四级作文提前收吗【一】
Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先，提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段：提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段：正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段：摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次，提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性，连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity：段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛，也不可太具体，做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明，另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence：关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰，层层展开。
完整性(completeness：以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头，这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次，提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型：It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单，注意练习并接句的使用，会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as，如：
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头，句式简单，我们可以通过把since提前改变句式，如：
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后，提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法：millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论，辩论”的意思，而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.，相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略：使用最近所学的单词，如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后，我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文，以供参考：
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
四级作文提前收吗【二】
Dear Mary,
You said in your letter that many of your classmates wore fashionableclothes, but you couldn\'t afford them so you felt very depressed. There are dif-ferent views on people\'s clothes. The followings are my ideas:
Firstly, you shouldn\'t put too much emphasis on physical appearance.
Remember that the most important task for you today is to concentrate on yourstudies. No matter what you wear, you will really look your best when youcome out first in your examinations.
Secondly, you should understand that it is a fine virtue to live in fru-gality. Just as a famous saying goes, Frugality is the mother of virtue.
Since your family can\'t provide you with enough money to buy fashionableclothes, it is all the more necessary for you to try to lighten the financialburden of your family. And you will find the virtue of frugality benefit youa lot in your future life.
I hope you understand what I mean. Hope you will take a positive attitudetowards life and will be happy again when you read my letter.
Yours,
Anne
四级作文提前收吗【三】
??如8G时代可以提前来临最近5G时代的到来，引发了一场世纪大战，蝴蝶效应还在不断的继续。华为通信是我们中国的骄傲，苹果手机是我们超越的目标。4G降临时，世界还很温和，5G来临，却如海啸一般…那8G来临会是什么样呢？我们的生活会变成啥样呢？
经过6G、7G的洗礼，世界将会变得很成熟，不再会变得慌乱而无措，而我们的生活会更便捷更舒适…让我们来提前感受一下吧！
衣：\"啊，今天真热，换一件衬衫出去吧。天啊，都已经八点多了！来不及啦！”这个现象很常见很无奈对不对？在8G时代呀，我们穿的衣服都可以用软件来掌控，一件衣服可以让我们穿遍整个春夏秋冬。只要打开手机软件，挑一件自己喜欢的款式就行，想要什么颜色，轻轻一点，想要什么花纹，轻轻一点，OK，3D打印，10分钟搞定！这件智能衣服还会根据你的体温、健康状况以及外面环境的温度来调节舒适度。当外面刮风下雨时，领子会自动增高，帽子变成一把伞，十分的贴心，出门的时候再也不怕天气会突然改变了。
食：现在的大人很辛苦，劳累了一天，拖着疲惫的身子回家，还得做晚饭吃，连坐在沙发上休息一会儿都难，总不能饿肚子呀，你只能感觉到生活好累啊！但到了8G的时代，那就不一样了，智能厨房会自动帮你做饭，你想吃什么好吃的，只要在手机上下达命令，厨房就会立刻开工。假如你今天吃的菜厨房里没有了，那么根据你下的菜单，新鲜的食材就会从配餐中心直接送到家。假如今天是你的生日，厨房会根据您平常的口味制作蛋糕，而且会根据你邀请的人数制做尺寸大小。逢年过节，厨房会自动生成相应的节日菜单，不需要你动手，只需你坐享其成。
住：一栋房子，可能我们从小住到大，很多年都不会有变化，因为爸爸妈妈怕装修不环保，影响我们的健康。但是8G时代，我们的房子啊，可以一天一个样。首先是四季恒温恒湿，什么昆明的气温、巴马的负离子、海边的风、春天的雨…想要什么感觉？只需轻松一点墙面的按钮就能立刻享受到！没有时间出去度假怎么办？8G时代不用愁，所有的\'墙面都是高级屏面，我们只需对着墙面轻轻的指点，上海、巴黎、威尼斯、原始森林、沙漠、马尔代夫，想到哪就到哪，装饰建筑可以随意搭配，你只需要假装旅游…
行：“呀，已经七点半了！上学要迟到啦！”每当此时我多希望能拥有特异功能呀！8G时代的孩子就不用为此而烦恼了，那时人们穿的鞋子下面都有特殊的装置，可以扫描前方的路，看到前面有遮挡物，就会自动绕开，速度很快，绝不会让你迟到。8G时代的汽车超厉害，它可以自动行驶，自动识别路线和障碍，规划合理路线。车子里面的座椅可以根据你的体形而调整舒适度，而且车子空间超级大，可以吃饭、可以睡觉、可以玩耍。而且车子里面的玻璃可以变成LED大屏，小朋友可以在车里随意观看动画片呢！而且以后汽车都不用汽油了，只需充电，充电五分钟，行驶两小时！还有我们的8G高铁，要比飞机更快更安全，可以在十米高空行驶，大大节省空间，特别神奇。将来上午我在南京吃辣油馄饨，中午我在北京吃烤鸭，晚上我在新疆吃烤全羊，第二天清晨我又回到了南京，嘻嘻…
在8G的世界里，我们现在的想象都会变成现实，科幻动画里天马行空的创造发明，都会变成8G时代里普普通通的东西，只要你敢想象，就会有奇迹发生…如果8G可以提前到来，该有多好啊！我相信，只要我们好好学习科技知识，这一天很快就会到来……
四级作文提前收吗【四】
春天， 万物复苏，小河水哗哗地顺流而下； 活泼机灵的小鸟们在枝头喳喳地纵情歌唱； 小草们神不知鬼不觉地从地下探出了脑袋，大地换上了绿色的新衣； 小野花们争先恐后地展示着自己的美丽； 一棵棵大树好像正在返老还童， 抽出嫩黄色的新芽；。年迈的`凤凰木也紧跟着春天的步伐， 吐出米粒大小的嫩叶， 就像刚出生的婴儿那般娇嫩。
夏天，太阳像一个火炉似地炙烤着地面。凤凰木的叶子早已变成了深绿色，枝条也向四周扩展了许多，变成了一把绿色的大伞。当太阳透过茂密的树叶筛下一束束金光时， 美丽的凤凰花绽开了一张张笑脸，好像给凤凰木披上了红色的霞衣。
秋天，凤凰树的叶子慢慢地变成了金黄色，在微风吹拂下纷纷飘落下来， 给地面铺上了一层厚厚的金色地毯。课间十分钟，我和小伙伴们在凤凰树下尽情地玩耍、嬉闹，甭提有多高兴了。
冬天，刺骨的寒风从耳边呼呼地刮过，古老的凤凰木褪去了繁华，仿佛一个弯着腰、知识渊博的老学者，正在讲述着她一百多年来的沧桑岁月， 并勉励我们克服各种困难、勤奋学习，成为对国家有贡献的人才。
这就是我们百年老校的百年古树---凤凰木。
四级作文提前收吗【五】
Dear all,
I am writing this letter to express my gratitude to my parents for teaching me to be positive and to be strong. “Educating the mind without educating the heart is no education at all.” is the opinion held by Aristotle. It is the experience of our forefathers, however, it is correct even today, including my parenting.
It is widely acknowledged that parenting, which can also be explained as family education, is of great significance in our character forming and manner acquiring. To be more detailed, setting good examples instead of just giving precepts is the greatest achievement of my parents. They not only taught me to think for the best and prepare for the worst; they taught me how. They not only told me the benefits of being strong in mind; they proved it. All those things require huge amount of time and work, but it’s worth it.
Without my parents’ contribution and education, I would never be who I am now. But most importantly, I would never be more gratitude to them than today.
Yours,
XXX
