襄阳下雨的英语作文五年级【一】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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襄阳下雨的英语作文五年级【二】
星期五的一天都在下雨，到了下午放学雨还在下。小明从外面跑了进来，身上被雨淋了个湿透。奶奶问：“你不是拿着雨伞的吗?”小明不好意思地说：“我把雨伞忘到教室了.”奶奶边给小明擦头一边说：“你什么时候能把粗心大意的毛病改掉呢?”小明说：“我一定要改掉这个坏习惯，做一个全面优秀的好孩子。”
襄阳下雨的英语作文五年级【三】
下午放学，忽然下起大雨，小丁赶紧往家跑，全身被雨水淋湿了。
回到家里，奶奶赶紧拿来毛巾，给小丁擦头上的雨水，边擦边说：“这雨下的太突然了，我想拿雨伞去接你，又不知道你从哪条路回来。”接着又心疼地说：“冷了吧?我去给你倒热水喝。”小丁说，“我长大了，这些事我自己能做。”奶奶高兴地说：“你真是个懂事的孩子。”
奶奶和小丁都会心地笑了。
襄阳下雨的英语作文五年级【四】
六月的天像小孩子的脸，说变就变。这天，早上还微风阵阵、阳光明媚，中午又忽然热得让人口干舌燥，可到了黄昏，天又一下子翻了脸，阴云密布的。树杈在风中摇晃，雷声隆隆，一道闪电划过长空。我正走在放学的路上，豆大的雨点劈头盖脸地打在我身上，我们不顾一切地往家跑。忽然听到后面“哎哟”一声，回头一看，小军的脚扭伤了，坐在地上哭了起来，我把书包挂在脖子上，背起小军深一脚、浅一脚的向小军家走去。雨像专门跟我作对似的，越下越大。我回到家时，衣服早已湿透了。姥姥看到雨水顺着裤腿淌了一地,连忙拿来毛巾一边擦头发一边问：“咱家这么近，你怎么才回来?我去给你送伞都没有找到你。”我把书包丢在地上对姥姥讲了刚才发生的事。姥姥笑着说：“你真是一个好孩子!赶紧去喝点板兰根，不然会感冒的。”
襄阳下雨的英语作文五年级【五】
一个星期五的'下午，小明放学准备回家。突然下起雨来，雨越下越大，小明越跑越快。小明跑在路上想：“咦，平时不下雨的时候都觉得家离学校挺近的，可是，一下雨怎么感觉家离学校那么远呢!”
豆大的雨点打在小明身上，衣服渐渐湿透了。好不容易才跑到家门口，连忙敲门大喊道：“奶奶开门!”奶奶在家已经是焦急不安，一听到叫门声，就立刻跑过去开门。小明气喘吁吁地说：“奶奶，我回来了。我成了一只落汤鸡了!”奶奶一边用毛巾给小明擦头发，一边心疼地说：“冷不冷，乖乖!快换衣服。”奶奶多疼爱孙子呀!
仔细看图，发挥你的想象，说说图上有哪些人?可能发生了一件什么事?图上的小朋友和奶奶都做了些什么?说了些什么?
