批卷子英语作文(英语优秀作业作文批语)

批卷子英语作文(英语优秀作业作文批语)

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批卷子英语作文(英语优秀作业作文批语)

批卷子英语作文【一】

今天早上,当我看到老师拿着上星期我们的试卷走进教室时,我心里忐忑不安,心里正想着:会考多少分呢?要是考不好怎么办?不,一定会考得好的,我在心里自己安慰自己。突然,我听到老师叫道:“徐世新。”我一听,心像揣着一只兔子似的“砰砰”跳着。我满怀信心地跑上了讲台。

当看到我的试卷上的分数时,我惊呆了!竟然才65分。我伤心到了极点,“怎么会没有考好呢?是不是老师改错了?”我来来回回的看着自己的考卷,千方百计的想找出可以给自己加分的地方,可是,找了半天也没有找到,只发现自己没有考好是因为有很多地方都是因为错别字被扣的分。

下课了,我心里幻想着:是不是很多同学也像我一样考不好呢?于是,我小心翼翼地问同学:“你考多少分?”同学说:“80分。”我心想:不是吧!难道其他同学的分数都比我的分数高?我一脸羞愧地从同学身边悄悄地走开了。

我暗下决心:以后一定要把写错别字的毛病改掉。认真的学习,争取考出一个好的成绩。

批卷子英语作文【二】

This is my first week in ** Senior Middle School.Everything here is new for me.Our school is an old school but it`s very beautiful.I have 50 new classmates in my class.They`re all very excellent, I think, and I felt a little sad.Because I`m too common.But come to think of it,it`s a very good thing.I believe I can also be very excellent if I study with such excellent classmates.I didn`t know why Ms *** chose me to be the committee of study.But I know it`s a good chance for me to raise my ability.All I can do is do my best in the future.I am sure that Ms *** and my classmates can help me when I do something wrong. Because they`re all very kind.It`s a pleasure to work and study with them.I`m really very happy.I`m not an outstanding student in this class,but I can do the same thing like others.I believe I won`t make anyone disappointed.

批卷子英语作文【三】

April 18th is a special day for us . because we have a spring outing . In the morning ,we get on the school bus with many titbits . First , we get to the Zhejiang Museum , and watch many antigues . We are excited to know “ the 7000 years in Zhejiang ” , then we come to the Zhongshan Park . We feel a little tired, so some of us sit on the grass to have a rest . but some classmates climb the artificial hills to explore something .

They look very happy . In the park ,there are many beautiful flowers and lovely birds. Everyone takes lots of pictures with them. In the afternoon, we come back to school. All of us are happy, although we feel tired. We think this spring outing is funny and unforgettable.

批卷子英语作文【四】

When I was a freshman in college I watched the film Gua Sha Treatment for the first time, now I am a junior student and I come back to review the movie from a multicultural aspect, I have many different feelings after watching the film again.

At the beginning of the film, XuDatong is given an award and later he delivers a speech. What makes me impressed most is in his speech he says “one day I will become one of you, a truly successful American, today this award proved that America is a true land of opportunity and I am the living proof of that.” At that moment Xu thinks he has realized his American Dream totally with his lovingly wife and adorable son. However, I think it is ironical that to make a speech like that and I assume it is made on purpose to hind a clue for the story's development. How many non—American people have such a beautiful American dream? One of my classmate studies in American now and before he went aboard he told me his American dream is he can stand at the top of the New York. To be honest, I also dream that one day I can get the Green Card living there happily and successfully maybe working at the Wall Street. When Xu gets the award he thinks he entirely melted in the melting pot neglecting the multicultural obstruct, later the plot goes against the way he thinks. And later Quinlan asked Xu'why you be the scapegoat of your father?' Xu answers 'because he is Chinese.' Then maybe Xu knows that there is always a wide gap between Chinese and American cultures.

