五年级英语作文感觉怎么样【一】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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五年级英语作文感觉怎么样【二】
Computer is a very useful machine. Some of them are big, but some of them are very small .Many people like playing computer. Computer has many functions, so that people can do a lot of things by computer, like watching movies, listening to the music or playing games. It can make our lives very colorful and convenient. Various people can make good use of computer. Children can use computer to learn and play games. Parents can use computers to work. I think computer is a kind of wonderful and interesting machine, so I like computer very much.
电脑是一种很有用的机器。有的电脑很大，但是有的'很小。很多人喜欢玩电脑。电脑有很多功能，人们可以i用电脑做很多事情，比如说看电影，听音乐或者玩游戏。它可以使我们的生活充满色彩和便利。各种各样的人都可以好好利用电脑。小孩子可以用电脑来学习和玩游戏。父母可以用电脑来工作。我认为电脑是一种神奇有趣的机器，所以我很喜欢电脑。
五年级英语作文感觉怎么样【三】
与88岁的`太爷爷一起生活，我品味到了幸运的感觉。
太爷爷的身体很硬朗，但毕竟是年过八旬的老人了，行走虽然稳健但费腰力，每晚洗脚就有些力不从心，所以洗脚的事情落在爸爸的身上。有时爸爸不在家，给太爷爷洗脚的任务就留给了妈妈。太爷爷当然会拒绝，但妈妈还是坚持，有几次，我看到太爷爷布满皱纹的眼角上挂着泪珠。我问：“太爷爷，为什么哭啊？”太爷爷就摇摇头，我实在不能领会这泪的真正含义。
有一天，爸爸工作很晚回家，累得直不起腰来。我看到这情景，脑子里突然闪过一个念头。我端来一盆热水，走过去拉着爸爸来到沙发边坐下，说：“来，爸爸，我给你洗洗脚。”爸爸傻了，看着我，笑着说：“这不需要！”我说：“可以的，让我试试。”爸爸支吾了半天冒出一句：“爸爸的脚……太臭了。”“臭，我不怕，太爷爷的脚也臭，你和妈妈不是也在洗吗？”爸爸被我说服了，脱去袜子，把疲劳的双脚伸进温暖的水盆中。我开始给爸爸洗脚，忽然抬头看见爸爸的眼角里流出了泪水。我非常诧异地问：“你哭了，为什么？”爸爸说：“你太爷爷为什么流泪？大概就是这个原因吧。”我似懂非懂，妈妈走过来说：“你现在还小，等你长大了，有了孩子以后，就知道太爷爷和爸爸的心情了。”那时的我没能完全理解，猜谜一样又将目光投向了太爷爷。太爷爷笑了，一边笑一边用手抹眼睛。
于是，我总在水盆中看到一种风景，很自然，很平常，很和睦，很幸运。那水盆就变成了一种奇特的乐器，给人以特殊的感觉，水盆中的手和脚便弹奏出了一首优美的乐曲……
五年级英语作文感觉怎么样【四】
老大叫视觉。外界的物体反射出来的光线依次经过眼球的各个部分最后落在视网膜上，形成一个物像，把这些信息在一瞬间传给大脑，这样就形成了视觉。每天早上当我们起来看到这美丽的世界，这完全就是靠视觉呀！如果没有它的帮助，我们怎么能快乐地学习和生活呀！不过它也有可怜的时候呀！有的同学不懂得珍惜它，天天打游戏，天天长时间看电视、玩手机，弄得它疲惫不堪！当视力严重下降时，只好在鼻梁上架一副眼镜。
