生命是宝贵的,也是美好的。同时,我觉得生命更是一种坚持,只有坚持不放弃,才能有美好的明天。
前段时间,我和舅舅发现邻居家阳台上的那盆吊兰已经奄奄一息了,可能是因为放在厨房的阳台上被油烟熏的缘故吧,再加上长时间没有人管理。只见它的叶子绝大部分已发黄枯萎,垂头丧气地低着头。舅舅顺手剪下一束,对我说:“如果它就这样了,太遗憾了!我们来救救它吧。”我满脸诧异的问:“怎么救啊?它都没有根,显然没有生命力了!”可舅舅却说:“让我们来试一下吧!”于是我们把这株小吊兰插到一个空余的花盆里,又小心翼翼地给它松了松土,浇了浇水。
过了两天,我怀着无比的好奇的心跑去看小吊兰,只见它原本枯萎发黄的叶子已慢慢伸开,而颜色也逐渐由黄变绿了。我想:难道它在努力地恢复生命力吗?又过了两三天,我再次去看小吊兰,惊奇地发现,它的顶端处竟然长出了一片新的嫩叶,嫩黄浅绿,过了几天又长出好几片,之后的生命力越来越旺盛了。那小小的吊兰里,包含着多么顽强的生命力啊,它如同一个婴儿离开母体,居然在没有根,没有养分给予的恶劣环境下,不屈向上,茁壮生长,这小小的吊兰居然如此的坚强!我的心头怦然一震,这一震,使我明白了生命的意味是什么,是——坚持!
从小小的吊兰身上,我明白了一个道理:一定要珍惜生命,热爱生命,只有不放弃,不抛弃,才能让有限的生命体现出无限的价值。我想:植物都能如此,更何况人!
导入:
第1段:提出一种现象或某个决定作为议论的话题
As a student, I am strongly in favour of the decision. (亮明自己的观点是赞成还是反对
The reasons for this may be listed as follows. (过渡句,承上启下
正文:
第2段:First of all... Secondly... Besides...(列出2~3个赞成或反对的`理由
结论:
第3段:In conclusion, I believe that... (照应第1段,构成"总—分—总"结构
时间在悄无声息的流走。朱自清爷爷说过“燕子去了有再来的时候,桃花谢了有再开的时候,杨柳枯了有再青的时候……”但时间去了永远也回不来了。每一秒都在飞速流走,走在青草上,飞在空气中……时间一去不复返,看着真有一些心痛。想起吃饭时候,时间从我的饭碗中过去溜走;洗脸的时候,时间从流水中飞去;休息睡觉时候,它便大步大步的从你身上跨过,从你脚边飞去。
时间是消无声息的,人世间没有人不走过风风雨雨,大大小小的困难的事。但在途中要和困难作斗争和时间赛跑。用最短的时间把一件事做好,这样不是又节省了时间又高兴又兴奋,多么好!而在困难中为了更好更快的做好它一定要认真思考用最短的时间完成它。
记得每一次上学的时间,我总和时间赛跑,5秒钟到达一个地方,5秒钟到达一个地方……用最快速度花最少的时间。浪费时间就是浪费自己的生命,一天只有24小时,等你再和月亮告别的时候,等你和阳光再见面的时候,这又算溜走了一日。但时间却是一个很古怪的东西。也许你珍惜它,却不能留住它;也许你合理安排它,但它依然飞之而去。
记得鲁迅先生说过:“时间就像是海绵里的水,只要用力挤,总还是有的。”是啊!只要愿意把时间挤出来,时间是有的,但不是人人都能这样。有的人贪玩好耍,事做完了就无所事事,一点也不珍惜时间。但珍惜时间的人即使事多,他也能挤出时间,这也许就是鲁迅先生告诉我们的道理吧!
时间流去是悄无声息的,在4000多日子里,我有什么值得回忆的呢!在这么多日子里我除了匆匆学习以外,还有什么呢?只有匆匆罢了,只有学习罢了!时间是一天天减少,人的肉体生命是短暂的,让这平凡的肉体放射出无限的光芒,这既不简单,也不艰难。这就看你如何安排时间:是白白浪费,还是惜时如金。这一切就在你一念之间,而就是这一念之间将决定你的命运。珍惜时间就是珍惜你的生命,珍惜时间就等于决定了你的命运。珍惜时间,奋发图强,你将成为一个有用的人。
珍惜时间!!!
1。 头绪分明,脉络清楚
写好记叙文,首先要头绪分明,脉络清楚,明确文章要求写什么。要对所写的事件或人物进行分析,弄清事件发生、发展一直到结束的整个过程,然后再收集选取素材。这些素材都应该跟上述五个“ W ”和一个“ H ”有关。尽管不是每篇记叙文里都必须包括这些“ W ”和“ H ”,但动笔之前,围绕五个“ W ”和“ H ”进行构思是必不可少的。
2。 突出中心,详略得当
在文章的框架确定后,对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的。选材要注意取舍,应该从表现文章主题的需要出发,分清主次,定好详略。要突出重点,详写细述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节,略写粗述那么非关键的次要情节。面面俱到反而使情节罗列化,使人不得要领。这一点是写好记叙文要解决的一个基本问题,也需要一定的技巧。如:
One night a man came to our house and told me, "There is a family with eight children。 They have not eaten for days。" I took some food with me and went。
When I finally came to that family, I saw the faces of those little children disfigured (破坏外貌) by hunger。 There was no sorrow or sadness in their faces, just the deep pain of hunger。
I gave the rice to the mother。 She divided the rice in two, and went out, carrying half the rice。 When she came back, I asked her, "Where did you go?" she gave me this simple answer, "To my neighbors — they are hungry also!"
3。 用活语言,准确生动
记叙文要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事、物加以叙述。一篇好的记叙文的语言既要准确、生动,又要表现力强,这样才能把人、事描写得具体生动,其可读性才强。试比较下面一篇例文修改的前后效果。
原文:
One day Xiaoqiang was wandering away。 He was soon lost among people and traffic。 He could not find the way back home and started crying。 Just then, two young students who were passing by found him standing alone in front of a shop and crying。 They went up to Xiaoqiang and asked him what had happened。 Xiaoqiang told them how he got lost and where he lived。 The two students decided to take him home。 Mother was pleased to see Xiaoqiang come back safe and sound。 She invited the two students into the house and gave them some money, but they didn't take it。 She served them with tea but they left。
修改后:
The other day, five-year-old Xiaoqiang left home alone and wandered happily in the street。 After some time, he felt hungry so he wanted to go back home。 But he found he was lost among the crowded people and heavy traffic。 When he could not find the way home, he started and crying。 Just then, two young students who were passing by from school found him sanding crying in front of a shop。 They immediately went up to him。
"Little boy, why are you standing here crying?" they asked。
"I want Mom, I go home。" said the boy, still crying。
"Don't worry, we'll send you home。"
And they spent the next two hours looking for the boy's house。 With the help of a policeman, they finally found it。
When the worried mother saw her son come back safe and sound, she was so thankful and she invited the students into her house。 Gratefully, she offered them some money, saying it was a way to express her thanks, but the young students firmly refused it and left without even a cup of tea。
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