The second scene is Xu hit his son Denis because Denis hit the son of xu's boss, at the middle of the film xu tells his boss that he hit his own son is only to show his respect to his boss John Quinlan, that time Quinlan feels puzzled “what a Chinese logic”,yes, American can never understand such a logic full of Chinese characteristic, because they respect everyone including the children, they won't beat a child to please the boss, and there is no such a conception of degree between employee and employer, they feel everyone is equal, which is quite different from china.

Connected to the second scene, the third difference I want to analyze is the care for the children. In America, people pay more attention to the right of children which can be seen from the law—leaving children alone at home is illegal, while in China it is so common that almost everyone may experience such loneliness. And Children Welfare Agency does work in America which shows the importance Americans attach to children's right. What's more, I remember a line 'No one won the case, especially the child.' In my opinion, it also manifests the universal concern from the American public to the children.

The fourth aspect is following the procedure, in the film, more than there times, the people focus on the rule, the law, the procedure. At the Christmas Eve Xu wants to return back to his home pretending as a Santa Claus, what a pity, the security recognizes him and persuades 'you are always a good tenement, never causes troubles for me.' And another scene is at the end of the film , the judge says 'I have to follow the procedure.' However, in China people always have to ask for a favor to do something, and later you have to pay back the favor,for myself, I prefer the American style, strict to the procedure.

The fifth and the last point is the humors, Quinlan says 'you can't fall, your health security is the company paid.' 'Datong, welcome home, maybe next time, you can come from the front door.' 'dady, why you come from the window' ' because we don't have a chimney.' I really adore this distinguished American humor, especially in dangerous situations, which is quite rare in China.

That's my whole reaction to Gua Sha Treatment.

批卷子英语作文【五】

上课铃打响了,我的心就像有一只很小很小的兔子似的`,在我的心中不停地跳着,并且越跳越高。我心中之所以有一只很小很小的小兔子,是因为期中测试卷改出来了,今天的这节课发期中考试卷。

老师还没进教室,我们都开始议论谁考的好,谁考的差。发考试卷的时候我的原来的同位彭?文对我说:“我不怕了,因为我问老师了,我和仝璐的考试成绩都是90分以上。”我问彭?文:“彭?文你知道我的期中考试成绩是多少分吗?”彭?文回答说:“我不知道你的期中考试的成绩是多少分。”

我的卷子发下来了,谁知,我的语文成绩才考了88分。并且错的题都是特别简单的题。有9分是扣在语文知识的里面,而作文才扣了3分。没想到这次期中考试的成绩是如此的差。1、2、3年级的时候,我的期中考试成绩都是90分到100分之间,而四年级都是80多分,数学也只不过是90多分。现在,只能看英语的分数了。

最后,老师宣布了英语的期中考试的成绩,我一听100分的没有我,90多分的没有我,80多分的没有我,70多分的没有我,60多分的才有我。原来,我的英语才考了68分。

放学了,我就哭了起来,这时我后悔极了:我为什么不好好学习呢?想到这里,我就再也不想玩了。

我又想:现在努力还不晚,只要努力成绩还会提高。于是我就立了一个学习计划:数学是每天做30道口算题;语文是每天把要背的自然段每天背一段;英语是每天把要写的英语单词写5个。

我想:这样一定会很快地把成绩提上去,争取下一次的期末考试的分数都是95到100的成绩!

批卷子英语作文【六】

Dear Dad,

Today is fathers day, for so many years Ive been seekig a way to express my heartfelt thanks for all you have done for me. Here comes it!

Thank you for always being there sharing my life when I need you most. Whenever I encounter difficulties, I never feel alone and vulnerable, because you will keep me on the right path. Im blessed to have you.

Thank you for offering me education and teaching me how to be a man. You always inspire me not by words, but by what you have done! Your efforts in the work, your loyalty to your friends, your responsibility for the family and your persistence in the life have already set me good examples in my own life.

Thank you for always appreciating my work, no matter how tiny it is! You have made me realize that its capacity not scores that really counts.

Dad, I love you and I will love you forever!

Yours beloved,

Li Ming

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