My favorite sports star------ Sun Yang
Born on December 1, 1991 in Zhejiang Province, Sun Yang is very tall and the height is 1.99 meters. He was from a sports family.
He won the China's first gold medal in men's swimming game. He worked a miracle. Sun Yang is not only gifted but also diligent. He keeps training and has tenacious willpower; these are worth learning by other people. Sun Yang is a new frontrunner at the sports worlds.
Sun Yang is very popular with the young. He is adorable, charming, childlike and cool. He is kind and has the vigor of youth, and he is a little shy. But Sun Yang is easy-going, always with a smile on his face when he faces our. He sings well and sounds beautiful. To my surprise, he likes dolls very much.
Sun Yang sets us a good example, and Sun Yang has set a new world record of swimming, of which the whole country’s people are proud
成员之间的关系更融洽、更和谐,每个家庭都会有这样或那样的家庭规矩。比如:
必须按时回家,不准打电子游戏等。请你结合家庭的实际情况,根据下面的提示
和要求,以“MyFamilyRules”为题,写一篇短文。
提示:1、家里有哪些家规;2、对家规的感受;3、对父母的建议。
要求:1、必须包括提示内容,可以适当发挥;2、词数:80个左右;3、文
中不得出现真实的地名和人名。
MyfamilyRules
Myparentsarestrictwithme.Therearemanyrulesinmyfamily.Letmetell
yousomeofthem.IamnotallowedtospendtoomuchtimewatchingTVorsurfing
theInternetonschooldays,andImustgotobedbefore23:00,becauseIhavetodo
myhomeworkandgetupearlythenextmorning.Ihavetocleanmyroomevery
morning.Myparentsthinkitisaverygoodhabittodoso.ButIdon’tagreewith
them,becausemyroomisnotalwaysdirty.EvenIdon’tagreewithsomeoftherules,
Iwillfollowthem.Ithinkmyparentswon’tdoanythingthatisbadforme.
Unit8ItmustbelongtoCarla
【原创习作点评】
请以Jack的身份根据下面提示帮他给他的老师Mr.Black发一封电子邮
件。词数在80词左右。
提示:1.当Jack到家时,他发现自错拿了英语书,他认为肯定是Tracy
的,因为书上有Tracy的名字。
2.Jack的书可能在Mr.Black家的书桌上。如果在,请老师帮忙保存起来,如
果不在,麻烦Mr.Black告诉他Tracy家的电话号码。
DearMr.Black,
Iamsorrytotroubleyou.Iwantyourhelp.AfterIgothome,Ifoundthatmy
Englishbookwasn’tinmybackpackandItookawrongbook.Ithinkitmustbe
Tracy’s①book,becausehernameisonit.IthinkmyEnglishbookmightbeon
yourdesk.Ifitisthere,pleasehelpmekeepit.Ifitisn’tonthedesk,pleasetellme
Tracy’stelephonenumber.Shemighttakemybook.Iamlookingforwardto
youre-mail.Thankyouverymuch.
Jack
教师点评这是一篇比较优秀的学生习作。得分点(1)内容完整,行文流畅(2)
一),从你的好友WangLin的appearance,personality,hobbies等方面叙述他过去和现在
的不同。
Ihaveafriend.HisnameisWangLin.Wehaven’tseeneachotherforthreeyears.Hehas
changedalot.Heusedtobethinandshort.Hewasalittleshywhenhewasintheprimary
school.Hisfaceturnedredwhenhetalkedtogirls.Butnowheistallandalittlefat.Heisn’tshy
anymore.Heisoutgoing.Heoftenplaysbasketballwithhisclassmatesafterschool.Heusedto
likeplayingpingpong,butnowhelikesplayingbasketball.Hethinksplayingbasketballcan
makehimgrowtallerandstronger.Hedidn’tusetolikeEnglish,butnowheis
interestedinit.Nowheispopular.Lookatthegirlsaroundhim.
