东莞中考作文英语2021【一】
1。 头绪分明，脉络清楚
写好记叙文，首先要头绪分明，脉络清楚，明确文章要求写什么。要对所写的事件或人物进行分析，弄清事件发生、发展一直到结束的整个过程，然后再收集选取素材。这些素材都应该跟上述五个“ W ”和一个“ H ”有关。尽管不是每篇记叙文里都必须包括这些“ W ”和“ H ”，但动笔之前，围绕五个“ W ”和“ H ”进行构思是必不可少的。
2。 突出中心，详略得当
在文章的框架确定后，对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的。选材要注意取舍，应该从表现文章主题的需要出发，分清主次，定好详略。要突出重点，详写细述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节，略写粗述那么非关键的次要情节。面面俱到反而使情节罗列化，使人不得要领。这一点是写好记叙文要解决的一个基本问题，也需要一定的技巧。如：
One night a man came to our house and told me， "There is a family with eight children。 They have not eaten for days。" I took some food with me and went。
When I finally came to that family， I saw the faces of those little children disfigured （破坏外貌） by hunger。 There was no sorrow or sadness in their faces， just the deep pain of hunger。
I gave the rice to the mother。 She divided the rice in two， and went out， carrying half the rice。 When she came back， I asked her， "Where did you go?" she gave me this simple answer， "To my neighbors — they are hungry also!"
3。 用活语言，准确生动
记叙文要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事、物加以叙述。一篇好的记叙文的语言既要准确、生动，又要表现力强，这样才能把人、事描写得具体生动，其可读性才强。试比较下面一篇例文修改的前后效果。
原文：
One day Xiaoqiang was wandering away。 He was soon lost among people and traffic。 He could not find the way back home and started crying。 Just then， two young students who were passing by found him standing alone in front of a shop and crying。 They went up to Xiaoqiang and asked him what had happened。 Xiaoqiang told them how he got lost and where he lived。 The two students decided to take him home。 Mother was pleased to see Xiaoqiang come back safe and sound。 She invited the two students into the house and gave them some money， but they didn＇t take it。 She served them with tea but they left。
修改后：
The other day， five-year-old Xiaoqiang left home alone and wandered happily in the street。 After some time， he felt hungry so he wanted to go back home。 But he found he was lost among the crowded people and heavy traffic。 When he could not find the way home， he started and crying。 Just then， two young students who were passing by from school found him sanding crying in front of a shop。 They immediately went up to him。
"Little boy， why are you standing here crying?" they asked。
"I want Mom， I go home。" said the boy， still crying。
"Don＇t worry， we＇ll send you home。"
And they spent the next two hours looking for the boy＇s house。 With the help of a policeman， they finally found it。
When the worried mother saw her son come back safe and sound， she was so thankful and she invited the students into her house。 Gratefully， she offered them some money， saying it was a way to express her thanks， but the young students firmly refused it and left without even a cup of tea。
东莞中考作文英语2021【二】
贝贝—幅老师的模样，一本正经地考大家：“你们觉得东莞是一座怎样的城市？”说罢，京京慢条斯理地说：“东莞是个充满活力的城市，她位于广东省中南部、珠江三角洲东北部，北距广州50公里，南离深圳90公里，水路至香港47海里，至澳门48海里，处于穗港经济走廊中间，是广州与香港之间水陆交通的必经之地。东莞历史源远流长，资源丰富，国民经济持续、快速、健康发展，社会不断进步，人民物质和精神文化生活水平不断提高。今天的东莞已成为一个冉冉升起的现代制造业名城，是广东省的中心城市之一。”“回答正确，不过你别忘了东莞人那种‘海纳百川，厚德务实’的城市精神。”这时，迎迎跳过来，手里拿着两个刚刚回收的饮料瓶，着急地说道：“宣传绿色奥运才是现在的.当务之急！我刚刚和几个少先队员在路边宣传环保，可回来的路上还是捡到了被扔在草丛里的饮料瓶。”说着，便举起手里的瓶子，然后把它们扔进了回收箱，迎迎接着说“不过令我欣慰的是，大多数东莞市民环保意识还是很高的，都能做到垃圾分类，在政府创办节约型社会的倡导下，水、电资源的浪费现象大幅度减少，我相信东莞市民的环保意识会进一步提高。”
妮妮手捧一摞旅游指南，面带微笑地说：“2008年北京奥运一定要给中外友人留下亲切友好的印象，给人以宾至如归的感觉，另外也要加强人文服务，使体育场管更加人性化，从而体现我们的人文关怀。”说着，便打开其中一本东莞旅游指南，翻了几页。接下去说：“我还要让中外友人来东莞游览，感受到东莞的文化，我要带他们去游东莞八景、吃东莞传统小食、听粤曲，让他们了解东莞的文化，了解民族英雄林则徐、袁崇焕。”
京京身穿一身中国红的唐装，手里举着一面鲜艳的五星红旗，笑意盈盈地说：“不管是科技奥运，绿色奥运，还是人文奥运，最重要的是如何做好2008年北京奥运会的东道主。在一举手一投足间，处处体现着中国人的素质，处处表现着中国人对外国友人的态度。”大家纷纷表示赞同。
欢欢一身红衣，风风火火地跑过来，大声宣布：“我刚刚看到东莞有不少市民参加了奥运会志愿者的行列，奥运首次在咱们中国北京举办，东莞人热情很高，为体育事业贡献了不少力量！”
“我们也要参加！”欢欢一说完，其他四位福娃喊道，生怕落后。“我不但要做志愿者，还要在场上为奥运健儿加油！”“我要学好英语，到时候也为外国运动员鼓劲！”“对！我也要学好英语，向外国游客介绍中国，介绍北京，介绍东莞。”
五个福娃兴致勃勃地聊着聊着，畅想着2008那举世瞩目的那一刻… …
小作者：602班刘洁愉
指导老师：廖水文
东莞中考作文英语2021【三】
I was born in a beautiful town with high mountains around it.The mountains are covered with all kinds of green bamboo.Through the town runs a small stream.It’s said that a new railway is going to be built to the east of the town and a bamboo factory to the west.All the children of the school age can go to school.If anyone is ill,he can go to see the doctor in the newly-built hospital.People in the town are hard-working and never take the backwardness lying down.Though they are having a richer and better life,they are not satisfied with what they have got.They are working hard to build their town into a modern one.
东莞中考作文英语2021【四】
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第1段：提出一种现象或某个决定作为议论的话题
As a student, I am strongly in favour of the decision. (亮明自己的观点是赞成还是反对
The reasons for this may be listed as follows. (过渡句，承上启下
正文：
第2段：First of all... Secondly... Besides...(列出2~3个赞成或反对的`理由
结论：
第3段：In conclusion, I believe that... (照应第1段，构成"总—分—总"结构
东莞中考作文英语2021【五】
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第1段：Some people hold the opinion that A is superior to B in many ways. Others, however, argue that B is much better. Personally, I would prefer A because I think A has more advantages.
正文：
第2段：There are many reasons why I prefer A. The main reason is that ... Another reason is that...(赞同A的原因
第3段: Of course, B also has advantages to some extent... (列出1~2个B的优势
结论：
第4段: But if all these factors are considered, A is much better than B. From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that ...(得出结论 オ
