我想到:怎么他们又不是母子,为什么要站在那儿呢?难道他们装成假文盲,假装不认识上面的字,想优先上车,抢到较好的座位。是的,在社会上,有许多例子可以说明假文盲这一现象。比如,在花园或校园的草坪上,立着“不能踩踏草坪”这几个字,但有些人假装不认字,直接就踩在草坪上;还有,在楼梯的入口处,明明摆着一个醒目的公告栏“上下楼请靠右走!”就是还有少数学生或老师也不遵守,视而不见乱走道。在生活中,这样的例子有很多,而这幅漫画却反映了三个问题:首先四位男士不按秩序,装成假文盲,优先上车,这是产生问题的根本原因。其次是车站的管理不好,如果树立了牌子就应该派出专人去管理。最后就是母子没有维护自己应有的权利,没有叫几位男士离开。
如果大家都不去注意提示语和警告语,那这个社会将会变得毫无公德,不讲礼仪的社会,如果每个人都去遵守社会公德,相互关心、相互尊重,那整个社会将会充满爱心,变得美好!
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在我们的生活中,有很多平凡的人却做着令人感动的事。清洁工—再平凡不过的人,却经常出现在我们面前,做着看似不起眼的工作,但没有他们,我们生活的环境却无法想象,而我们却常常忽略他们。
记着冬季的一天早上,大概六点多钟,天刚蒙蒙亮。我起床无意间透过窗户看到了一个人在空旷的道路上做着什么,因为冬天的寒冷,路上基本没有什么行人,所以他引起了我的注意。只见他穿着厚重的橘黄色的工作服,在清晨微弱阳光的照耀下笨拙的拿着铁锹在铲雪,时不时用戴着脏手套的手擦一下脸上微微浸出的汗水。这么寒冷的冬天,而且是清晨,难道他不冷吗?看着他不畏严寒的劳动着,心里说不出的心酸。看他的动作也是很大的年龄了,却做着这样辛苦的工作。这让我不禁想到他是为了生活,但更多的是为了我们大家的生活环境,为了让大家在冬季出行的路上更安全些。想到这些,我对他们有了更多的敬意。渐渐地,清洁工走远了,身影越来越模糊,但他清扫过的道路却越来越清晰。
清洁工人的工作是多么辛苦!夏季,烈日下,风雨中,依然有他们的身影,为了给我们一个洁净的环境而挥洒汗水。尽管路上的行人毫不注意他们,随手把垃圾扔到地上,可他们却毫无怨言的把地上形形色色的垃圾一点一点的拾起来扔进垃圾桶里。这是多么高尚的一种品质啊!冬季,外面虽然刮着风下着雪,他们依然坚守着岗位。寒冷的冬季,路上的人们被冻得瑟瑟发抖,从清洁工人身边匆匆走过,没有谁会注意到在他们通红的脸上为了行人的安全已经流下了冰冷的汗水。道路在他们的清理中减少了行人因路滑而摔跤的危险。他们为了给我们一个美丽而清洁的环境辛勤的付出着。我们不应该学习他们的精神吗?是他们不畏炎热、风雨、寒冷、冰雪,危险,在干净的道路上留下了自己的汗水。
让我们不要再乱丢垃圾,为了我们生活的环境贡献自己的一份力量!
夏天,火红的太阳高高地挂在空中,用火辣辣的阳光炙烤着大地,空气在不断地颤抖,一阵阵热风吹来,闹得人心情烦闷。
我在家中酷暑难耐,手中的扇子扇来扇去,冰棍一根接着一根吃,也没有感到丝毫凉意。
正在此时,我忽然听到窗外传来卖冰棍的吆喝声。我随声望去,看见一个中年妇女在草坪边上卖冰棍。我无意间看到了她身边的草坪,被眼前的草坪惊呆了。青青的一棵棵草是昂首挺胸地站在那里,丝毫没有烦闷之意。火辣辣的阳光与一阵阵热风也磨灭它们的意志。我不禁被这些草所感动,它们虽然默默无闻,但它们顽强的意志与坚忍不拔的品质却让人为之佩服。
再看看在花坛里那些在春天争妍斗艳的花儿,一株株无精打采,在酷日面前低下了曾经十分为之骄傲的头。路旁那些杨树柳树也在火辣辣的阳光下屈服了,叶子干巴巴的,失去了往日的神采奕奕。看到这些,我又想些了那些平凡而伟大的小草,只有它们才具有顽强的意志与坚韧不拔的品质。
花儿固然美丽,但它低下头;杨柳固然高大,但它们屈服了。也许是草习惯了炎热,毫无怨言地挺立着。只有草,那平凡的草,永远是默默无闻的,但也只有他们才具有顽强的意志与坚忍不拔的品质。
透过草坪,在烈日下指挥交通的交警忙碌的身影映入我的眼帘,他们默默奉献着,不求人们的回报与感激。我忽然觉得交警与草是如此相似,都用平凡装点生命与世界。
人生需要顽强的意志与坚忍不拔的品质,不断在逆境中奋斗。或许会十分平凡,但从平凡中可以透出伟大,人生因平凡而伟大。
感动大家,感动中国,感动你我。我们大家的生命都像是一朵花。有的是昙花,在黑夜里装点世界;有的是紫罗兰,虽然小,却也为世上做了一份贡献……
罗阳,一位航天专家。在生命的最后一刻也坚持完成自己的事业,为国家的航天建设鞠躬尽瘁,这种感动让我们肃然起敬,也让我坚定了自己学习的信念,要向罗阳爷爷学习,勤奋学习,刻苦钻研,为自己今后的事业打下坚实的基础。
何玥,一个普通的学生。在生命即将凋谢的时候,她没有恐惧,没有害怕,反而是想到了国家和社会,将自己的所有器官捐献给了有需要的病人,同时挽救了多个人的生命。这是一种多么伟大的精神和力量啊,我也要反省自己,珍惜现在,珍惜生命,用自己微薄的力量去为社会多做贡献。
而陈斌强,则是一位孝子。小时候,妈妈用一根背带背着他,哺育他成长。现在,他依然用这根背带背起父母的了年迈的母亲,不离不弃,悉心陪伴和照料,为母亲撑起了一片天。这也让我们更加明白了孝敬和感恩的含义,我也会从现在做起,尊敬父母,听父母的话,帮他们做一些自己力所能及的事情,同时也要好好学习,等长大后可以有能力让他们更好的享受晚年生活。
还有高淑珍、陈家顺、张丽莉、李文波、周月华……他们平凡而伟大的事迹都让我的内心一次又一次的掀起波澜,这一刻,我想他们不仅感动了我,也感动了全中国,感动了全世界。让我深深的意识到感动是一种内心的表达,更要是一种动力,在自己的生活中、工作中、学习中要努力让自己感动,要感动自己,这样才能幸福快乐的生活!