二),可以从长相,性格,学习等方面谈论自己的变化。
Mylifehaschangedalotinthepastfewyears.Iusedtohaveshorthair,butnowIhavelong
hair.InthepastIwasquietandshy.However,nowI’mactiveandoutgoing,andlliketalking
withothers.
ThebiggestchangeinmylifewasthatIusedtoplaycomputergamesanddidbadlyin
English,butnowIhavemadegreatprogresswiththehelpofmyEnglishteacher.Thisisthemost
importantchangebecauseatalkwithherinfluencedme.IfIwanttoplaybetter,Ishouldlearn
Englishbetter.NowIamgoodatEnglish.Thismakesmyteacherandparentstakeprideinme
now.
三),生活多姿多彩,变化无处不在。假设今年暑假你回到了你三年前就读过的小学,你发
现学校已经发生了很大的变化。原来陈旧的教学楼变成了高大的新教学楼;过去学生们只能
在教学楼前活动,现在他们可以在绿树成荫的大操场玩耍。原来只能整天在教室里学习,现
在有了电脑室,美术室,音乐室····
Thissummervacation,Iwentbacktotheprimaryschool.Istudiedtherethreeyearsago.
Ifindtheschoolhaschangedalot.Inthepast,theteachingbuildingswereold,butnowthereare
tallandnewteachingbuildings.Weusedtodosomeactivitiesonlyinfrontoftheteaching
buildings,butnowtherearebigplaygroundwithlotsoftreesaroundit.Wecanplaythere.
Weusedtostudyintheclassroomallday,butnowtherearecomputerclassrooms,artclassrooms,
musicclassroomsandsoon.Ihopetheschoolwillbecomebetterandmorebeautiful.
四),(改自江苏省南通市中考题请你按照下面表格的提示,写一篇题为“ChangesinMy
Hometown
要求:1.2.或者以单项对比的方式写一篇短文;
3.词数:80词左右(包括已经写出的单词)。
ChangesinMyHometown
分析:本篇作文的题目和要点已经给定,有两种写法,一是今昔整体对比,也就是先说明过
去的总体情况,再说明现在的总体情况;二是单项对比,也就是先说明过去的房子是什么样
子的,而现在的房子是什么样子的,按照不同的比较项目逐一列举。最后也可通过对比,表
达自己对家乡变化的喜悦之情或对家乡的热爱。
在选词方面,同学们可灵活运用本单元重点结构usedtodo/be或thereusedtobe/do,注
1,计算机在我们的工作和生活中的作用越来越大,你知道计算机的起源和发展吗?请从
计算机发明的时间(1946年),大小,用途等方面,谈一下它的变化,并说说对未来的计算
机的畅想
ComputersarebecomingmoreandmoreImportantinourdailylife.Doyouknowthe
historyofcomputers?Thecomputerwasinventedin1946.Atthattime,thecomputerwasvery
huge.Itwasaslargeasthehouse,butnowitismuchsmaller.(介绍了计算机的发展
Thecomputersareveryusefulinourlife.Forexample,wecanstudyandworkonthe
computer.Wecanlistentomusicandwatchvideosonthecomputer.Wecanalsoplaygameson
thecomputer.Itcanmakeusrelaxed.(介绍计算机的功能。
It’shardtoimaginewhatourlifewouldbelikewithoutcomputersinourlife.Inmyopinion,
thecomputerswillchangeourlifeinthefuture.(畅想计算机的未来
mostusefulinventions.Itplaysanimportantroleinourlife.ItwasinventedbyanAmerican
reporternamedJohnLordin1888.(介绍它的历史
Theballpointpenisusedinmanyfields.Itisveryuseful.Itcanbeusedtowrite.Andit
helpsuswritefasterandmakeourlifeeasier.Butsometimesitleaks.Itspriceislow.(介绍它的
功能
Theballpointpenswillbecomesmallerandlighter.Iwishtheballpointpeninthefuturecan
helpuswritemuchfaster.Whenwemeetproblems,itwilltelluswhattodo.(畅想它的未来
3,发明创造改变了世界。不少青少年都梦想成为一名发明家。你们应该怎样做才能实现这
样的梦想呢?请根据下面的要点提示,以“Howtobecomeaninventor”为题,写一篇80词左右
的短文,谈谈你的观点。
要点提示:1.Learnalot.2.Haveaninterest.3.Becreative.4.Nevergiveup.
