四级作文干货大全集【一】
Dear all,
I am writing this letter to express my gratitude to my parents for teaching me to be positive and to be strong. “Educating the mind without educating the heart is no education at all.” is the opinion held by Aristotle. It is the experience of our forefathers, however, it is correct even today, including my parenting.
It is widely acknowledged that parenting, which can also be explained as family education, is of great significance in our character forming and manner acquiring. To be more detailed, setting good examples instead of just giving precepts is the greatest achievement of my parents. They not only taught me to think for the best and prepare for the worst; they taught me how. They not only told me the benefits of being strong in mind; they proved it. All those things require huge amount of time and work, but it’s worth it.
Without my parents’ contribution and education, I would never be who I am now. But most importantly, I would never be more gratitude to them than today.
Yours,
XXX
四级作文干货大全集【二】
Dear my father and mother,
This letter is my inner feelings. I want to thank both of you for so many years’ care and help.
During my growth, you have made a lot of efforts and love for me. When I make a success, both of you are more excited than me, and support me to do better. Even though I have failed, you always share sorrow with me and encourage me not to give up. Especially, during my preparation for CET-4, the support from you is always everywhere. I have passed the exam successfully.
You love is so unselfish that I am deeply affected, so I will study hard to be a useful person and won’t make you disappointed. Anyway, I would like to express the deep gratitude to you.
With best wishes.
Sincerely yours,
Li Ming
四级作文干货大全集【三】
分析范文或优秀作文是我们学好写作的第一步。不要小看任何的优秀小短文，那其中一定有需要你掌握的内容。To see a world in a grain of sand,
And a heaven in a wild flower,
Hold infinity in the palm of your hand,
And eternity in an hour.
一沙一世界，
一花一天堂，
手中即无限，
永恒亦短暂。
四级作文干货大全集【四】
春天， 万物复苏，小河水哗哗地顺流而下； 活泼机灵的小鸟们在枝头喳喳地纵情歌唱； 小草们神不知鬼不觉地从地下探出了脑袋，大地换上了绿色的新衣； 小野花们争先恐后地展示着自己的美丽； 一棵棵大树好像正在返老还童， 抽出嫩黄色的新芽；。年迈的`凤凰木也紧跟着春天的步伐， 吐出米粒大小的嫩叶， 就像刚出生的婴儿那般娇嫩。
夏天，太阳像一个火炉似地炙烤着地面。凤凰木的叶子早已变成了深绿色，枝条也向四周扩展了许多，变成了一把绿色的大伞。当太阳透过茂密的树叶筛下一束束金光时， 美丽的凤凰花绽开了一张张笑脸，好像给凤凰木披上了红色的霞衣。
秋天，凤凰树的叶子慢慢地变成了金黄色，在微风吹拂下纷纷飘落下来， 给地面铺上了一层厚厚的金色地毯。课间十分钟，我和小伙伴们在凤凰树下尽情地玩耍、嬉闹，甭提有多高兴了。
冬天，刺骨的寒风从耳边呼呼地刮过，古老的凤凰木褪去了繁华，仿佛一个弯着腰、知识渊博的老学者，正在讲述着她一百多年来的沧桑岁月， 并勉励我们克服各种困难、勤奋学习，成为对国家有贡献的人才。
这就是我们百年老校的百年古树---凤凰木。
四级作文干货大全集【五】
上学期，我们学习了课文《海伦·凯勒》，被海伦·凯勒热爱生活、不屈不挠的精神所感动。最近读了她的自传《假如给我三天光明》，同样被她的坚强、奋斗、乐观与勇气所震撼。
海伦·凯勒，一个生活在盲聋哑世界里的人，竟然以优异的成绩毕业于哈佛大学拉德克利夫女子学院。她一生写了14部着作，被美国《时代周刊》评为20世纪美国十大偶像。时隔100多年，当我们穿过悠长的时光隧道，回眸凝视这位度过87年无光、无声的孤独岁月的弱女子，我们不由得惊叹：生命的奇迹究竟是如何诞生的？在《假如给我三天光明》中，海伦说：“知识给人以爱，给人以光明，给人以智慧，应该说知识就是幸福，因为有了知识，就是摸到了有史以来人类活动的脉搏，否则就不懂人类生命的音乐！”。的确，知识的力量是无穷的，正是知识使海伦创造了这些人间奇迹！海伦是不幸的，但她又是幸运的，正是因为有了知识，她才如此幸运。对知识的渴求，使她在常人难以想象的单调和枯燥中竟然学会了德语、拉丁语、法语等多国语言，阅读了多部文学和哲学名着，吸取着那些伟人和智者的思想精髓。她把学习比做攀登奇山险峰，跌倒了再爬上去，每得到一点进步，就有一份鼓舞，逐渐看到更为广阔的世界。知识，像一道道彩虹，点亮了海伦心中的灯，照亮了她的内心世界，也架起了海伦和这个世界沟通的桥梁！“假如给我三天光明”，海伦凯勒将仔细端详自己的莎莉文老师、亲人、朋友，环视自己生活的环境；到森林进行一次远足，放纵一下自己的眼睛；到博物馆对世界的历史与未来、人类进步的奇观作匆忙一瞥；看看黎明时由黑夜变成白昼的动人奇迹……“我的眼睛不轻易放过一件小事，它争取密切关注它所看的的每一件事物。”这三天对于海伦凯勒真的是奢望。而我们已经拥有了三千多天的光明，让我们反省一下，我们是否都充分利用这天赋的五官和四肢去感受大自然的美丽和生活的美好了吗？