【习作题目】
Students Grading of Their Teachers
1.学生给老师打分已很普遍;
2.人们对其持不同态度(肯定或否定的态度);
3.你的看法。
【习作解读】
显然,此任务是写一篇议论文,主题为对学生给老师打分的现象进行议论,开放性较大。学生应根据实际情况,从多个方面阐述其原因并表达自己对这种现象的观点和态度。该话题更加贴近学生的实际生活,但有一定的语言难度,也有一定的思想深度。通过此文的写作,也从侧面提示了学生在注重写作基础训练的前提下,也应该注重培养积极思考、灵活运用、自由发挥等能力。
此次的写作任务出题相当巧妙,写作内容涉及的词汇和句型都属于新课程标准范围。题目在考查学生写作能力的同时,也在考查学生的分析判断能力及高度概括能力。富有想象力的学生写出的文章可能生动而富有灵性。此题目能引发学生对平日习以为常的行为进行反思,学会换位思考,这对中学生的性格和品德培养非常重要。
【习作展示】
Students Grading of Their Teachers
Nowadays, a lot of schools ask their students to contribute to grading their teachers. As a teacher, it is their responsibility to satisfy their students in all aspects. Meanwhile, it is admirable that school teachers prefer to expose themselves to their students.
If the system of grading of teachers by students is introduced, it will benefit students, teachers and the administration of the school for a number of reasons. For one thing, the system will give teachers and the administration of the school an insight into the minds of the students and show whether the teachers are successful in getting their lessons understood by the students; for another, it will also encourage the good teachers to continue their efforts and motivate themselves. What is more, it will expose those who are not doing enough and will lead them to correct their teaching methods as well as their attitude towards students. Thus the quality of teaching will certainly improve.
In a word, it is a promising concept and will bring surprisingly good results if applied with the right conditions.
【习作点评】
作者观点明确,赞成学生给老师打分。作为老师,就要做一个让学生满意的老师。这样,不仅对学生、学校有利,而且对老师本人也有利。这样,老师就会从另一个角度重新审视自己,看自己是否是一个成功的老师。如果得到学生的认可,这将是对自己的一次鼓励,为继续前行增添动力。如果学生的认可度不高,老师就应进行反思,调控教学方法和教学态度。这样,教学质量肯定会提高。作
者用简洁、明快的语言以及自己的经历列举了充分的论据,内容充实,贴近生活。For one thing, for another, what is more, in a word等过渡词的使用,是短文结构清晰,层次分明。最后,最值得一提的是,文中多次正确运用的高级词汇和复杂句式,给文章增添了不少文采。综上所述,这是一篇不可多得的佳作,值得向大家推荐。
二、写作模板
此模板适用于社会现象类议论文。参考模式如下:
Nowadays, there exists an increasingly serious social/economic/environmental There are a couple of reasons behind this problem/phenomenon. For one ;Based on the above discussions, I can easily forecast that more and more people
Nowadays, there exists a common phenomenon—with the development of the Internet, more and more people tend to send electronic cards instead of paper ones to their friends and relatives when an important holiday comes.
