名师推荐中考英语作文书(初中英语作文书推荐10本)

名师推荐中考英语作文书(初中英语作文书推荐10本)

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名师推荐中考英语作文书(初中英语作文书推荐10本)

名师推荐中考英语作文书【一】

I was born in a beautiful town with high mountains around it.The mountains are covered with all kinds of green bamboo.Through the town runs a small stream.It’s said that a new railway is going to be built to the east of the town and a bamboo factory to the west.All the children of the school age can go to school.If anyone is ill,he can go to see the doctor in the newly-built hospital.People in the town are hard-working and never take the backwardness lying down.Though they are having a richer and better life,they are not satisfied with what they have got.They are working hard to build their town into a modern one.

名师推荐中考英语作文书【二】

Last Sunday, Jim went out to fly a kite. The kite flew highly in the sky. Jim ran with it happily.

Suddenly the line was broken and the kite flew away. Soon it disappeared. Where was it?

Jim had no idea. So he had to run here and there to look for the kite. At last he saw it on the top of the tree. He tried to get it down. But he couldn’t. He felt sad.

名师推荐中考英语作文书【三】

1。 头绪分明,脉络清楚

写好记叙文,首先要头绪分明,脉络清楚,明确文章要求写什么。要对所写的事件或人物进行分析,弄清事件发生、发展一直到结束的整个过程,然后再收集选取素材。这些素材都应该跟上述五个“ W ”和一个“ H ”有关。尽管不是每篇记叙文里都必须包括这些“ W ”和“ H ”,但动笔之前,围绕五个“ W ”和“ H ”进行构思是必不可少的。

2。 突出中心,详略得当

在文章的框架确定后,对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的。选材要注意取舍,应该从表现文章主题的需要出发,分清主次,定好详略。要突出重点,详写细述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节,略写粗述那么非关键的次要情节。面面俱到反而使情节罗列化,使人不得要领。这一点是写好记叙文要解决的一个基本问题,也需要一定的技巧。如:

One night a man came to our house and told me, "There is a family with eight children。 They have not eaten for days。" I took some food with me and went。

When I finally came to that family, I saw the faces of those little children disfigured (破坏外貌) by hunger。 There was no sorrow or sadness in their faces, just the deep pain of hunger。

I gave the rice to the mother。 She divided the rice in two, and went out, carrying half the rice。 When she came back, I asked her, "Where did you go?" she gave me this simple answer, "To my neighbors — they are hungry also!"

3。 用活语言,准确生动

记叙文要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事、物加以叙述。一篇好的记叙文的语言既要准确、生动,又要表现力强,这样才能把人、事描写得具体生动,其可读性才强。试比较下面一篇例文修改的前后效果。

原文:

One day Xiaoqiang was wandering away。 He was soon lost among people and traffic。 He could not find the way back home and started crying。 Just then, two young students who were passing by found him standing alone in front of a shop and crying。 They went up to Xiaoqiang and asked him what had happened。 Xiaoqiang told them how he got lost and where he lived。 The two students decided to take him home。 Mother was pleased to see Xiaoqiang come back safe and sound。 She invited the two students into the house and gave them some money, but they didn't take it。 She served them with tea but they left。

修改后:

The other day, five-year-old Xiaoqiang left home alone and wandered happily in the street。 After some time, he felt hungry so he wanted to go back home。 But he found he was lost among the crowded people and heavy traffic。 When he could not find the way home, he started and crying。 Just then, two young students who were passing by from school found him sanding crying in front of a shop。 They immediately went up to him。

"Little boy, why are you standing here crying?" they asked。

"I want Mom, I go home。" said the boy, still crying。

"Don't worry, we'll send you home。"

And they spent the next two hours looking for the boy's house。 With the help of a policeman, they finally found it。

When the worried mother saw her son come back safe and sound, she was so thankful and she invited the students into her house。 Gratefully, she offered them some money, saying it was a way to express her thanks, but the young students firmly refused it and left without even a cup of tea。

名师推荐中考英语作文书【四】

导入:

第1段:Some people hold the opinion that A is superior to B in many ways. Others, however, argue that B is much better. Personally, I would prefer A because I think A has more advantages.