老二叫嗅觉。人类通过鼻腔的嗅觉感应器感受到物体的气味再传给大脑，从而分辨出物体的气味。比方说当你吃东西的时候，你用鼻子闻一闻，如果发现有臭味，那就说明东西变质了，如果吃了就会危害健康。如果你到了一个美丽的大花园，闻着花香你是不是特别爽！
老三叫味觉。当食物放进人的.嘴里通过舌头的感受从而分辨出不同的味道。通常有酸、甜、苦、辣、咸5种。每天吃饭时感受到食物所带给我们的快感，那是味觉起了作用。把甜甜的糖放进我们的嘴里，是不是感到很幸福呢？
老四叫听觉。当外界的声波传到耳朵里震动耳膜，通过听觉感受器传到大脑里从而行成了听觉。当我们听到老师的醇醇教导，当我们听到同学们的欢声笑语，当我们听到大自然的虫鸣鸟叫，感觉不错吧，那都是听觉的功劳。
老五叫触觉。当全身皮肤上的神经细胞受到外界物体的刺激从而行成触觉。当你把手放进冰水里是不是感到非常的凉，当你摸到课桌时是不是感到非常硬，当你和妈妈拥抱时是不是感到很温暖。
每天这5位朋友都默默地帮助着我们，它们让我们感受到了这个世界的美丽和幸福。希望大家保护好它们，让我们的生活更加快乐吧！
五年级英语作文感觉怎么样【五】
一天中午，我跑到妈妈办公室逛逛，被“抓”住并得知自己当选了大队文娱委员的消息时，高兴得一蹦三尺高。我蹦蹦跳跳地回到教室，一下午都乐滋滋的：哈，比班长名气响，比班长权力大，比班长多一条鲜红的杠！那时我只顾着高兴，压根儿没想过原来要牺牲很多课余玩乐的时间！
第二天晨会上，大队辅导员黄老师宣布了大队干部名单。“叶心妍！”耶！有我！在上千道羡慕的眼光中，我抬头挺胸，大步走上主席台。黄老师给我们佩戴大队委员三条杠标志——我人生中目前的最高荣誉！之前为班级为同学默默付出，得到大家认可，努力学习争取优秀成绩获得老师赞赏，在这一刻，我觉得特别自豪！佩戴着大队干部的标志，我的头抬得更高了，声音也变响了，嘻嘻，因为我可以名正言顺管理学校了！
现实的空间总是有限。我便总是奢望着在文字之间，让灵魂去流浪。我循着大漠孤音，领略了余秋雨笔下那“巨人成了侏儒，侏儒也成了巨人”的阳关雪，又乘着飘飞在黄土塬上的高歌，回味着史铁生梦中“遥远的清平湾”。我的耳边忽然响起钢琴奏出的华尔兹舞曲，它来自于马尔克斯的灵魂归宿，是那被一阵飓风卷走了百年孤独的马孔多。千万个声音同时在天际炸开，千万个世界霎时间向我奔来，梦幻般的旅程接踵而至。我合上书本，细细回味一番，始悟生命之乐、人生之幸，岂复有读书之大哉！
阅读之幸福，始于流浪文字之间，阅尽人间百态。昔者，曹雪芹十年删改，笔墨之间写尽人生百味，世态炎凉，“千红一窟、万艳同杯”岂不叫人扼腕叹息？“偷得梨蕊三分白，借得梅花一缕魂”岂不让人拍案叫绝？“食尽鸟投林，落得个白茫茫大地真干净”岂不使人寒心战栗，感慨万千？一本《石头记》，可谓字字珠玑，句句肯綮，细嚼慢品，此妙何及？世间擅于遣词造句之才人不胜枚举，而工于驾驭故事、排布情节者也不乏其人。何以曹公呕心沥谱成的一曲红楼成了千古绝唱？我以为，文字之妙，容不得空泛的浮华之音，容不得玩弄人心的矫揉造作之态。唯其以如履薄冰、如临深渊的创作心怀，以“衣带渐宽终不悔，为伊消得人憔悴”的奉献精神，兼以剖开肉，见其精魂之意志而写成的文字，才能称其为“妙”，也只有这样的作品，才能给读者带来美的体验、收获的快感以及幸福的洗礼。
阅读之幸福，成于在灵魂流浪的.旅行中，且行且思，不断发现更为真实的世界，更为真实的自己。前文所述乃是作家单方面的努力成果，它们都或明或暗蕴藏在文字中。俄国作家果戈理有言：“艺术家的一切自由和轻快的东西，都是用极大的压迫而得到的，也就是伟大的努力的结果。”而作为受体，读者就是这个成果的见证者与检验者。如果作品展现出来的是黑暗与痛苦，读者就要帮助作者寻找光明，共同期盼着希望之曙光；而如果作品展现出来的是自由与轻快，读者就要看到作者内心深处的压迫与抑郁，抚慰那颗晦暗的星辰。在这个美好的过程中，阅读之人拯救了作者，更度化了自我，这是以一颗最真挚的心灵去追求真之更真。比如在余华的《活着》中，福贵的一生如一幅泛黄枯朽的画卷，在我眼前铺开。福贵的儿子抽过度而，我哭得不能自已。当他的外孙吃豆噎时，我甚至觉得胸口闷着一口恶气，难以呼吸。我逐渐明白：最远的远方，是活着；最近的眼前，亦是活着。无论有多少痛苦需要承受，无论孤独与厄运怎样腐蚀人的心灵，活着，如同一盏暗淡却永不熄灭的长明灯，让人心安。我在余华的文字中领悟了，成长了，我自己的心灵接住了余华抛下的碎片。
