小学五年级英语作文描写山水【一】
我居住的这一片山水，他没有北国山峰的粗犷与黄河水的壮阔，然而，她却以独特的秀美与温柔，久久盘旋于我的心里。我慢慢的长大，而那一片山水也在慢慢的退去旧影，焕发出了新时代的气息。
那一片山，是我童年最好的回忆。记得山上的松林，我曾经在那里，有过欢声与笑语。因一枚松子而欢呼，为一个鸟巢而雀跃;灌木丛中，穿梭着我的身影。翻过山岗丘陵，有一座座质朴的村镇，炊烟袅袅，亲抚着远处那一片山陵，远处的山，近处的村庄宛如一幅山村水墨画。小村镇蕴藏无穷的生机。 那一片水，是我童年最珍贵的记忆。在水的怀抱里，我嬉戏与玩闹，而她总用湿软的大手轻轻的抚摩着我的脸颊，洗涤一天身上的尘迹，轻轻的拂去我身体的疲倦。这水哺育的鱼儿最为鲜美，青鱼、甲鱼、鳜鱼、刀鱼、灰坨鱼等是这里最令人回味的菜肴。这里的夏天犹如诗人笔下的江枫渔头，姑苏夜凉，水里带着柔风，轻轻地拥你入睡。
随着时间的流逝，那山发生了改变。山上的灌木被成排的果树取代，没了我昔日穿梭的身影，有的是，那树上结成的金灿灿的梨子，和我在其中忙碌的'脚步与脸上丰收的喜悦。山下，没有了茅屋，残墙，耸立的是一栋栋的崭新的两层砖瓦房，听妈妈说起，山的改变源于城镇的发展。 山变了，水也随之改变。没有了木橹摇曳的倒影，有的是穿梭于河面机帆船的身影，没有了船浆击水的音符，有是是来往于水间机器声的轰鸣;没有了江边蜿延的小路，有的是宽敞伸向延伸于江边的沿江大道------爸爸说：这水的改变也源于我们城镇的发展。
山的改变，水的改变，这源于我们城镇的发展。如今，我们这座沅陵古城，已经焕发了她美丽的青春，我更深深的感受到了它的发展与变化：曾经河道两岸的木房都新建成了一排排的楼房，泥泞的沅江小路，变成了宽敞的大道，沅江岸上岸柳成行，着上了绿装，拂动她优美的身姿在沅江里荡漾;整齐的路灯，闪耀着明亮的眼睛。走在人行道的两旁，汽车来来往往在黑色的油路上穿梭;红绿灯的闪烁，点亮这生命的航灯。行行绿化带的两边，矗立着一排排高楼大厦，商品房、商业房鳞次栉比，或散步与公园、或跳舞与广场、或购物欲超市，人们的心底的感觉到了一种欣喜。 信息时代进入了这座古城，昔日的面容已成为了记忆，沅陵，正以崭新的容貌展现在世人面前
小学五年级英语作文描写山水【二】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：
互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：
小学五年级英语作文描写山水【三】
Computer is a very useful machine. Some of them are big, but some of them are very small .Many people like playing computer. Computer has many functions, so that people can do a lot of things by computer, like watching movies, listening to the music or playing games. It can make our lives very colorful and convenient. Various people can make good use of computer. Children can use computer to learn and play games. Parents can use computers to work. I think computer is a kind of wonderful and interesting machine, so I like computer very much.
电脑是一种很有用的机器。有的电脑很大，但是有的'很小。很多人喜欢玩电脑。电脑有很多功能，人们可以i用电脑做很多事情，比如说看电影，听音乐或者玩游戏。它可以使我们的生活充满色彩和便利。各种各样的人都可以好好利用电脑。小孩子可以用电脑来学习和玩游戏。父母可以用电脑来工作。我认为电脑是一种神奇有趣的机器，所以我很喜欢电脑。
小学五年级英语作文描写山水【四】
桂林漓江的水很清很清，清的可以看见水底青褐色的石头。水把两岸高高的山和绿绿的树倒映在水中，坐船游览漓江，船就像在山尖上行走，漂亮极了。
桂林的山更是特别，奇峰怪石，千姿百态。山里面有一个岩洞，叫“芦笛岩”。一走进去，式样不同，奇形怪状岩石，倒挂在洞顶。抬头往上看。有的像蘑菇，有的像雄狮，有的像乌龟，还有的像慈祥的老人……神态各异。沿着潮湿的石阶往洞里走，两旁的石岩犹如一幅幅壁画挂在两旁，栩栩如生。洞里的景色更美了，一股清泉从石缝里冲出来，哗!哗声就像一首优美的乐曲。
泉水流到一个潭子里，清清的泉水就像一面明亮的镜子，把周围的景物隐隐约约地倒映在水中，就像童话中的仙境。
桂林到处有美丽的景色，数不胜数，吸引了许许多多的中外游客，难怪故人说：“桂林山水甲天下，阳朔山水甲桂林。”
我爱美丽的桂林。
