咸阳2023中考英语作文【一】
Last Sunday, Jim went out to fly a kite. The kite flew highly in the sky. Jim ran with it happily.
Suddenly the line was broken and the kite flew away. Soon it disappeared. Where was it?
Jim had no idea. So he had to run here and there to look for the kite. At last he saw it on the top of the tree. He tried to get it down. But he couldn’t. He felt sad.
咸阳2023中考英语作文【二】
导入：
第1段：Recently we’ve had a discussion about whether we should... (导入话题
Our opinions are divided on this topic.(观点有分歧
正文：
第2段：Most of the students are in favour of it.(正方观点
Here are the reasons. First... Second... Finally...(列出2~3个赞成的理由
第3段：However, the others are strongly against it. (反方观点
Their reasons are as follows. In the first place... What’s more... In addition...(列出2~3个反对的理由
结论：
第4段：Personally speaking, the advantages overweigh the disadvantages, for it will do us more harm than good, so I support it.(个人观点 オ
咸阳2023中考英语作文【三】
1。 头绪分明，脉络清楚
写好记叙文，首先要头绪分明，脉络清楚，明确文章要求写什么。要对所写的事件或人物进行分析，弄清事件发生、发展一直到结束的整个过程，然后再收集选取素材。这些素材都应该跟上述五个“ W ”和一个“ H ”有关。尽管不是每篇记叙文里都必须包括这些“ W ”和“ H ”，但动笔之前，围绕五个“ W ”和“ H ”进行构思是必不可少的。
2。 突出中心，详略得当
在文章的框架确定后，对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的。选材要注意取舍，应该从表现文章主题的需要出发，分清主次，定好详略。要突出重点，详写细述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节，略写粗述那么非关键的次要情节。面面俱到反而使情节罗列化，使人不得要领。这一点是写好记叙文要解决的一个基本问题，也需要一定的技巧。如：
One night a man came to our house and told me， "There is a family with eight children。 They have not eaten for days。" I took some food with me and went。
When I finally came to that family， I saw the faces of those little children disfigured （破坏外貌） by hunger。 There was no sorrow or sadness in their faces， just the deep pain of hunger。
I gave the rice to the mother。 She divided the rice in two， and went out， carrying half the rice。 When she came back， I asked her， "Where did you go?" she gave me this simple answer， "To my neighbors — they are hungry also!"
3。 用活语言，准确生动
记叙文要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事、物加以叙述。一篇好的记叙文的语言既要准确、生动，又要表现力强，这样才能把人、事描写得具体生动，其可读性才强。试比较下面一篇例文修改的前后效果。
原文：
One day Xiaoqiang was wandering away。 He was soon lost among people and traffic。 He could not find the way back home and started crying。 Just then， two young students who were passing by found him standing alone in front of a shop and crying。 They went up to Xiaoqiang and asked him what had happened。 Xiaoqiang told them how he got lost and where he lived。 The two students decided to take him home。 Mother was pleased to see Xiaoqiang come back safe and sound。 She invited the two students into the house and gave them some money， but they didn＇t take it。 She served them with tea but they left。
