说明文不是说明书。它是集知识性与趣味性于一体的文章。如果按照说明书的方式去写,像开中药房一样,什么1,2,3,4,A,B,C,D都用上,即使把你要表达的对象描述的一清二楚,看的人也未必有耐心去看。如果能把说明文当成记叙文来写,你文章可读性就大大增加了。记叙文有一个叙的问题,那么说明文也要有序。有了它,你的文章才不会乱。安排好顺序,先写什么,后写什么,什么地方祥写,什么地方略写,心里要有底。该突出要表现的部分,你可以大肆渲染,发挥你的想像力,只要不偏离事物的本性就行。例如你写猫头鹰的视力,写它在白天对周围的事物是视而不见,而晚上却对一切活动的物体明察秋毫,甚至可以看到几百米外藏在草丛中的田鼠。通过这样的对比,夸张的手法,使读文章的人一下子对猫头鹰的视力有了深刻的了解。
一篇有一个好的开头很重要,说明文的不像记叙文那样,有感人的故事情节,因此说明文的开头就更要精雕细琢了。你可以把要表述的精彩部分提出来作为噱头,像写猕猴桃可以这样开头:在所有水果中,猕猴桃的VC的含量是应该是最高的,达到每100克鲜果中为60毫克,被誉为水果界中的奇异王果。为了激起读者兴趣,引入传说,故事不是不可以的。例如写臭豆腐可以这样开头:臭豆腐闻着臭,吃着香,这大家都知道。说到它的臭和香,这里边还有一个有趣故事,从前起一个标新立异的'题目,也很关键,例如有写荔枝《南州六月荔枝丹》,就把荔枝的生长地域,成熟季节和外形颜色包含在了题目里。
有了好的开头,更要有精彩的内容。一定要抓住事物的重点来写,不要主次不分。描述时,可以加入一些感情因素,干巴巴的数字会使文章读起来味同嚼蜡,失去了趣味性。如我们要描写荔枝的果肉时,不妨这样写:剥开那暗红色的疙疙瘩瘩的外衣,露出她那雪白的皮肤,哇,好可爱呀,她有雪的白,玉的润。忍不住含到口里,她调皮地就像QQ糖一样,在嘴里跳来跳去,她那甜美的体香使你陶醉。
说明文的结尾和其它题材的文章一样,用一两句话总结一下,使你的文章前后有个照应,起到扣题的作用。
情感是人在社会活动中对客观事物所持态度的体验。丰富而健康的情感是人们精神生活得以高度发展的必要条件。尤其情感对孩子智慧的发展、德性的养成,以及整个人的成长,是阳光,是甘露。如果没有健康的情感就没有完美的童心。但是,儿童的情感生活并不完全是自发的。儿童心理学告诉我们,幼儿期是萌发各种情感的重要时期。诚如郭沫若先生所说:“人的根本改造应当从儿童的感情教育,美的教育入手。”所以,我们抓住传统节日教育的核心意义,把握要点进行价值遴选,找准和突出传统节日文化中的精华,然后设计活动,使幼儿在传统节日活动中健康情感得到发展。我们利用“春节、元宵节、清明节、端午节、中秋节、重阳节、冬至节”这些中华传统民俗节日,挖掘其中蕴涵的优良品德教育资源,对幼儿进行传统节日启蒙教育,增强幼儿对传统节日的兴趣,让其初步了解我国传统民俗节日。培养幼儿敬老、友爱、善良、勤劳、勇敢等健康情感与品德。
When I was a freshman in college I watched the film Gua Sha Treatment for the first time, now I am a junior student and I come back to review the movie from a multicultural aspect, I have many different feelings after watching the film again.
At the beginning of the film, XuDatong is given an award and later he delivers a speech. What makes me impressed most is in his speech he says “one day I will become one of you, a truly successful American, today this award proved that America is a true land of opportunity and I am the living proof of that.” At that moment Xu thinks he has realized his American Dream totally with his lovingly wife and adorable son. However, I think it is ironical that to make a speech like that and I assume it is made on purpose to hind a clue for the story's development. How many non—American people have such a beautiful American dream? One of my classmate studies in American now and before he went aboard he told me his American dream is he can stand at the top of the New York. To be honest, I also dream that one day I can get the Green Card living there happily and successfully maybe working at the Wall Street. When Xu gets the award he thinks he entirely melted in the melting pot neglecting the multicultural obstruct, later the plot goes against the way he thinks. And later Quinlan asked Xu'why you be the scapegoat of your father?' Xu answers 'because he is Chinese.' Then maybe Xu knows that there is always a wide gap between Chinese and American cultures.
The second scene is Xu hit his son Denis because Denis hit the son of xu's boss, at the middle of the film xu tells his boss that he hit his own son is only to show his respect to his boss John Quinlan, that time Quinlan feels puzzled “what a Chinese logic”,yes, American can never understand such a logic full of Chinese characteristic, because they respect everyone including the children, they won't beat a child to please the boss, and there is no such a conception of degree between employee and employer, they feel everyone is equal, which is quite different from china.
Connected to the second scene, the third difference I want to analyze is the care for the children. In America, people pay more attention to the right of children which can be seen from the law—leaving children alone at home is illegal, while in China it is so common that almost everyone may experience such loneliness. And Children Welfare Agency does work in America which shows the importance Americans attach to children's right. What's more, I remember a line 'No one won the case, especially the child.' In my opinion, it also manifests the universal concern from the American public to the children.
The fourth aspect is following the procedure, in the film, more than there times, the people focus on the rule, the law, the procedure. At the Christmas Eve Xu wants to return back to his home pretending as a Santa Claus, what a pity, the security recognizes him and persuades 'you are always a good tenement, never causes troubles for me.' And another scene is at the end of the film , the judge says 'I have to follow the procedure.' However, in China people always have to ask for a favor to do something, and later you have to pay back the favor,for myself, I prefer the American style, strict to the procedure.
The fifth and the last point is the humors, Quinlan says 'you can't fall, your health security is the company paid.' 'Datong, welcome home, maybe next time, you can come from the front door.' 'dady, why you come from the window' ' because we don't have a chimney.' I really adore this distinguished American humor, especially in dangerous situations, which is quite rare in China.
That's my whole reaction to Gua Sha Treatment.
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