正文:

第2段:There are many reasons why I prefer A. The main reason is that ... Another reason is that...(赞同A的原因

第3段: Of course, B also has advantages to some extent... (列出1~2个B的优势

结论:

第4段: But if all these factors are considered, A is much better than B. From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that ...(得出结论 オ

名师推荐中考英语作文书【五】

导入:

第1段:提出一种现象或某个决定作为议论的话题

As a student, I am strongly in favour of the decision. (亮明自己的观点是赞成还是反对

The reasons for this may be listed as follows. (过渡句,承上启下

正文:

第2段:First of all... Secondly... Besides...(列出2~3个赞成或反对的`理由

结论:

第3段:In conclusion, I believe that... (照应第1段,构成"总—分—总"结构

名师推荐中考英语作文书【六】

1。 叙述的人称

英语的记叙文一般是以第一或第三人称的角度来叙述的。用第一称表示的是由叙述者亲眼所见、亲耳所闻的经历。它的优点在于能把故事的情节通过“我”来传达给读者,使人到真实可信,如身临其境。如:

The other day, I was driving along the street。 Suddenly, a car lost its control and ran directly towards me fast。 I was so frightened that I quickly turned to the left side。 But it was too late。 The car hit my bike and I fell off it。

用第三人称叙述,优点在于叙述者不受“我”活动范围以内的人和事物的限制,而是通过作者与读者之外的第三者,直接把故事中的情节展现在读者面前,文章的客观性很强。如:

Little Tom was going to school with an umbrella, for it was raining hard。 On the way, he saw an old woman walking in the rain with nothing to cover。 Tom went up to the old woman and wanted to share the umbrella with her, but he was too short。 What could he do? Then he had a good idea。

2。 动词的时态

在记叙文中,记和叙都离不开动词。所以动词出现率最高,且富于变化。记叙文中用得最多的是动词的过去的',这是英语记叙文区别于汉语记叙文的关键之处。英语写作的优美之处就在于这些动词时态的变化,正是这一点才使得所记、所叙有鲜活的动态感、鲜明的层次感和立体感。

3。 叙述的顺序

记叙一件事要有一定的顺序。无论是顺叙、倒叙、插叙还是补叙,都要让读者能弄清事情的来龙去脉。顺叙最容易操作,较容易给读者提供有关事情的空间和时间线索。但这种方法也容易使文章显得平铺直叙,读起来平淡乏味。倒叙、插叙、补叙等叙述方法能有效地提高文章的结构效果,让所叙之事跌宕起伏,使读者在阅读时思维产生较大的跳跃,从而为文章所吸引,深入其中。但这些方法如果使用不当,则容易弄巧成拙,使文章结构散乱,头绪不清,让读者不知所云。

4。 叙述的过渡

过渡在上下文中起着承上启下、融会贯通的作用。过渡往往用在地点转移或时间、事件转换以及由概括说明到具体叙述时。如:

In my summer holidays, I did a lot of things。 Apart form doing my homework, reading an English novel, watching TV and doing some housework, I went on a trip to Qingdao。 It is really a beautiful city。 There are many places of interest to see。 But what impressed me most was the sunrise。

The next morning I got up early。 I was very happy because it was a fine day。 By the time I got to the beach, the clouds on the horizon were turning red。 In a little while, a small part of the sun was gradually appearing。 The sun was very red, not shining。 It rose slowly。 At last it broke through the red clouds and jumped above the sea, just like a deep-red ball。 At the same time the clouds and the sea water became red and bright。

What a moving and unforgettable scene!

5。 叙述与对话

引用故事情节中主要人物的对话是记叙文提高表现力的一种好方法。适当地用直接引语代替间接的主观叙述,可以客观生动地反映人物的性格、品质和心理状态,使记叙生动、有趣,使文章内容更加充实、具体。试比较下面两段的叙述效果:

I was in the kitchen, and I was cooking something。 Suddenly I heard a loud noise from the front。 I thought maybe someone was knocking the door。 I asked who it was but I heard no reply。 After a while I saw my cat running across the parlor。 I realized it was the cat。 I felt released。

这本来应是一段故事性很强的文字,但经作者这么一写,就不那么吸引人了。原因是文中用的都是叙述模式,没有人物语言,把“悬念”给冲淡了。可作如下调整:

I was in the kitchen cooking something。 "Crash!" a loud noise came from the front。 Thinking someone was knocking at the door, I asked, "Who?" No reply。 After a while, I saw my cat running across the parlor。 "It's you。" I said, quite released。

名师推荐中考英语作文书【七】

导入:

第1段:提出一种现象或某种困难作为议论的话题

正文:

第2段:Many ways can help to solve this serious problem, but the following may be most effective. First of all... Another way to solve the problem is ... Finally...(列出2~3个解决此类问题的办法

结论:

第3段:These are not the best but the only two/ three measures we can take. But it should be noted that we should take action to...(强调解决此类问题的根本方法

名师推荐中考英语作文书【八】

女儿在上课,我就翻开了这本书,第一篇是李吉林老师的《我,长大的儿童》,一位即将古稀之年的老人用一颗童心讲述了她的故事,我被深深吸引住了,一口气读了下去,43位名师的成长故事与他们的教育教学理念,感受着他们一个个平凡而又不平凡的故事,品味着大师们朴实而又深刻的教育箴言,分享着大师们独特的教育智慧,仿佛如沐春风,心灵受到了洗礼。