修改后：
The other day， five-year-old Xiaoqiang left home alone and wandered happily in the street。 After some time， he felt hungry so he wanted to go back home。 But he found he was lost among the crowded people and heavy traffic。 When he could not find the way home， he started and crying。 Just then， two young students who were passing by from school found him sanding crying in front of a shop。 They immediately went up to him。
"Little boy， why are you standing here crying?" they asked。
"I want Mom， I go home。" said the boy， still crying。
"Don＇t worry， we＇ll send you home。"
And they spent the next two hours looking for the boy＇s house。 With the help of a policeman， they finally found it。
When the worried mother saw her son come back safe and sound， she was so thankful and she invited the students into her house。 Gratefully， she offered them some money， saying it was a way to express her thanks， but the young students firmly refused it and left without even a cup of tea。
咸阳2023中考英语作文【四】
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第1段：提出一种现象或某个决定作为议论的话题
As a student, I am strongly in favour of the decision. (亮明自己的观点是赞成还是反对
The reasons for this may be listed as follows. (过渡句，承上启下
正文：
第2段：First of all... Secondly... Besides...(列出2~3个赞成或反对的`理由
结论：
第3段：In conclusion, I believe that... (照应第1段，构成"总—分—总"结构
咸阳2023中考英语作文【五】
“渭河之水向东流”。渭河，是陕西省境内的一条大河，全长818公里，是我国黄河的一个最大支流，更是陕西人民的母亲河
在中华五千年的文明史中，曾经有一千多年，全国的政治、经济、文化中心就在渭河流域。渭河孕育了无数优秀的中华儿女。
记得小时候，每次坐车经过新世纪桥时，总能看到那一条快活的河，不停的向前奔流，总能听到她欢快的歌唱的声音。太阳公公出来了，向着她微笑；月亮姐姐出来了，向着她舞蹈。她十分快乐的奔腾着，在她的眼里，好像世界上所有的东西都向她一样快乐。她不断的向她沿途所遇到的东西打招呼，看！那激起的浪花好像是在说：“你好！你好！”
春天，渭河呈现出一派美不胜收的景象，看！那一片片小巧玲珑的野花在岸边绽放，它们虽然没有玫瑰的艳丽，没有牡丹的富贵，没有百合的芳香，但它们却努力用自己的色彩与姿态装点了大地。这时的渭河畔停歇下来，波光粼粼，像一带明镜，映出两岸的野花，也映出蓝天白云……好一幅美丽的春景图！
夏天，艳阳炙烤着大地。
秋天，渭河的花草开始枯黄。远处的河岸上长着一丛丛苍绿的`芦苇，好似身着绿裙起舞的少女。天空偶尔飞过几只南去的大雁，芦苇丛中不时传来野鸭的叫声。夜晚，城市的灯光射在河面，与渭河的流水交相辉映，流光溢彩，使人流连忘返。河水“哗哗”的流着，好似万马奔腾，那弘壮的气势，使两岸的花草树木也随之摆动。
冬天，渭河上结了一层厚厚的冰，河岸上也是银装素裹，好一个凝然不动的白色世界！只有那轻盈的雪花纷纷扬扬地舞动着，带来几分活力。人们有的在河面上滑冰，有的在打雪仗，欢声笑语不断。
以前，我和妈妈爸爸经常一起来到渭河边散步，她看见我们来了，总是拍打着浪花，好像在和我们打招呼。她一会拍拍岸边的小石子，一会儿亲亲那刚探出头来的小草，一会儿将河面上那些飘浮的树叶打个转，一会儿又去追赶她的小鱼、小虾。她是多么调皮呀！
咸阳2023中考英语作文【六】
有一次我和家人去咸阳，途经渭河，我还以为是一条黑河呢；又去过渭河和泾河的交汇处，但“泾渭分明”已难见其踪。渭河本身经过上游的泥土沉积和污染，已经变得浑浊不堪，如果我们再对她进行污染，她能给我们分泌出甘甜的乳汁吗？
渭河是陕西人民的财富，孕育生命的摇篮，可现在，她正在遭受狂风暴雨的袭击，水土流失，化工厂污水，居民生活排水已经使她强健的身体虚弱了，母亲河会被贪图眼前利益的后代扼窒息!该是我们醒悟的时候了，看一看被自己伤害的母亲吧？遍体鳞伤的她，终于暴躁起来了!2003年洪峰达到5100立方米/秒，淹没了农田，使人们受到巨大损失，这不单是天气原因，最直接的还是因为人们肆意排污，抬高了河床造成的!水为生命之源，江河，造就一代生命，但当河流泛滥时，将会危害到人类的生命。人们应该从现在起，以实际行动拯救渭河，保护人类的生存环境。
新一代的少年们要行动起来，保护环境，从我做起，从现在做起，塑造一个全新的生命摇篮!
