作文中哪些词可以代替 然后 接着(作文中的有一次可以用什么代替)

作文中哪些词可以代替 然后 接着(作文中的有一次可以用什么代替)

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作文中哪些词可以代替 然后 接着(作文中的有一次可以用什么代替)

作文中哪些词可以代替 然后 接着【一】

威尼斯是世界闻名的水上城市。

(1) 饮茶是一种享受。

(2) 飞机是一种交通工具。

(3) 骑自行车是一种体育运动。

作文中哪些词可以代替 然后 接着【二】

好的文章动静结合、张弛有度有节奏感。句式也是一样,要有变化性,这不仅能使文章更生动,也是语言表达方式的需要和表达能力的体现。句式的`变化,主要是要注意两点:

● 不要从头至尾使用一种句型。

● 长短句结合。

由于语言功底的欠缺和惯用思维,很多人写的文章一种句式到头,如:

I think …

I hope…

He does it.

He will take it

这样的文章虽然意思表达出来了,却显得呆板,欠生动。解决的办法是:

1.间或使用主从复句。

Because he is very much determined, he will carry it out this time. (原因

比较:He is very much determined. He will carry it out this time.

2.使用分词结构句。

The weather being fine, a large number of people went sightseeing.

比较:The weather is fine. A large number of people went sightseeing.

Africa is the second largest continent, its size being about three times that of China.

比较:Africa is the second largest continent. Its size is about three times that of China.

3.使用不定式句。

To be or not to be, that is a question. (莎士比亚

To study or not to study, that is much different.(引申

To do it well, you must plan it well.

比较:You want to do it well. And you must plan it well.

4.倒装句

Only when we fully recognize its importance can we have control of its essence.

比较:After we fully recognize its importance, we can have control of its essence.

No sooner had he arrived home than it began to rain.

比较:He arrived home. And it began to rain.

5.失衡句

whether or not he will come is still unknown to all the people present.

比较:No one present knows whether he will come or not.

That he has done it all by himself is known to everyone.

比较:Everyone knows that he has done it all by himself.

当然,句子并不是越长越好,也不是越复杂水平就越高。凡事皆有度。太多长句的堆砌让人觉得是买弄。有时侯,一个短小精辟的句子可以起到画龙点睛的作用。特别是在文末段尾。比如:

●As a creature, every one knows.

●Actions speak louder than words.

●Practice makes perfect.

作文中哪些词可以代替 然后 接着【三】

2、没钱那就去买便宜的东西好了

3、在肯德基一起喝茶的那个男生,也说不知道旧日恋人的消息。那个女孩曾和我同班,但不太熟,完全不知道她现在在哪儿做些什么。

4、想去遥远的'国家看看,却不想去附件的超市。

5、我怕生了孩子,只为自己活的人生就变成了为孩子活的人生。

6、不是我是护士,而是我的职业是护士。

7、人注定要受自由之苦。

8、我想住的家在这儿,我想挖的井儿在这,我想磨的石头是这块。曾经做什么都是迷茫,所以我很开心能拥有这份自然的坚信。

9、也不知何时起,工作不再是身份认同,并非是不安消失了,只不过那种必须要用什么来排解的原形不明的巨大东西,我现在已不再惧怕。

10、我想挖的井在这儿,我想磨的石头是这块,我最后的归宿在这里。这点我现在也深信不疑,也许永远都不会改变。

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