There are a couple of reasons behind this phenomenon. For one thing, compared with the traditional cards, electronic cards are more lively and interesting. They can give not only pictures but also sound and animation. For another, there are many websites online which offer varieties of cards for you to choose from. What is more, with the popularity of the electronic cards, less paper is used in making paper cards, which does good to our environment.
Based on the above discussions, I can easily forecast that sending greetings by using electronic cards will be accepted by more and more people, not only the young ones.
三、写作指导
写作思路是先列出一个具体的社会问题或者现象,然后分析产生的原因和产生的影响,最后提出解决问题的办法,或者得出结论,或者提出个人看法,或者预测前景。
论点、论据、论证是议论文的三要素。论点是作者对所议论问题所持有的见解和主张,论据是用来证明论点的事实和道理的根据;论证是用论据来证明论点的方法和过程。一般来说,议论文每段都有主题句来确定论点。论证的方法很多,但最常用的是因果分析法。即:分析事实与论点的因果关系,指出取得结果的原因是所要证明的论点,从而达到论证的目的。
在近几年的高考中,议论文的比重占得越来越多,议论文的.出题形式可以多种多样,有看图写作、图表、表格、书信等各种类型,但文体实际是议论文,而有时是夹叙的议论文。议论文的写作要点是:
1. 观点鲜明,文章一定有一个明确的中心论点。
2. 层次分明,一个中心论点通常有几个分论点支持,不同层次之间要分明,过渡清晰自然。
3. 最后一段一般要总结全文,得出一个符合逻辑的结论,突出中心思想。
4. 一般采用一般现在时。
5. 语言简洁有力,一般不采用口语。
四、巩固练习
1.【练习题目】
2010年上海世界博览会期间,上万的青年志愿者参加志愿工作,请你谈谈对此现象的看法。
【参考范文】
During the period of holding the 2010 World Expo in Shanghai, tens of thousands of young citizens are participating in volunteer work, hoping to devote themselves to the grand occasion. As far as I am concerned, everyone ought to enter for it. Here are the reasons I want to mention.
It can be argued that the advantages of doing unpaid volunteer work are enormous, because volunteer work is actually a two-way street. First of all, volunteer work should always benefit people who need help. Those who need help will feel happier due to our immediate help. On the other hand, as far as the young people ourselves are concerned, we have more opportunities to develop the sense of responsibility, independence as well as interpersonal skills in the process of helping others.
Through this kind of work, we become confident and mature. In addition, we can make many friends and increase our chances of getting the jobs of our dreams. Furthermore, volunteer work plays an active role in building up a harmonious society.
In a word, it is of great value for the young adults to offer volunteer work. The youth volunteers do make a difference by the voluntary work! Why not join them and do something for our country?
2.【练习题目】
某些中学生为了显示自己成熟或表明自己醋而吸烟。请写一篇120词左右的短文,列举吸烟的危害,并提出建议。
【参考范文】
I am sorry to know that more and more middle school students begin to smoke. I think it is wrong to believe that smoking is cool and even think that smoking makes you appear to be mature. In fact, smoking is not cool but very dangerous.
First, smoking can do much damage to health. Scientific researches show that smoking can lead to heart diseases, cancers and other problems. It is reported that about 5 million people die of diseases related to smoking each year all over the world.
Second, it is a waste of money to smoke cigarettes. Smoking can cost a great deal of money. Once you are addicted to it, it is difficult to give it up.
What’s more, smoking can cause fires easily, which may do great damage to your life and your surroundings.
So give up smoking at once! Only in this way can you keep healthy forever.
3. 【练习题目】近年来,越来越多的中学生出国学习,出现了所谓的中学生“出国热”。请根据以下提供的信息,谈谈自己的看法。
1)良好的语言环境,更利于语言学习。
2)拓宽视野,学习国外先进的科学技术。
3)传播各民族间的不同文化。
参考词汇:媒介,中间人:mediator
【参考范文】
In recent years, studying abroad has been popular. Tens of thousands of Chinese middle school students have gone to foreign countries to study.Many people are trying their best to apply to go abroad.
