今天我又来到了“小蜜蜂作文乐园。”今天我们又玩了一个神秘游戏,想知道就大声说出我们的\'口号:勤劳小蜜蜂,学习作文乐融融,呃!
我们今天玩的游戏呀,名叫:“小鸡出壳”哩!我原来想很简单,谁想得到,材料只有:一张报纸、一把剪刀。老师告诉我们:“把报纸中心剪去留下‘外 套’,把自己比作小鸡,跳出‘外套’,比哪组不把‘外套’弄坏,最快钻过去。”我这才发现原来还蛮难,当我停下来思考时,只见几个女同学抢先做好,在老师 面前表演一番,不一会儿就成了“擂主”。后来我发现了一个秘诀:人要瘦,也要身手敏捷;圈要大,也要牢。有了我的独家秘诀必赢!
这次“小鸡出壳”游戏真有趣,不但可以在玩游戏的同时,让自己变得有活力,身手敏捷。
我和我的同桌钟世如偷偷说:“想要赢必须多看马戏团的狮子跳火圈。”旁边的同学也不小心听到了,照我的去做,摔了一个四脚朝天,我感觉他在说:“老虎不发威,你当我是病猫!”结果又试了一次,又摔得他屁滚尿流。我也情不自禁得笑了起来。
真是笑人
星期六下午,我们在上第二节课的时候,老师带我们玩了一个游戏,叫“真是笑人”。
游戏开始了,老是挑了三位同学每人发了一枝笔,分别在黑板上写“谁”、“在什么地方”、“干什么”。老师说:“你们三个不许商量。”负责写“在什么地方”的黄开远怎么想也想不出来要写什么,他就往旁边的同学那一看,看到旁边的那个同学写上了他的名字,他就写下“在公园里”,万万没有想到负责写“干什么”的同学写下了“在挤牛奶”。可黄开远根本就不知道那个同学写了什么。三个同学都写完了,合成的是:“黄开远在公园里挤牛奶。”黄开远看了这句话,不禁大喊道:“太可恶了!”其他同学都哈哈大笑了起来。
游戏还在进行中,同学们都在争先恐后的举手,都想上去表现一下自己,教室里传出了阵阵笑声。
最后,老师让我们把那些病句改了,我觉得这是最快乐的一节课。
好的文章动静结合、张弛有度有节奏感。句式也是一样,要有变化性,这不仅能使文章更生动,也是语言表达方式的需要和表达能力的体现。句式的`变化,主要是要注意两点:
● 不要从头至尾使用一种句型。
● 长短句结合。
由于语言功底的欠缺和惯用思维,很多人写的文章一种句式到头,如:
I think …
I hope…
He does it.
He will take it
这样的文章虽然意思表达出来了,却显得呆板,欠生动。解决的办法是:
1.间或使用主从复句。
Because he is very much determined, he will carry it out this time. (原因
比较:He is very much determined. He will carry it out this time.
2.使用分词结构句。
The weather being fine, a large number of people went sightseeing.
比较:The weather is fine. A large number of people went sightseeing.
Africa is the second largest continent, its size being about three times that of China.
比较:Africa is the second largest continent. Its size is about three times that of China.
3.使用不定式句。
To be or not to be, that is a question. (莎士比亚
To study or not to study, that is much different.(引申
To do it well, you must plan it well.
比较:You want to do it well. And you must plan it well.
4.倒装句
Only when we fully recognize its importance can we have control of its essence.
比较:After we fully recognize its importance, we can have control of its essence.
No sooner had he arrived home than it began to rain.
比较:He arrived home. And it began to rain.
5.失衡句
whether or not he will come is still unknown to all the people present.
比较:No one present knows whether he will come or not.
That he has done it all by himself is known to everyone.
比较:Everyone knows that he has done it all by himself.
当然,句子并不是越长越好,也不是越复杂水平就越高。凡事皆有度。太多长句的堆砌让人觉得是买弄。有时侯,一个短小精辟的句子可以起到画龙点睛的作用。特别是在文末段尾。比如:
●As a creature, every one knows.
●Actions speak louder than words.
●Practice makes perfect.
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