2023十二月英语四级作文真题【一】
Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先，提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段：提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段：正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段：摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次，提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性，连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity：段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛，也不可太具体，做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明，另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence：关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰，层层展开。
完整性(completeness：以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头，这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次，提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型：It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单，注意练习并接句的使用，会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as，如：
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头，句式简单，我们可以通过把since提前改变句式，如：
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后，提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法：millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论，辩论”的意思，而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.，相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略：使用最近所学的单词，如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后，我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文，以供参考：
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
2023十二月英语四级作文真题【二】
Dear my father and mother,
This letter is my inner feelings. I want to thank both of you for so many years’ care and help.
During my growth, you have made a lot of efforts and love for me. When I make a success, both of you are more excited than me, and support me to do better. Even though I have failed, you always share sorrow with me and encourage me not to give up. Especially, during my preparation for CET-4, the support from you is always everywhere. I have passed the exam successfully.
You love is so unselfish that I am deeply affected, so I will study hard to be a useful person and won’t make you disappointed. Anyway, I would like to express the deep gratitude to you.
With best wishes.
Sincerely yours,
Li Ming
2023十二月英语四级作文真题【三】
Dear all,
I am writing this letter to express my gratitude to my parents for teaching me to be positive and to be strong. “Educating the mind without educating the heart is no education at all.” is the opinion held by Aristotle. It is the experience of our forefathers, however, it is correct even today, including my parenting.
It is widely acknowledged that parenting, which can also be explained as family education, is of great significance in our character forming and manner acquiring. To be more detailed, setting good examples instead of just giving precepts is the greatest achievement of my parents. They not only taught me to think for the best and prepare for the worst; they taught me how. They not only told me the benefits of being strong in mind; they proved it. All those things require huge amount of time and work, but it’s worth it.
Without my parents’ contribution and education, I would never be who I am now. But most importantly, I would never be more gratitude to them than today.
Yours,
XXX
2023十二月英语四级作文真题【四】
Dear Mary,
You said in your letter that many of your classmates wore fashionableclothes, but you couldn\'t afford them so you felt very depressed. There are dif-ferent views on people\'s clothes. The followings are my ideas:
Firstly, you shouldn\'t put too much emphasis on physical appearance.
Remember that the most important task for you today is to concentrate on yourstudies. No matter what you wear, you will really look your best when youcome out first in your examinations.
