教育方式变化四级作文【一】
分析范文或优秀作文是我们学好写作的第一步。不要小看任何的优秀小短文，那其中一定有需要你掌握的内容。To see a world in a grain of sand,
And a heaven in a wild flower,
Hold infinity in the palm of your hand,
And eternity in an hour.
一沙一世界，
一花一天堂，
手中即无限，
永恒亦短暂。
教育方式变化四级作文【二】
Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先，提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段：提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段：正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段：摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次，提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性，连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity：段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛，也不可太具体，做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明，另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence：关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰，层层展开。
完整性(completeness：以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头，这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次，提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型：It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单，注意练习并接句的使用，会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as，如：
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头，句式简单，我们可以通过把since提前改变句式，如：
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后，提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法：millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论，辩论”的意思，而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.，相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略：使用最近所学的单词，如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后，我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文，以供参考：
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
教育方式变化四级作文【三】
在课堂上，我们知道了今天祖国发生的事，世界发生的事，都与我们每一个人的成长息息相关。五十年前，曾经说过，世界是属于我们的，属于年轻一代的。时代迈着前进的步伐带着中国人大步跨越了一个又一个外国人断定无法实现的愿望，它就像一列前进的列车，呼啸着穿越一个个困难，不断加速，不断更新自我。1997年-XX年仅仅十年的光阴，我国就分别于1997年4月1日、1998年10月1日、XX年10月21日、XX年10月21日、XX年4月18日、XX年4月18日，实现了6次列车大提速。不仅列车飞速提速，铁路也一刻不停地向四面八方延伸。目前，中国铁路通车里程就达到了7.7万公里，相当于绕地球一圈半，位居世界第三。而且中国的铁路也于XX年7月1日穿越了昆仑山的岩石和坚冰，一直通往拉萨，实现了中华人民数百年的梦想。
作为一个中国人，我感到了发自内心的骄傲与自豪，中国铁路的\'成功，再次向世人昭示，我们是勤劳的、智慧的，我们有志气、有信心、有能力不断创造非凡的业绩。我认为，中国各方面的飞速发展与各个时期国家整体的沉浮有着密切的关系。在民国时期，军阀混战、时局动荡，实在无法集中如此之大的人力物力来修建青藏铁路这样一条高科技、高成本的铁路，就更别谈经济的致富了。改革开放后，中国开始渐渐走上了正确的道路，中国不仅站起来了，还富起来了，不但带来了科技的快速发展，而且也带来了物资财富的增加，青藏铁路的修建，也就不再只是一个梦了。
教育方式变化四级作文【四】
这就是我，一个普通的小学生，观看了《形势教育大课堂之生活新变化》后的由衷感想。
片中，向我们展示了一个繁荣昌盛，却又实实在在真真切切的生活乐章。
说起变化，我们中国的科技不得不提。而我国的科技发展也是惊人的。就从1997年~2007年仅仅十年的光阴，我国就分别于1997年4月1日、1998年10月1日、2000年10月21日、2004年4月18日、2007年4月18日，实行了6次列车大提速，铁路也一刻不停地向四面八方升延。目前，中国铁路通车里程就达到7.7万公里,位居世界第三呢。而且也于2006年7月1日穿越了昆仑山的`岩石和坚冰，一直通往拉萨，实现了中国百年的梦想。铁路，真的像一条中国巨龙，飞跃了艰难，征服了讽刺，扫清了蔑视、耻辱。中国人，就这样在生活中突破，创新。
中华雄狮，一声震天吼！
也许，科技离老百姓有点远。我们也学着老太太们拉拉家常吧。从基本的柴米油盐算起。这消费嘛，当然是不用说，人们早已奔了“小康”。从以前的“温饱型”变为“享受型”。普通的老百姓们也能通过互联网看世界了。也能有精神享受了。
看到这里，我的思绪也随着屏幕飘到了社会上。
可不是，科技其实也在悄悄潜入了生活。以前，从北京到江苏可能是天涯海角，而现在，在火车上舒舒服服打个盹就到天安门。
欣喜，在于发展。
互联网真是神奇，它让人透过一个窗口，就可以看到世界每一个角落。即使你在再偏僻的地方，也可以一会儿去领略长城的宏伟气势，一会儿去参观埃及金字塔；你可以去攀登日本富士山，还可以在美国的唐人街上漫步……
哪怕你是一个“面朝黄土背朝天”的乡野之人，也得变成周游世界的“麦哲伦”，成为一个旅行家。
欣喜，在于享受。
欣喜，欣喜，还欣喜。
中国13亿同胞，正乘着一条巨龙，在母亲大地上盘旋，飞速盘旋。每一个人都斗志满腔，都信心十足，每一个都在生活着条路上，一步一个脚印，一滴汗水，脚踏实地的，在向前新的迈进，迈进。我希望我能成为其中一员，为中国做贡献，也为自己的生活增一点苦乐。
提速，提的岂止是速度？
教育方式变化四级作文【五】
春天， 万物复苏，小河水哗哗地顺流而下； 活泼机灵的小鸟们在枝头喳喳地纵情歌唱； 小草们神不知鬼不觉地从地下探出了脑袋，大地换上了绿色的新衣； 小野花们争先恐后地展示着自己的美丽； 一棵棵大树好像正在返老还童， 抽出嫩黄色的新芽；。年迈的`凤凰木也紧跟着春天的步伐， 吐出米粒大小的嫩叶， 就像刚出生的婴儿那般娇嫩。
夏天，太阳像一个火炉似地炙烤着地面。凤凰木的叶子早已变成了深绿色，枝条也向四周扩展了许多，变成了一把绿色的大伞。当太阳透过茂密的树叶筛下一束束金光时， 美丽的凤凰花绽开了一张张笑脸，好像给凤凰木披上了红色的霞衣。
秋天，凤凰树的叶子慢慢地变成了金黄色，在微风吹拂下纷纷飘落下来， 给地面铺上了一层厚厚的金色地毯。课间十分钟，我和小伙伴们在凤凰树下尽情地玩耍、嬉闹，甭提有多高兴了。
冬天，刺骨的寒风从耳边呼呼地刮过，古老的凤凰木褪去了繁华，仿佛一个弯着腰、知识渊博的老学者，正在讲述着她一百多年来的沧桑岁月， 并勉励我们克服各种困难、勤奋学习，成为对国家有贡献的人才。
这就是我们百年老校的百年古树---凤凰木。
教育方式变化四级作文【六】
Dear Mary,
You said in your letter that many of your classmates wore fashionableclothes, but you couldn\'t afford them so you felt very depressed. There are dif-ferent views on people\'s clothes. The followings are my ideas:
Firstly, you shouldn\'t put too much emphasis on physical appearance.
Remember that the most important task for you today is to concentrate on yourstudies. No matter what you wear, you will really look your best when youcome out first in your examinations.
Secondly, you should understand that it is a fine virtue to live in fru-gality. Just as a famous saying goes, Frugality is the mother of virtue.
Since your family can\'t provide you with enough money to buy fashionableclothes, it is all the more necessary for you to try to lighten the financialburden of your family. And you will find the virtue of frugality benefit youa lot in your future life.
I hope you understand what I mean. Hope you will take a positive attitudetowards life and will be happy again when you read my letter.
Yours,
Anne