There are a number of reasons for attending schools abroad.First, students who are studying abroad can act as mediators between people of different cultures. They can communicate with each other directly and learn about different cultures. Second, they can learn much more advanced knowledge of science and technology from foreign countries and experience different education methods.Third, they live in foreign countries and take classes given by foreign teachers. As a result, they can learn foreign languages much more quickly.
Therefore, it is advisable to attend schools abroad.
4.【练习题目】随着经济和社会的发展,道路上的私人小汽车越来越多。请根据自己的观察和理解,谈谈自己的观点。
【参考范文】
With the fantastic development both in economy and in society in China, the number of people who own private cars is on the rise. Some people have bought cars of their own, and others are planning to buy cars. But I strongly object to the increase in developing private cars.
I hold that automobiles will give rise to a series of problems. In the first place, as more and more cars are produced and run on the road, a large volume of poisonous gas will be given off, polluting the atmosphere and causing actual harm to the health of people. Next, private cars contribute to traffic jams so greatly that the advantages gained in comfort and freedom are often cancelled out by the frustration caused by traffic jams. The last problem is the increasing number of car accidents that have killed and will kill a lot of people in a friction of a second.
In a word, although automobiles have been playing a vital part in the daily activities of our society, they also bring us numerous troubles such as more serious environmental pollution, more traffic accidents and more energy consumption. They drink up huge amounts of fuel and throw out huge amounts of pollutants. Jams waste our precious time. Therefore, I am against developing private cars.
去年春天,小朋友送给我些蚕宝宝。蚕宝宝带来的桑叶很快就吃光了,我焦急地要妈妈帮我找桑叶,可周围都找遍了,就是没有,蚕宝宝眼看要挨饿了,我急得热锅上的蚂蚁似的。妈妈突然灵机一动:“我试着找一个人,他可能有办法。”第二天放学回家,我照例直奔阳台看蚕宝宝,只见它们卧在碧绿的桑叶里大嚼大咽,旁边的大花盆里也栽上了一棵亭亭玉立的小桑树。“妈妈,一定是田螺姑娘下凡了。”我调皮地大喊。“是呀,不过,这个田螺姑娘可是位伯伯。”妈妈回答。
这位伯伯是妈妈的同事,据妈妈说他在部队里做过团长,转业后一直做社区民警,整天扎在社区里,老百姓有什么难事,他都尽力帮忙。
团长?我脑海里闪现出《亮剑》里李云龙的形象,五大三粗,风风火火,这样的人能做好社区民警这么婆婆妈妈的工作?我对他产生了浓厚的兴趣,缠着妈妈带我去见他。可是不是妈妈没时间,就是那位伯伯没时间,这个愿望一次一次落空了。
偶尔一次,我在广播里听到上海在评选“平安英雄”,这位伯伯也在候选人里面。他的事迹很平常,不过是小孩放学路上被无主狗咬了,他费尽周折帮助解决医疗费;不过是教育一个游荡在社会上的孤儿走正道,还给他找工作;不过是为了让一个负案在逃的盗窃犯投案,多年来坚持通过各种渠道规劝,在他家失火时尽力扑救并联系理赔,最终使他自首……如此平常的事也能入围上海“平安英雄”候选人?
跟妈妈谈了我的想法,妈妈浅浅地一笑:“这儿有两个哑铃,你每天举半小时,一周以后告诉我你的感想。”哑铃很轻,10分钟还可以,到20分钟就撑不住了,半个小时手臂就实在酸得不行了。但我咬牙坚持着,一天,两天,三天,第四天我就开始偷懒了,妈妈看样子是知道的,但没指出。一周后,我告诉妈妈这事还真挺难。妈妈又浅浅地一笑:“那位伯伯是很平常,但他很执着,一直在坚持,是个永不放弃的人!”懵懵懂懂中,我点点头,似乎明白了些什么。
终于有一天,路过那位伯伯的警务室,我和妈妈进去拜访他,只见伯伯手边上有几块剪得很整齐的浅色碎布,他正往布上写字,一个名字旁边一个电话号码。看我好奇的样子,伯伯笑着说:“这里有个智障的孩子,经常走失,家里人实在没办法,我想了很久,才想出这个办法,把他名字和家里电话写在布条上,缝在他衣服上,要再走失了,别人也好打电话。”
他平淡的话里,我感到了妈妈所说的执着和坚持,更感到了全心的热爱和时时刻刻为别人着想的高贵品质。蓦地,我明白了他能够入围上海“平安英雄”候选人的原因。他从军多年,是军营给了他不同凡响的品格和气质,现在,他又在警察这个岗位上坚持和传承着这些不同凡响的品格和气质,这样的人怎么会不受到人们的尊敬呢?
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