假如你是刚来江西某所学校教英语JeffGreen,想在国庆节期间去上海东方明珠塔看看,因此
想在网上预订开心人大酒店的房间。请根据下面提示的要点给酒店客房部杨小姐发一封
e-mail咨询情况。1,酒店离东方明珠塔有多远?去那儿是否方便?2,从火车站到酒店应
该乘几路公共汽车?在哪一站下车。3,酒店能否帮忙找一辆出租车专供你使用?4,你想坐
飞机回来,酒店能否帮你提前购买飞机票?参考词汇:上海东方明珠塔theOrientalPearl
TV,TowerofShanghai.预订一个标准间reserveastandardroom.
DearMissYang
DuringtheNationalDayholidays.I’mgoingtoShanghaitovisittheOrientalPearlTV
TowerofShanghai.Iplantoreserveastandardroomformyselfinyourhotel,soIwanttoget
someinformation.First,couldyoupleasetellmehowfaryourhotelisfromtheOrientalPearlTV
TowerofShanghai?Willyoupleasetellmeifitisconvenienttogetthere?Second,couldyou
tellmehowIcangettoyourhotelfromthetrainstation?Which
busshouldItakeandatwhichbusstopshouldIgetoff?Third,Iwanttoknowifyourhotelcan
getataxithatwillonlyserveme.Finally,IplantogetbacktoNanchangbyair,andIwonderif
youcanreserveaplaneticketforme.
I’mlookingforwardtoyourreply.Thankyou.
JeffGreen
这个星期,我和爸爸、妈妈一起做了两个灯笼,一个灯笼是大大的兔子灯,一个灯笼是普通的灯笼。
我来说说我和爸爸做的兔子灯吧!那一天,爸爸拿来了许多铁丝’我问:“这些铁丝是干什么用的?”“你不是说要做一个灯笼吗?”我拿来铁丝做兔子灯笼的架子,“我能帮忙吗?”爸爸摇摇头说:"不行,你还没有这么大的力气,你在旁边看着,以后长大了可以自己做兔子灯笼。”我只能坐在旁边观看,可是我还是忍不住上前去给爸爸递工具和铁丝,兔子灯笼的架子做好了。接下来,爸爸让我拿来一些纸把兔子灯笼封,这下我可以帮忙了,爸爸把纸剪下来,我把纸的边缘弄上胶,这样下来这兔子灯笼基本完成了。可还是有点不好,原来它的眼睛和鼻子没有,咱们拿来水粉颜料,把兔子灯笼的眼睛和鼻子画上,这样一个真正的兔子灯笼做完了。
哎呀,做一个兔子灯笼真难呀!
(一,介绍你SpringFestival.
TherearemanytraditionalfestivalsinChina.MyfavoritefestivalistheSpringFestival.It
comesinJanuaryorFebruary.TheSpringFestivalisoneofthemostimportantfestivalsin
China.BeforetheSpringFestivalpeopleoftenpreparesomethingnewanddeliciousfood.On
theeveoftheSpringFestival,peopleoftengettogethertohaveabigdinner.Chicken,fishand
dumplingsarespecialfood.DuringtheSpringFestival,familyoftengotovisittheirrelatives
andfriends.Childrencangetmuchluckymoney.IliketheSpringFestivalbecauseIcanspenda
lotofhappytimewithmyfamily.
(二介绍中秋节
TherearemanytraditionalfestivalsinChina.IliketheMid-autumnFestivalbest.It’sone
ofthemostimportantfestivalsinChina.ItcomesonlunarAugust15th.Familyoftengettogether
forthefestival.OntheMid-autumnnightfamilyhaveabigdinner,thentheyenjoythefull
moonandsharethedeliciousmooncakeswiththeirfamily.Themooncakescarrypeople’sbest
wishestothefamilytheloveandmiss.IlikethisfestivalbecauseIcanspendahappytimewith
myfamily.
好的文章动静结合、张弛有度有节奏感。句式也是一样,要有变化性,这不仅能使文章更生动,也是语言表达方式的需要和表达能力的体现。句式的`变化,主要是要注意两点:
● 不要从头至尾使用一种句型。
● 长短句结合。
由于语言功底的欠缺和惯用思维,很多人写的文章一种句式到头,如:
I think …
I hope…
He does it.
He will take it
这样的文章虽然意思表达出来了,却显得呆板,欠生动。解决的办法是:
1.间或使用主从复句。
Because he is very much determined, he will carry it out this time. (原因
比较:He is very much determined. He will carry it out this time.
2.使用分词结构句。
The weather being fine, a large number of people went sightseeing.
比较:The weather is fine. A large number of people went sightseeing.
Africa is the second largest continent, its size being about three times that of China.
比较:Africa is the second largest continent. Its size is about three times that of China.
3.使用不定式句。
To be or not to be, that is a question. (莎士比亚
To study or not to study, that is much different.(引申
To do it well, you must plan it well.
比较:You want to do it well. And you must plan it well.
4.倒装句
Only when we fully recognize its importance can we have control of its essence.
比较:After we fully recognize its importance, we can have control of its essence.
No sooner had he arrived home than it began to rain.
比较:He arrived home. And it began to rain.
5.失衡句
whether or not he will come is still unknown to all the people present.
比较:No one present knows whether he will come or not.
That he has done it all by himself is known to everyone.
比较:Everyone knows that he has done it all by himself.
当然,句子并不是越长越好,也不是越复杂水平就越高。凡事皆有度。太多长句的堆砌让人觉得是买弄。有时侯,一个短小精辟的句子可以起到画龙点睛的作用。特别是在文末段尾。比如:
●As a creature, every one knows.
●Actions speak louder than words.
●Practice makes perfect.
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