粗略地走马观花读过一遍之后,我意犹未尽,又第二次翻开了这本书,这一次,我利用空余时间,细细的品味品读,我再一次为这些杰出的人民教育家而折服。

之所以他们能成为名师,他们是那样热爱生活,热爱自己的教育事业,李吉林老师说过,“老师的工作是没有现成的公式可套的,我没有用教师的尊严压服他们,而是用爱,用真挚的爱去沟通,去融合他们。”

李老师用自己的爱赢得了学生的爱,也赢得了做为一个老师的快乐。张化万老师把学生当成自己的一面镜子,说学生是人生最好的镜子,在作为一个优秀教研员的同时,他感谢学生,学员,课堂上让他出丑,他觉得这是学生在成就他,这是学生对他的爱,正是由于他这份对学生宽容的爱,成就他以后的成功。林润生老师在条件最艰苦的地方一待就是11年,把他所有的热情和心洒在了这个地方,当实验小学向他伸出橄榄枝时,他毅然选择条件相对较差的母校,他的爱是那么平凡而又那么无私。

读到这个故事,我的心也渐渐平静下来,对现实的不满,对孩子学不会而埋怨让我感到惭愧。爱多么简单的字眼,要做到是多么的不容易,什么时候我也能象他们一样,从教几十年从没对孩子发过火生过气,读了《名师人生》,我懂得爱是世界上最幸福的事。只有爱自己的工作,爱自己的学生才能成为一个合格的老师。

书籍是人类最好的朋友,唐江澎老师把学习当作生命存在的方式。为了订阅书刊、购买图书,财政状况常常危及衣食。程红兵老师更是永远保持“书生本色”,读大学时,家里给的零用钱几乎全部捐给了书店;工作后,逛书店仍然是他的嗜好,永远禁不住好书的诱惑,家里堆满了书。最让我感动的是尤屹峰老师把读书当作是给“贫的大脑补”,刚开始工作,他从自己每月31元的工资里拿出大部分订阅了十几种报刊杂志;他给自己规定任务:把自己当作真正的学生,一边教学,一边和学生一起学习、成长,凡是要求学生读的书自己首先读,要求学生背的文章自己首先背。

为了读书,他常常把饭烧糊了,有时甚至将锅底烧漏了,为了读书,别人再休息的时候他在读书,每天只睡4、5个小时,为了读书,农忙时,累的都怕不起来,他躺在田头看书……于永正、贾志敏、洪宗礼……一个个熟悉的名字,没有哪一个不是酷爱读书的,为了多读书,他们三更灯火五更眠,他们废寝忘食无闲思。正因为不倦的学习,他们积累了巨大的'人生财富,正因为有了深厚的文化底蕴,他们从事教书育人的工作才如此得心应手。

每每读到这些特级教师好读书,乐以忘忧的故事,我为我开始慢待这本书而羞愧,订了那么多的书,我有几次是那样细细品读,书柜中的书有的甚至忘了名字。说实话,一些教育专着我看着就头疼,既然不能消化这些书,那么就读轻松有益的好书吧。读了《名师人生》,知道许多名师也是在先天不足的情况下通过读书成长起来的,我告诫自己要有计划的读,慢慢地来接受一些教育专着,毕竟那些那些书是教育工作者最好的营养品。

老师不仅仅是一位老师,还有着多重身份,只用一只眼睛看世界是远远不够的,俗话说要给学生一杯水,必须自己要有一桶水。名师们不仅仅局限在教育教学上,在工作的8小时之外,丰富自己的业余生活,陶冶自己的情操。《名师人生》中有那么多多才多艺的老师,张兴华老师除了教好数学,他热爱播音和歌唱,把他的特长带入到教学中,赢得学生更多的喜爱和爱戴。

华应龙老师不仅是教学的好手,也是打篮球的高手,他在篮球运动中取得了学生的信任,顺利的改变了问题学生,也给了他强健的体魄,有了更多的精力投入在工作上。尤屹峰老师更是教了数学,语文,还教了小学所有的课程,他们的博学多才也为自己的教育事业增光添彩。一个多才多艺的老师更能赢得学生的喜爱和尊重。回想自己,刚从师范毕业,画画和唱歌是我的爱好和特长,可工作后,家里的画笔一支支生锈,颜料一盒盒干掉,不知多久没碰过了。一有活动,需要一展身手的时候,总是盼着美术老师音乐老师来帮忙,从孩子口中听到他们有多崇拜美术老师,有多喜欢音乐老师不免有些酸楚。孩子们喜欢的不是一个只会教书的老师。

读了《名师人生》,我品味着人生真谛,丰富了教育智慧,坚定了教育理想和信念,获得了前进的方向和力量。在以后的教育教学工作中,我会更加坚定自己教书育人的步伐,做到勤学习,乐探索,不断用名师的人格魅力感染我的工作热情;用名师的智慧人生丰富我的教学艺术;用名师的执着奋斗装点我的成长历程。

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