Everyonehasowndreams.Mydreamistobeaninventor.Asastudent,Ithinkweneedto
dothefollowingthingstobecomeaninventor.First,wemuststudyhardtogetmoreknowledge.
It’simpossibleforustoinventanythingwithoutknowledge.Second,weshouldhaveaninterestin
inventing.Whenweareinterestedinsomething,wecandoitwell.Third,weneedtobecreative.
Weshouldalwayscomeupwithnewideas.Weshouldkeeponandnevergiveup.
Unit7Teenagersshouldbeallowedtochoosetheirownclothes
My mother
My mother is very kind and beautiful although she is not tall.She is 42 years old this year.She is a nurse,so she is always very busy day and night.But she loves her job,and she often takes care of her patients.Of course,she also likes singing,dancing,cooking and shopping,but she almost no time to do them.
Oh,I love my mother.
描写妈妈的英语作文:
TherearemanytraditionalartsinChina.AkiteisoneoftheChinesetraditionalarts.Akite
wasmadefirstinChina.ItwassaidthatthekitewasmadebyMoDifirst.Itismadeofsticks,
paperandplastic.Ithasdifferentcolors.Longlongago,kiteswereusedtosendmessages,but
nowkitesareusedforfun.Peoplelikeflyingkitesintheopenair.InChina,Weifangis
famousforthekites.Thekitefestivalisheldhereeveryyear.Kitesarepopularallover
2,请根据提示介绍你家乡的特产.(pancakes,wheat,flour,process,pack
Myhometownisknownforpancakes.Theyareverypopularnow.Ilikeeating.Theysmell
niceandtastedelicious.Theyaremadeofwheat.Somearemadeofrice.Wheatorriceissentto
theflourfactoryandprocessedintoflour.Thentheflourismadeintopancakeswithapanata
veryrightheat.Atlastthepancakesarepackedwithplasticbagsandsoldinthestoresand
supermarkets.It’ssaidthatpancakesweremadefirstbyZhugeLiang.Nowmanypeoplecan
makepancakesinShandong.Pancakesareusedformakingdifferentdeliciousfood.They
arespecialbecausetheyareeasytomakeandconvenienttotake.
则,有时要求谈论个人观点;二是根据内容提示写谈论规则的短文,这种文体通常
是夹叙夹议。写作本话题常用的结构除了课本上的含有情态动词的被动语态结构
should(notbeallowedto之外,haveto,must,can’t,should,shouldn’t,you’dbetter
等也很实用,大家应根据需要灵活应用。
OurSchoolRules
Istudyinastrictschool,andtherearemanyrulesinourschool.disagreewithit.Theoftheuniformsisbadandtheymakeusfeel
uncomfortable.Ithinkstudentsshouldbeallowedtoweartheirownclothes.Wewant
tobedifferent.Atourschool,evengirlsarenotallowedtohavelonghair.Thatis
reallystrange.Longhairmakesgirlslookmorebeautiful,andinChineseculturegirls
shouldhavelonghair.
Ofcourse,therearesomerulesIagreewith.Youngerstudentsarenotallowedto
ridebikes.Itisdangerousforthemtoridebikesduringtherushhours.Wearen't
allowedtoeatsnacksatschool.Ithinkmostsnacksarebadforourhealth.The
studentsshouldn’tbeallowedtogettheirearspierced.
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