2023英语一作文评级【一】
Dear Bob,
I’m glad to hear from you.
Welcome to our city in september. I’ve found a suitable house for you.
The house is on Fang Cao Street, not far from the Jianxin Chinese School. If you take the No.11 bus, it is just one stop.
It is a flat on the third floor of a building. It has three rooms, a living-room, a bathroom and a kitchen. You can cook yourself. The mirror, the basin and the bathtub are very convenient for you. In the living-room, there is a bed, a sofa and a desk with chair. The desk is next to the window. It will be good for study. The total size is 25 square metres and the rent is 500 yuan a month.
Will you be satisfied with this flat, or you want another one? Just let me know. I’ll try my best to help you.
Yours,
Li Hua
亲爱的鲍，
我很高兴收到你的来信。
欢迎到我们的城市在九月。我找到了一个适合你的房子。
房子在芳草街，从建中文学校不远。如果你乘11路公共汽车，它只是一个停止。
这是一栋第三层的公寓楼。它有三个房间，一个客厅，一个浴室和一个厨房。你可以自己做饭。镜子、盆和浴缸对你很方便。客厅里有一张床、一张沙发和一张椅子。桌子在窗户旁边。这将是很好的学习。总面积为25平方米，每月租金500元。
你会满意这个单位，或者你想要另一个吗？只是让我知道。我会尽我所能帮助你。
你的，
李华
2023英语一作文评级【二】
Founder of Labor Day
More than 100 years after the first Labor Day observance， there is still some doubt as to who first proposed the holiday for workers.
Some records show that Peter J. McGuire， general secretary of the Brotherhood of Carpenters and Joiners and a cofounder of the American Federation of Labor， was first in suggesting a day to honor those "who from rude nature have delved and carved all the grandeur we behold."
But Peter McGuire"s place in Labor Day history has not gone unchallenged. Many believe that Matthew Maguire， a machinist， not Peter McGuire， founded the holiday. Recent research seems to support the contention that Matthew Maguire， later the secretary of Local 344 of the International Association of Machinists in Paterson， N.J， proposed the holiday in 1882 while serving as secretary of the Central Labor Union in New York. What is clear is that the Central Labor Union adopted a Labor Day proposal and appointed a committee to plan a demonstration and picnic.
The first Labor Day holiday was celebrated on Tuesday， September 5， 1882， in New York City， in accordance with the plans of the Central Labor Union. The Central Labor Union held its second Labor Day holiday ju
2023英语一作文评级【三】
Dear teacher:
I am just writing to say thank you.thank you for teaching us things we need to learn, thank you for being there for us when we have any problems, thanks for your devotion and willingness to help us, thank you for the love you\'ve shown to us.
I am lucky to have a teacher like you. and no matter what kind of person i will become, you will always have your influence on me. You taught me how to study, how to live and even how to be a man. From you I learned what kind of person i want to be and what should i get from life. this means everything to me.
my dear teacher, no matter what you will always have a special place in my heart and i will remember what i have learned from you and carry the knowleges through my life! I will make good use of the school, teachers would also like to be able to impart a better learning methods, such as English will be able to make progress there is a greater interest in education teachers and thanked the ex Thank you!
Yours
Jane
2023英语一作文评级【四】
Dear teacher,
We\'ll have a class meeting this afternoon. All of us students hope that you can attend it. Please accept our sincere invitation.
In the class meeting, we will make some plans about all the subjects, including English. We do have some puzzles and we need your help. So we hope you can set some time aside to be with us in the class meeting. We will feel honored if you can come to attend our class meeting.
Looking forward to your coming.
Yours
Jane
2023英语一作文评级【五】
本文内容详实，描述具体细腻，用词适当准确，如“suitable house”、“not far from’’等，另外文中的选择疑问句也很有新意。中考英语满分作文:给校长的一封信 A Letter to the University President
Direction： For this part， you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic： A letter to the university president about the canteen service on campus， you should write at least 100 words， and base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below：
假设你是李伟，请你就本校食堂的状况给校长写了一封信，内容涉及食堂的饭菜质量、价格、环境、服务等等，可以是表扬，可以是批评建议，也可以兼而有之。
2023英语一作文评级【六】
Dear Bob,
I’m so glad that you are coming to learn Chinese here. I’ve already found you a house near our school. I’d like to tell you something about it.
You may get on No.ll bus at Fang Cao Street and the next stop is just Jian Xin Chinese School. The house is near the school. It is about 25 square metres. In the bedroom, there is a bed, a sofa standing against the wall and a table near the window. You may find a light on the table and a chair next to it. There are two other rooms connecting the bedroom. The left one is a bathroom and the right one is a kitchen. So you may cook by yourself. The rent for the house is 500 yuan per month.
Hope you’ll enjoy staying here!
Yours,
Li Hua
亲爱的鲍，
我很高兴你要来学中文。我已经找到你在我们学校附近的一所房子。我想告诉你一些关于它的事。
你可能会得到关于No.ll巴士曹芳街，下一站就是建新中文学校。这房子离学校很近。大约25平方米。在卧室里有一张床，一张靠窗的沙发和一张靠窗的桌子。你可以在桌子上找到一个灯，在它旁边有一把椅子。有另外两个房间连接的卧室。左边的是一间浴室，右边的是厨房。所以你可以自己做饭。这房子的租金是每月500元。
希望你会喜欢呆在这里！
你的，
李华
