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I’m very happy to receive your letter, and I’m glad to hear that you will go to China to learn Chinese here. I have already found a fiat for you. It is on Fangcao Street, which is not far from Jianxin Chinese School. Bus No.11 can take you there, and it is one stop before the Chinese School. The flat is on the third floor with 3 rooms, one of which is bedroom, the other two are bathroom and kitchen. There are a bed, a sofa, a desk and some chairs in this 25 square-metres small fiat, and the rent is 500 yuan per month. Maybe this fiat is not as good as your wish, but I’ll try my best to meet your needs. If it is not suitable enough, write to me and I will look for another better place.
Hope you will come here soon!
All the best!
Yours,
Li Hua
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2.参考词汇:房租Tent(n..
同学们裁剪贴纸,一件件高端,仪态万千的衣服出现在咱们的面前。为什么?因为今天是咱们自己富丽的“T台秀”。各位“国际名模”早已等候了很久,马上就可以欣赏到一流的表演了。
这可真所谓是秀出新高度。一名“拉斯维加斯老大”盛装出席,可要看他一眼,内心就被一股强大的气流震撼到了;再瞧上一眼,人们就彻底地被他迷倒了。头上那如太阳般赤红的头巾,“焚烧”着全场,使得自己狂野奔放;绿色的外衣好像看见了凉爽的`原始森林,加上身边的一朵茉莉花,愈加衬托自己清新脱俗;重要的是,他的“白银”十分耀眼,又显出了雍容华贵的模样。全身上下一片酷炫,潮流;大气派头,添画了几笔清凉的风貌。
一名恰到好处,撩起风拂褶裥,肩上是紫色的蝴蝶结,下身橙色腰带,后是优雅正经的“礼衣”凉鞋搭配。走起路来婀娜多姿,眼球被深深吸引了。手指自然垂直,俄然,脚步停住了,转身造型,如一幅“花朵开放”的画,一种共同的美感直沁内心,深深地扎入大脑。
其他“名模”也是各有千秋。我身披如大海般清蓝的衣服,头上戴着像丝绸般柔软的头巾,下身穿上橙子似的“裙子”,一身“夏威夷风情”简朴高兴的着装不留一点宛转内敛,完全是土著人中的“骄子”,热心地把人们带入了我的特别之美。在夏天,阵阵冷风轻拂着咱们的“T台”,我在“大海中”高兴的享受着,尽情地跳着“草裙舞”。
这是一场清凉热心的“T台秀”,每个人把自己的共同之美带了过来,用走秀的方法展现给大家。
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