荔湾区英语作文六年级【一】
秋天是游览的好季节。今天，我和爸爸妈妈一起到荔湾湖公园游览，一阵凉风迎面扑来，让人感受到十分清爽。我们顺着弯弯曲曲小路来到小翠轩，小翠轩最显眼的是一座石拱桥，探到池边，池底铺满了鹅卵石，有好多好多的小金鱼在水中自由自在的嬉戏、玩耍。池边有一棵白玉兰，枝叶婆娑，好像是一个绿衣女子在静静地观鱼。
我们走出小翠轩，漫步林间，树上飘下来许多落叶,有些像蝴蝶,在空中翩翩起舞，又像从树中飞下的一群小鸟，叽叽喳喳地落到地面觅食去。还有的像正在窃窃私语的鸟一样，慢慢地落到地上。还有的.像一位跳芭蕾的舞蹈家一样，在空中飞舞起来…… 落叶似乎和我们打招呼，我也轻轻地点头，我走在遍地铺金的小路上，欣赏着大自然的杰作。
在林子旁有一个湖，波光粼粼，像一条条金链在飘动，湖面上一艘艘游船滑过湖面，船尾拖着一条长长的白白的浪花。清澈的湖边有一排柳树，柳树姑娘把自己的头发放在水里梳洗，秋风吹过，把柳树姑娘的头发吹起来，像一排绿色的彩条在空中飞舞。
我们陶醉在这美丽的景色中，使人流连忘返。
荔湾区英语作文六年级【二】
星期五放学，我回到家里，刚放下书包，阿姨就带我去荔湾湖公园玩。
荔湾湖在中山八路那里，是一个很大的公园。公园里有一条长长的小河，河里有很多各种各样的.鱼儿。我们去到那里，我就拿出胶袋里的面包渣，扔在水面上，过了一会儿，好多鱼跃上水面，它们大口大口地抢着吃着面包渣。
然后，我和阿姨去公园里的“游乐场”打枪。我打中了“老虎”、“老鹰”和“大象”。因为我枪枪都打中了，阿姨说我很厉害。我听了很高兴，对她说：“因为我以前在学校里学过打枪啊。”
最后，我又去玩碰碰车。我上了车，心里觉得很紧张，怕自己的车被别人撞到。一会儿，车开动了，我的车四处乱碰，多次碰到别人的车，他们的车也经常碰到我坐的车，车子一撞就会发出“嘭嘭”声，真好玩！
这个时候已经很晚了，阿姨说：“我们回家吧！”我说：“好吧！”于是，我们就依依不舍地回家了。
荔湾区英语作文六年级【三】
秋色宜人、漫江碧透，秋天悄悄地来到了美丽的荔湾湖公园。
秋天是游览的好季节。今天，我和爸爸妈妈一起到荔湾湖公园游览，一阵凉风迎面扑来，让人感受到十分清爽。我们顺着弯弯曲曲小路来到小翠轩，小翠轩最显眼的是一座石拱桥，探到池边，池底铺满了鹅卵石，有好多好多的小金鱼在水中自由自在的嬉戏、玩耍。池边有一棵白玉兰，枝叶婆娑，好像是一个绿衣女子在静静地观鱼。
我们走出小翠轩，漫步林间，树上飘下来许多落叶,有些像蝴蝶,在空中翩翩起舞，又像从树中飞下的一群小鸟，叽叽喳喳地落到地面觅食去。还有的像正在窃窃私语的鸟一样，慢慢地落到地上。还有的像一位跳芭蕾的舞蹈家一样，在空中飞舞起来…… 落叶似乎和我们打招呼，我也轻轻地点头，我走在遍地铺金的小路上，欣赏着大自然的杰作。
在林子旁有一个湖，波光粼粼，像一条条金链在飘动，湖面上一艘艘游船滑过湖面，船尾拖着一条长长的白白的浪花。清澈的湖边有一排柳树，柳树姑娘把自己的头发放在水里梳洗，秋风吹过，把柳树姑娘的头发吹起来，像一排绿色的彩条在空中飞舞。
我们陶醉在这美丽的景色中，使人流连忘返。
荔湾区英语作文六年级【四】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：
互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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荔湾区英语作文六年级【五】
Early morning，sun farther—in—law showed smiling face，small alarm clock “ bite the bell bites bell “ the ground cries，seem to saying：“Beautiful，should get up！Should get up！！
Li Lixing，see sun farther—in—law came out，asperse on pale green branch full bright sunshine。 Li Li wore a beautiful powdery dress，wore a sky—blue pants again。 At this moment，transmit outside the window “ chirp “ cry，li Li looks up to look，a birdie is crying，seem to saying：“Li Li has breakfast quickly，I and you go to school together。 I and you go to school together。
Li Li eats breakfast rapidly，carry small satchel on the back，go to school together with birdie。
荔湾区英语作文六年级【六】
广州有许多美景，有美丽的流花湖公园、迷人的荔枝湾......但我最喜欢荔湾湖公园了。
走进荔湾湖公园的北门，映入眼帘的是一个花坛。 花坛里有各色鲜艳的花，有金黄色的菊花、粉红的玫瑰花、鲜艳的一品红等等。这些花露出了灿烂的笑脸，好像欢迎游客的到来。
绕过花坛，有一条林荫小道。小道两旁种着许许多多的花草树木，其中榕树长得最茂盛。榕树的叶子郁郁郁葱葱 的 ，一层叠着一层，不留一点儿空隙。榕树 像一把绿色的大伞，为游客遮阴挡雨。林荫小道的右边是一个大大的荔湾湖。平静的湖面像一个明亮的大镜子。一阵微风吹来，湖面泛起层层波纹。在阳光的照耀下，湖水显得更美丽了。
夏天，荔湾湖公园有一个荷花池。荷花池里有许多荷花。有的`才展开两三片花瓣。有的花瓣儿全展开了，露出嫩黄的小莲蓬。有的还是花骨朵，看起来饱胀得马上要破裂似的。
荔湾湖公园不愧是广州的一处美景呀！