有一种解释是，人生的幸福与充实，来源于内心的丰富与宽广，来源于灵魂的开阔与自由。阅读，应该是幸福最可靠的来源之一。你只需要寻着一个静谧的午后，双手摩娑着书页的纹理，便会走进一个全新的世界。去流浪，去发现，去追寻，从此刻开始，做一个幸福的人。
五年级英语作文感觉怎么样【六】
现在有好多人住高楼，大多冷清清的，邻居之间要么不认识，要么碰面也没啥表示，最多说句“上班啦、回来啦”之类的客套话。而我所住的这个楼层则大不同，整天热热闹闹、和和睦睦的。
我们家住在13楼，楼道宽敞，干净整洁，总共有7户人家。这一层有4个小孩子，跟我年龄都差不多，3个女生和1个男生。几个孩子中，我最大，是组长，小徐是老二，另两个上四年级。
寒暑假时，我们几个小孩子来到走廊上，把自家的自行车、滑板车、溜冰鞋都全搬出来，用各种不同的方式来玩抓人游戏。有时候我们还会做一些大家怎么也想不到的“恶作剧”。我们经常相互串门，今天到我家看金鱼，明日到他家看小狗，总是东家进，西家出。我这个组长常带他们下楼去小区里玩。晚上相约一起去体育馆打篮球，去江滨路滑冰。进进出出时总是很兴奋，在楼道里闹哄哄、叫嚷嚷的。楼下的住户对我们这层十分不满，老是到物业投诉。哎，没办法，谁让我们这层孩子多哩！
家长也像我们一样经常一起进，一起出。妈妈们约好一起去买文具，一起去买衣服；而爸爸们总会去山上骑骑车，拍拍照，晚上有空还相互串门研究“茶道”。我们每家还在网上购买了同样的鞋柜，每家穿一样的拖鞋。
到了每年的正月初八，走廊上会摆上两张大桌子，几家子人热热闹闹吃个“团圆饭”。每家的“厨师”都会烧一个自己最拿手的好菜，让大家分享。我们几个小孩总会为座位的事“吵”上一架，弟弟妹妹们都要抢着跟我或是老二挨着坐，可把我们美得。当爱吃的菜端上桌来，勺子乒乒乓乓打架，美食被大伙儿一抢而光。有些时候，家长们会让我们一起唱个歌或合作表演一段三句半。大家吃得很开心，吃完后，总会拍一张集体照做留念。到了“五一”或“国庆”长假，几家人总会约好一起出去玩个两三天，13层的小小旅游团好不热闹！逢上谁的爸爸妈妈出差或是有事晚上不能回来，那家的小孩是不用愁没人陪的，家长打个电话，孩子就可以在另一家吃饭或留宿，跟自己家一样随便。妈妈总会对我说：“女儿啊！咱们运气实在是太好啦，有这么一个大家庭，有福同享有难同当。”我也觉得自己很幸运，远亲不如近邻嘛！
五年级英语作文感觉怎么样【七】
一个晴朗的星期天，小猪明明准备去公园玩它早早的就起了床，匆匆的收拾完了，叫妈妈做的早饭都没吃，就拿了两根香蕉走出了家门。
小猪走到了马路旁，把香蕉扔的满地都是。这被散步的大象伯伯看见了，它对小猪说:小猪，你怎么能把香蕉皮扔到地上呢？你知道吗？你把香蕉皮扔到地上会有横很多虫子在上面，还会把一些人绊倒的！而小猪却不以为然的对大象伯伯说:你烦不烦呀，老头，多管闲事！说完小猪得意的走了。大象伯伯边叹气边把地上香蕉皮捡起来扔到垃圾桶里。
小猪正得意的走着，突然听见一声惨叫。小猪赶紧跑了过去，它看见自己的好朋友达达不小心被一块西瓜皮绊倒了裤子都被刮烂了，小熊猫达达坐在地上直哭，明明赶紧扶起了达达。让它坐在公园的椅子上休息，它把地上的西瓜皮捡到垃圾桶里。过了一会，终于捡完了。它对达达说:你没事吧！你看我都变成这样子了，还没事？不知道是哪个缺德的家伙弄的。小猪知只好说出了实话:对不起，是我扔的。……在小猪的连连到歉下，小熊猫原谅了小猪。
从此以后，小猪在再也不乱扔垃圾，成了一个清洁工，天天为动物们打扫卫生。
