sincerest appreciauon to you, my dear mother. As I am to commence my college life now,I promise you that Ill improve myself ina "tiger" way, going all out to fulfill all of my dreams.
Love,
Daughter
专家点评:
通过这封写给母亲的信,作者把母亲的教育方式和“tiger mom”的方式作对比,阐述自己的观点。开篇简洁明了,正文欲扬先抑,强调对“tiger training”的赞同,依此出发向母亲表达深切感激之情。文章结构清晰,观点明了,逻辑性强,行文通顺。作者词汇量丰富,长句驾驭能力强。建议适当改变句式,保证长短错落有致。
“加油,你是最棒的!”这是妈妈常跟我说的一句话。这句话像盏善良的明灯,指引着我人生的方向。这句话像一张耸立的白帆,引领着我驶向成功的彼岸。这句话像一条闪电。在我迷茫的时候为我指点迷津……
有一次妈妈让我看《哈利。波特》这本书,我看的不耐烦了,就把书扔到里一边。妈妈看见了,不但没有批评我,而且还抚摸着我的头说:“孩子,加油你是最棒的.!这只是你姥姥送改我的一句话,‘当年,只有我们四个姐妹和一个哥哥,没有人管我们,只留下了点钱,我们要有不会的题,都没有人问。有一天妈妈回来了,说领导生病了,停了三天。我们都说:“不学了,学习实在是太苦了!”但是妈妈说:“加油,你是最棒的!”’妈妈的这句话鼓励了我们。从此以后,学习再苦,再累,只要想起妈妈说的那句话,就再也不苦,不累了,因为是这句话给了我们无穷无尽的力量。”
我听到这里,我的眼泪都涌出来了,我拾起我扔下的书,我好好学习,天天向上。在期中考试中,我取得了很好的成绩。
长跑运动会上,我参加了400米长跑。“砰!”地一声,发令枪响了,我飞一般的冲了出去,等到最后一百米冲刺的时候,我已经筋疲力尽了,但是我听见妈妈正在上面高喊:“吕奇峰,加油,你是最棒的!”这句话给了我动力,我一口气冲到底,赢得了冠军。再一次写作业的时候,我埋怨老师留的作业太多,就不写了,妈妈说:“不管做什么,只要用心去做,好好去做,就会更上一城楼的。孩子,加油,你是最棒的!”
“孩子,加油,你是最棒的!”这句话像一艘大轮船,载着我驶向金色的沙滩;这句话像一盏不熄的明灯,照亮了我人生的道路;这句话像一把神奇的扫帚,扫清了我前进的道路,扫清了我前进的道路上的障碍。这句话已经印在了我的心里。我我会永存心中。“孩子,加油,你是最棒的!”
我的母亲学历不高,但总能说出什么有道理的话,她曾用极其凶狠的语气骂过我,也用过柔情似水的话语安慰过我。就是这种种话,让我每当要知难而退的时候,就会想起。
我每次考差,哭丧着脸回家时,我妈就会极其灵敏的感觉到不对的气氛,她不会直接问我考的如何,而是旁敲侧击。当我说出成绩后,她也依然微笑着对我说:“只要努力,就会有回报,你付出的我们都看在眼里,不怕下次考不好。”其实听完这话我也十分愧疚,因为我总是不能达到预期,反而还是他们一次次的来安慰我。
当我说我快坚持不下去的时候,她又会对我说:“尽自己所能,不去管其他的,不让自己后悔就行。”是的呀,我无需顾虑名次排多少,无需害怕被她责骂,我只需要一往直前,做自己想做的的事,尽自己的努力不后悔就好。
她总是一直在背后支持我,不会刻意要求我一定要完成这,完成那,她几乎从来不逼我做任何我不想做的事情,她想要的只是我的健康成长。她和别人的妈妈似乎不太一样,但是和天下所有的妈妈又一样,希望子女可以变得越来越好。
她的那些话常常指引着我,如同漆黑的夜里的一盏明灯,为我照亮前方的路;又常常在我迷茫的时候,我拥犀利的话语点醒我,让我迷途知返。
我该如何能够表达我对她的感激,我想我唯一能做的,就是不辜负她对我的期望,努力成为更好的自己。
母亲总是给予我们最大的庇护,但是我们不能养成依赖性,要敢于自己独立闯一闯。
放假了的我彻底不受学校的管控,放开了自我,窝在家中不停的玩,也不关心家里的任何事物,我妈见状很是火大,家中时常出现争辩声。我妈忍不住她的好脾气了,对我说:“你知道现在生活有多不容易吗,你就这么心安理得的接受着一切,不想想你应该做些什么吗?你就应该出去体验体验挣钱到底是什么感觉!”我妈说完头也不回的转身走进了她的卧室。
我听完这话呆在了原地,因为我妈从来没有向我吐露过她的难处,而是一直对我有求必应,我也一直生活在这样的错觉里生活了这么久,细细回想最近自己的所作所为,的确很令她寒心。
吐鲁番的夏天就如一个碳烤炉,我们就是那被待“烤”的小羔羊。热气不断袭向我,和我来了个亲切的拥抱,明明是热气我却止不住的发起来寒颤,恐怕这就是热极生冷吧。
我找了一份发广告的兼职,想去感受我妈所说的每一句话的现实含义。我自以为发广告是一件轻而易举的事,发给人们就可以了,但是现实远不是这么美好的,人们会主动的忽视你,远离你,这和在家里备受重视的感觉天壤之别,想要成功的发完可能需要一天的时间,并且一天都会在各处游走,饱受着风吹日晒,一天下来腰酸背痛。
母亲这么多年来都是这样的工作过来的,强度可能更大,但是她并没有抱怨,尽她所能满足我们,不想让我们感到苦,这一次的爆发可能是积压了许久吧!
家中的我们就如温室里的花朵,被美好的幻觉迷住了心,未曾经历过现实的残酷,有时候真的很需要父母的一句刺痛人心的话语才能点醒我们。
When he got home, he did his best to cook some nice food,though he couldn‘t do the cooking well. Thenhe cleaned the room. He felt very tired, but he was very happy.
When his father and his mother came back and saw the clean rooms and dishes which weren‘t so nice, they were very happy.They had their supper together. His mother said, Thank you,my child!
今天是母亲节。孙峥觉得应该为妈妈做点事,他决定帮妈妈做些家务。放学回家的路上,他去商店买了食品。到家后,他尽全力做些好吃的,尽管他并不擅长烹任。做完饭,他又打扫了房间。他感觉有些累,但仍然很高兴。
当父母回来后,看见干净的房间和并不太荚味的`菜,他们依然很高兴。他们一起吃了晚饭。妈妈说:“谢谢你,孩子。”
Today is Mother‘s Day. I know some of my classmates are going to help their mothers with the housework, others .are going to buy some flowers for their mothers. I want to say to her that I love her very much. But as a boy, it is a bit difficult for me to show my heart. I think only girls can do that.
My mother is very kind. She takes care of me day and night.
She spends little money, but buys anything for me that I need.
This time I must show my love. I am going to give her a card and write like this, I love you, mother! I am going to put it under her pillow.
今天是母亲节。我知道一些同学打算帮妈妈做些家务,还有一些同学打算给妈妈买些花。我只是想对妈妈说一声,我非常爱她。但是对我来说这样表达我的情感有点儿难,因为我是个男孩。我觉得只有女生才这样做。
我妈妈是个非常善良的人。她对我照顾得无微不至。她自己很少花钱,但能给我买我需要的任何东西。
这次我一定要表示我对她的爱。我打算送她一张写有“我爱你,妈妈”的卡片,我还打算把它放在她的枕头下面。
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