Secondly, you should understand that it is a fine virtue to live in fru-gality. Just as a famous saying goes, Frugality is the mother of virtue.
Since your family can\'t provide you with enough money to buy fashionableclothes, it is all the more necessary for you to try to lighten the financialburden of your family. And you will find the virtue of frugality benefit youa lot in your future life.
I hope you understand what I mean. Hope you will take a positive attitudetowards life and will be happy again when you read my letter.
Yours,
Anne
2023十二月英语四级作文真题【五】
或许童话不喜欢喧嚣，不喜欢繁华，它只静静地呆在远离城市的角落，不需关注，不需影响，从北风后的第一场雪，那童话的大幕便开始拉开，在茫茫的天地间，一场场飞扬的或大或小的雪，开始铺垫着整个背景，慢条斯理，有条不紊，渲染着，铺陈着，天地间成了最广阔的舞台，让每个身处其间的人在不知觉间走进一个梦幻般的世界，懵然间，你才发现自己已经被包容进一个银装素裹的环境。
房子上、街道旁、森里里，都淹没在漫无边际的雪原当中。菜园里一根根竖起的木头上玉米椽子都被雪盖上了厚厚的绒衣，成了一个个白盔的武士，威武侍立，房檐下结着长长冰凌，如一把把倒挂的玉剑。院子里的雪堆成了一座松软的小山，有几只公鸡喜欢站在上面，在阳光下展示他们锦缎般的羽毛。大人们套上牛车，将雪扔到车上，然后赶着向村外走，车轮跟雪地接触，发出吱呀呀的声音，脆生生的。牛蹄子在雪地上留下深深的印痕，拉车的牛不时从鼻子里喷出一团团的白气，随后便拉长脖子发出低沉的哞哞声，在寂静的空气中盘旋，竟振落了路边杨树上的簌簌积雪，让人的脖子发出一阵阵的嗖嗖地凉。
我们这些孩子，丢下手头的作业，躲过母亲的视线，拖着自家的小爬犁，三五从群地走出胡同，汇聚在一起。顺着曲折的.雪路，牵着爬犁走上陡峭的山坡，分好前后，技术好的在前面把握好方向，年龄小并且胆小的坐到后面，相当于驾驶和乘客，驾驶爬犁主要是用脚，速度和平衡则需要用手，手脚的协调十分关键，否则容易人养车翻。戴好手套，一个手握一个木棍，除了保持平衡，有时向前撑可以加速，向后别可以减速。准备好后，如果地势平缓可以先推一阵做个加速度，然后迅速坐上，于是一段充满惊险和刺激的旅程就开始了，爬犁顺着曲折的弯道开始向下飞驰，耳边生了风，眼前的树木、田野开始迅速地扑到，再被甩到身后，整个爬犁如同在雪地上飞行，山顶看去原本矮小的事物，在视线里慢慢地清晰起来，在别人眼里，如同一个从天上疾驰下来的精灵。
带着飞溅的雪屑，我们一边喊叫着，一边还要控制好节奏，直道还好说，遇到弯道则需要高超的技术。太快则容易翻车，太慢则容易被别人反超，那感觉类似如今的F1，只不过雪地版的比试。技术好的时候，爬犁会漂移一段距离后继续向前，刮起一片雪浪，很是精彩，其中滋味简直是秒不可言的。爬犁会继续向前滑行，直到慢慢地停下，然后画上记号，看谁滑行的最远，这个时候才能看出谁是这次记录的创造者。
当然了，没有谁会服气，大家会重新再来一次。当然也不是每次都这么顺利，有时会因为控制的不得当，爬犁会因为转弯太急，漂移幅度过大，便会滑出赛道，抑或是因为遇到木棍和鼓包失去平衡而冲进路边的小沟中，当然了，有厚厚的棉衣和厚厚地雪地，没有人会受伤，最多用棉袄袖子蹭蹭鼻涕，然后继续前行。有的时候，大家也会把彼此的爬犁连起来，然后往下滑，如同一条长长的游龙，蜿蜒盘桓，孩子们的欢笑声此起彼伏，直到天黑才会牵着爬犁往回走，小脸虽冻的通红，但是兴致却很高。回家第一件事就是把爬犁放好，那就是孩子眼中的赤兔马，都是无比珍惜，平日里更是爱护有加。
当然了，乐趣不止这些，我们也会到冰封的小河上去砸冰窟窿，看里面的流水，并去抓里面的小虾。有的穿着自己做的冰鞋在上面滑行，也有用小药瓶和玻璃球做成冰嘎，用小鞭子快速抽动，于是冰嘎便在主人的指挥下，旋转前进。顺着冰封的小河往下游走，穿过灌木丛，越过小路，继续向下，在落差大的地方，会形成一个阶梯状的冰滑梯，那是我们孩子最爱的，垫着个木板、石片，就能可以往下划了，由于不好把握方向，于是我们打着转往下滑，于是天地便一起旋转起来，等到了不转的时候，基本是站都站不稳了，有的时候，我们连木板都不坐，不肖一会，屁股上便结了一层厚厚的冰壳，往往让大人们哭笑不得。顺着冰河继续向下，就是著名的松花江了，此时的松花江已经完全被冰封了，都厚达一米多，形成了一个天然的旱冰场，大自然的鬼斧神工往往出乎人们的想象，正如所说的：大河上下，损失滔滔。平滑的冰面上，覆着厚厚的雪，阳光一照闪闪发光，逼视得的你无法睁眼，两边的崖壁，此刻更现苍劲深沉。
风大的地方，雪被吹散了，露出了墨绿色的冰面，你可以看到黑黢黢的江水，这时会产生担心，偏偏从远处慢慢传来一声咔咔的沉闷声响，那感觉那声音仿佛从很远的地方直接奔到脚下，初次经历的人，不由地会胆怯，想拔腿往回跑，其实那是江水撞击冰面的声响，你大可放心，即使是汽车在上面行走都没有问题的。宽阔的江面上会有一串串的脚印，那是打渔人留下的，他们会通过一个个冰窟窿把网下到冰下的江水里，那时候感觉那是件很传奇的事。如果走累了，你可以到岸边休息，岸边都是拱起的大块冰块，晶莹透彻，那是人工冰冻达不到的效果，你还可以通过宽阔的冰封看见宝石般的颜色和质地，那是一种极为美丽传奇的色彩。顺着岸边走，运气好的话，你会遇到冰洞，里面是冰的世界，你无法形容你的感受，那简直就是一座天然的水晶宫。
沿着小路继续走，你会走进北方浓密的森林厚厚的雪早已这里造成了一座迷宫，矮灌木形成了各式各样的拱门、小伞、雪堡，高高的树木则形成了高大雪塔，除了松树，你还会看到碧绿地冬青，上面结着各色果实，才下来煮水泡手脚，可以驱冻伤。这时，你不必感到寂寞，雪地上有各种动物留下的脚印，像绽放的花朵，空气中不时传来风吹树木的嘎吱声，老人们说那是树木独有的语言，叨木冠子（就是啄木鸟）发出有节奏的梆梆梆。如果累了，你可以一躺，没膝的雪很快将你包裹着，冰凉，清新，等你站起身，不仅仅会留下人形，还会沾掉衣服上的灰尘，不必担心迷路，因为周围的小路总会曲径通幽、柳暗花明。运气好的时候，你会搭上进山拉烧柴的大爬犁，坐在上面，享受雪地飞驰的感觉，等你倦了，见到袅袅炊烟，那证明你到家了。那里有暖暖地火炕，热乎的大碴子，以及玉米面做的年火烧，吃饱了，你可以看朦胧的银河，闪烁的繁星，它们被雪搽的铮亮铮亮的，闪着幽幽的冷光，仿佛诉说着很多故事------
冬天的童话，童话的冬天，就那样静静地藏在那里，如果你想去，我很乐意告诉你，只是你去的时候不要吵醒它------
2023十二月英语四级作文真题【六】
Supposing I have seventy-two changes, I'd like to change into a big fire to make the World warm.
Supposing I have seventy-two changes, I'd like to change into a sturdy old pine to protect from wind and sand.
Supposing I have seventy-two changes, I'd like to change into a cup of tea to offer our teachers.
Supposing I have seventy-two changes, I'd like to change into a good medicine to make all patients healthy.
Supposing I have seventy-two changes, I'd like to change into a big building to let all the sufferers live in and consist a big family.
Supposing I have seventy-two changes, I'd like to change into ...
In a word, I would try my best to let happiness and friendship live in the world for ever.