与海伦比，我们真是太幸运了。我们拥有美好的一切——健全的体魄、良好的学习环境、优秀的老师……从今天起一定抓紧每一分一秒，不要让光阴虚度，不要等失去了才懂得珍惜。要像海伦凯勒那样，不埋怨、不放弃，好好珍惜自己所拥有的，奋发学习，掌握丰富的知识。用知识武装自己，用知识为祖国为人类作出自己应有的贡献。因为，知识的力量是无穷的，知识能创造人间奇迹！
四级作文干货大全集【六】
Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先，提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段：提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段：正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段：摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次，提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性，连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity：段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛，也不可太具体，做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明，另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence：关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰，层层展开。
完整性(completeness：以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头，这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次，提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型：It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单，注意练习并接句的使用，会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as，如：
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头，句式简单，我们可以通过把since提前改变句式，如：
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后，提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法：millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论，辩论”的意思，而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.，相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略：使用最近所学的单词，如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后，我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文，以供参考：
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
四级作文干货大全集【七】
1、当发现楼内失火时，切忌慌张、乱跑，要冷静地探时着火方位，确定风向，并在火势未蔓延前，朝逆风方向快速离开火灾区域。
2、起火时，如果楼道被烟火封，应该立即关闭房门和室内通风孔，防止进烟。随后用湿毛巾堵住口鼻，防止吸入热烟和有毒气体，并将向上的衣服浇湿，以免引火烧身。如果楼道中只有烟没有火，可在头上套一个较大的透明塑料袋，防止烟气刺激 眼睛和吸入呼吸道，并采用弯腰的低姿 势，逃离烟火区。
3、千万不要从窗口往下跳。如果楼层不高，可用绳子从窗口降到安全地区。
4、发生火灾时，不能乘电梯，因为电梯随时可能发生故障或被火烧坏;应沿防火安全疏散楼梯朝底楼跑;当有被火围困在室内的危险时，只要火势不是很猛，就必须用湿毛巾、湿被子等物裹好整个身体后向外冲出。如果浓烟太大，则可用湿口罩或湿毛巾捂住口鼻后，爬行穿过险区。但若火势太猛，又不了解火场情况，千万不可盲目地向外冲，此时应该做的就是赶紧趴在地上大声呼救，以便得到及时的营救;也可以将楼梯间的窗户玻璃打破，向外高声呼救，让救援人员知道你的.确切位置，以便营救。设法通知消防人员前来营救湖南卫视教育节目新闻大求真全集2017湖南卫视教育节目新闻大求真全集2017观后感。要俯身呼救，如喊声听不见，可以用手电筒照射，或挥动鲜艳的衣衫、毛巾及往楼下扔东西等方法引起营救人员注意。同时还要封闭所有能透进火焰及烟气的孔缝，并充分利用室内的水源进行自救。
四级作文干货大全集【八】
Dear Mary,
You said in your letter that many of your classmates wore fashionableclothes, but you couldn't afford them so you felt very depressed. There are dif-ferent views on people's clothes. The followings are my ideas:
Firstly, you shouldn't put too much emphasis on physical appearance.
Remember that the most important task for you today is to concentrate on yourstudies. No matter what you wear, you will really look your best when youcome out first in your examinations.
Secondly, you should understand that it is a fine virtue to live in fru-gality. Just as a famous saying goes, Frugality is the mother of virtue.
Since your family can't provide you with enough money to buy fashionableclothes, it is all the more necessary for you to try to lighten the financialburden of your family. And you will find the virtue of frugality benefit youa lot in your future life.
I hope you understand what I mean. Hope you will take a positive attitudetowards life and will be happy again when you read my letter.
Yours,
Anne
