撩一丝长发,轻揽簪钗,镜中独见形容憔悴,故颜不再。望槛外,长波千里,远帆渐进,独不见君归,无言垂泪,斑斑灼青衫。——题记
曾忆昔,相顾江南,烟柳漫堤。燕影莺语,华草长,行人步于溪涧寻清凉之处,溪水潺?,偶见游鱼穿梭其间,而道旁翠竹,清风瑟瑟,影映石上,微漾,进而消失无踪,搔首喟己之惑,实为影也。愈入而日光昏暗,时有余光穿涧而下,照丛间,而虫蚁??不可见。野芳发,见深谷幽兰、百合于其间,气惠而随风渐释。复行,则清泉出于山隙,汩汩澈澈,俯而饮之,甘冽似醇浆玉液。其上,一亭,其角檐似翼起,拾级而上,见一白衣女子独倚危栏,掩面而泣,啜啜有声,不过须臾,襟衫湿矣。稍停,不得其解,故上前而问之,然其惟低眉不语,啜泣不止。
余欲劝止而无方,故坐于亭下长阶之处,思这优雅之境处此深涧,虽有恬然之趣、旷世之味,然无赏之者,荣于深涧,枯于深涧,亦未免孤独。转而思,其所以荣于此经年而无扰之者,或为此造化之地所以成之,不免叹息。物存于世,之于人,于山川树木,虫鱼鸟兽,往往难得其完满,必有缺损,此虽无奈然实为自然之法则。
白衣女子闻吾喟而叹,亦异而问吾何所思,吾告之,其思而轻言语余,语罢,吾知其所以于此,无心赏景而掩面啜泣,实为相思致之。此女名曰如烟,旧时与一才俊相遇此景,良辰美景,才子佳人,不免心生情愫,二人相与步于涧中,不觉日暮西斜,故相约此间花开树荣为时相会,自此归去。不觉冬去春回,旧日之境依旧,独不见旧日之人,如烟不禁失落,故时时到此,徘徊其间或于亭中,犹不见心上之人,不觉至于今日。
来者不至,苦煞候者,此之谓也。唯能良言劝之,望其所思之人不日到此,二人便可相见,以解此相思之苦。
旧日之事,今思之犹有所感,故以纪之。
这类考生往往缺乏刨根究底的精神,总是在主旨周围绕圈子,不达中心。这也是中国考生的通病,看似八九不离十,却总也不愿把话点破,让考官怎能不又急又气。
在所有的扩展方式之中,因果推理法是最受用也是最透彻的方法。凡事先追溯到其原由,再扩展其结果,这是将主题阐述清晰、论述有力并且具有逻辑感的最佳手段。例如在“出国留学利弊”这一题目之前,若考生单纯说“有可能会使青少年学坏”,难免缺乏说服力,但若紧接着扩展“因为孩子高中毕业后思想上还不成熟,若认识不好的朋友会难以抵抗社会上不好的诱惑”,那么此论点一定会让考官眉头舒展,点头认同。由此可见,善用此推理法会让议论文如虎添翼,事半功倍。
引出原因的表达方式主要有:Because../Since.../As....
引出结果的表达方式主要有:so.../Therefore,.../Consequently,.../Accordingly,... /As a result,.../In this way,.../result in.../Thanks to.../Due to.../ Owing to..
【写作真题】Aircrafts have been increasingly used to transport fruits and vegetables to some countries where such plants hardly grow or ate out of season. Some people consider it a good trend, but some people oppose it. Discuss.
【名师献计】It is important to note that imports are now increasingly affordable to the general population. Thanks to the rapid development of the freight transport industry, air travel has become an economical mode of transport, resulting in the subsequent decrease in the cost of importing. Meanwhile, technical advance in the food processing industry has made it much easier to preserve fresh fruits and vegetables over a long-haul air flight. Because of the wide availability of imported crops, there are more varieties...
2. Many schools demand the students wear uniforms. Some people think that such a practice can undermine their personality and individuality. What is your opinion?
3. Some people believe that pet animals such as cats and dogs cannot be kept in the cities, especially in busy modern cities. Do you agree or disagree?
4. Nowadays, teenagers cause a lot of social problems due to lack of discipline. Some people think that parents should spend more time staying with their children. Do you agree or disagree?
5. Nowadays, many children have their part-time jobs. Some people say that doing part-time jobs is useful, but others argue that children should enjoy their childhood. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
6. Some people think if students want to learn a foreign language, it is advisable for them to learn it in the native countries where the language is actually spoken. Whats your opinion? Give your reasons.
7. In some countries, there are women taking the positions of police officers, while some people believe that women are not suitable to work in the police force. DO you agree or disagree? Write your reasons and give examples in your experience.
此类例子往往缺乏客观性和说服力,由于第一人称的局限导致所叙述事件难免“鸡毛蒜皮”。要明白,个人不代表整体。
例:I keep my dog to avoid my loneliness and I find a lot of fun.
这样的例子让人犹如在看记叙文,和议论文很不搭调。
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