中考英语作文车【一】
1。 叙述的人称
英语的记叙文一般是以第一或第三人称的角度来叙述的。用第一称表示的是由叙述者亲眼所见、亲耳所闻的经历。它的优点在于能把故事的情节通过“我”来传达给读者，使人到真实可信，如身临其境。如：
The other day， I was driving along the street。 Suddenly， a car lost its control and ran directly towards me fast。 I was so frightened that I quickly turned to the left side。 But it was too late。 The car hit my bike and I fell off it。
用第三人称叙述，优点在于叙述者不受“我”活动范围以内的人和事物的限制，而是通过作者与读者之外的第三者，直接把故事中的情节展现在读者面前，文章的客观性很强。如：
Little Tom was going to school with an umbrella， for it was raining hard。 On the way， he saw an old woman walking in the rain with nothing to cover。 Tom went up to the old woman and wanted to share the umbrella with her， but he was too short。 What could he do? Then he had a good idea。
2。 动词的时态
在记叙文中，记和叙都离不开动词。所以动词出现率最高，且富于变化。记叙文中用得最多的是动词的过去的\'，这是英语记叙文区别于汉语记叙文的关键之处。英语写作的优美之处就在于这些动词时态的变化，正是这一点才使得所记、所叙有鲜活的动态感、鲜明的层次感和立体感。
3。 叙述的顺序
记叙一件事要有一定的顺序。无论是顺叙、倒叙、插叙还是补叙，都要让读者能弄清事情的来龙去脉。顺叙最容易操作，较容易给读者提供有关事情的空间和时间线索。但这种方法也容易使文章显得平铺直叙，读起来平淡乏味。倒叙、插叙、补叙等叙述方法能有效地提高文章的结构效果，让所叙之事跌宕起伏，使读者在阅读时思维产生较大的跳跃，从而为文章所吸引，深入其中。但这些方法如果使用不当，则容易弄巧成拙，使文章结构散乱，头绪不清，让读者不知所云。
4。 叙述的过渡
过渡在上下文中起着承上启下、融会贯通的作用。过渡往往用在地点转移或时间、事件转换以及由概括说明到具体叙述时。如：
In my summer holidays， I did a lot of things。 Apart form doing my homework， reading an English novel， watching TV and doing some housework， I went on a trip to Qingdao。 It is really a beautiful city。 There are many places of interest to see。 But what impressed me most was the sunrise。
The next morning I got up early。 I was very happy because it was a fine day。 By the time I got to the beach， the clouds on the horizon were turning red。 In a little while， a small part of the sun was gradually appearing。 The sun was very red， not shining。 It rose slowly。 At last it broke through the red clouds and jumped above the sea， just like a deep-red ball。 At the same time the clouds and the sea water became red and bright。
What a moving and unforgettable scene!
5。 叙述与对话
引用故事情节中主要人物的对话是记叙文提高表现力的一种好方法。适当地用直接引语代替间接的主观叙述，可以客观生动地反映人物的性格、品质和心理状态，使记叙生动、有趣，使文章内容更加充实、具体。试比较下面两段的叙述效果：
I was in the kitchen， and I was cooking something。 Suddenly I heard a loud noise from the front。 I thought maybe someone was knocking the door。 I asked who it was but I heard no reply。 After a while I saw my cat running across the parlor。 I realized it was the cat。 I felt released。
这本来应是一段故事性很强的文字，但经作者这么一写，就不那么吸引人了。原因是文中用的都是叙述模式，没有人物语言，把“悬念”给冲淡了。可作如下调整：
I was in the kitchen cooking something。 "Crash!" a loud noise came from the front。 Thinking someone was knocking at the door， I asked， "Who?" No reply。 After a while， I saw my cat running across the parlor。 "It＇s you。" I said， quite released。
中考英语作文车【二】
中考英语作文车【三】
导入：
第1段：Recently we’ve had a discussion about whether we should... (导入话题
Our opinions are divided on this topic.(观点有分歧
正文：
第2段：Most of the students are in favour of it.(正方观点
Here are the reasons. First... Second... Finally...(列出2~3个赞成的理由
第3段：However, the others are strongly against it. (反方观点
Their reasons are as follows. In the first place... What’s more... In addition...(列出2~3个反对的理由
结论：
第4段：Personally speaking, the advantages overweigh the disadvantages, for it will do us more harm than good, so I support it.(个人观点 オ
中考英语作文车【四】
“回啊！快回！快回！”
“停！你看看车身正不正！”
相比同时开始学车的同学，这是学倒库已有四五天的自己从教练那里享有的最多的“殊荣”。每当教练恨铁不成钢般怒斥着驾驶座上的自己时，脑海中总是一片空白，手中紧紧握住方向盘，忽而向左，忽而向右，有时甚至连最儿科的左右都不敢确定，最后总不免被教练训斥得羞愧难当。
同行的伙伴安慰说：“别着急，慢慢来！还没学一星期呢！”
“人笨还须多想多练习啊！那你怎么学得这么快呢！”我颇有尴尬地反问道。
他摇着头，摊着双手，脸上浮现无辜的表情，略有所思。一会儿，他悠悠地说道：“你可能就是教练所说的盘感差的人吧！”
谈及盘感，忽忆起最初学车的那一天。在粗旷的练车场内，几棵小树遮掩了一个又一个教练的训斥声，但遮挡不住驾驶座上的诱惑，抑或恐惧。皮卡和普桑的车道横七竖八地叠加在一起，远远望去，那些犬牙交错的黄线和白线衍生着炼狱的火光，心中暗自盘算着有多少新手从它们的身躯上碾过呢！是痛苦还是喜悦！不远处，S道和停车位相依相伴，一个接一个学生默默地数着自己是第几个上车。那一刻，不禁感叹，“学生群体的的确确是学车场中的大部队！”。忆得童年，当从远方传来汽车的鸣笛声时，自己连头都不会抬起一寸，更何谈自己开车！因为一直认为那个驾驶座上的位置离自己相当遥远。转眼间，那个穿着开裆裤站在车旁玩沙的孩童如今竟硬生生地站在训练场上。突然感觉，这个时代走得真有意思！曾经的遥不可及变成了今天的必备技能，彷如此刻的我们似乎永远也不会亲眼目睹《平凡的世界》中孙少安吃白膜时那一帘奔涌的泪水，却在不经意间，像极了那群在被时代的长鞭甩响后喧嚷着迷失方向的羊群，不会在人群中叮叮作响，只有在繁华落尽后，独酌自己的伤痕，即便在最亲近的人面前，也不知道如何去倾述。不过，庆幸的是，身后依然会有人给予那一声温暖而静默的依偎，包括那些来自陌生人因好意而生的训斥声。
相信未来的美好！相信晴空中那一袭真实的阳光！
在携夹寒冷的江北，料峭春风吹醒绿叶，普洒的阳光瞬间质变成了炙烤。教练站在我们面前，郑重地向我们这些新手讲道，“学车讲究的是一种感觉，车感也罢，盘感也罢。我不知道你们当中有谁的车感好或差，但我想强调的是，车感好的同学要精益求精，车感差的同学要勤学勤琢磨。”不曾想，教练口中的“差生”竟“光荣”地直落在我的身上！可是，训练场本身便有战场的况味，没有人会在乎谁与谁面子，乃至世人口口声声的尊严，好便是好，差便是差，偶尔，凝视着远远驶去的车儿，我问同伴：“我是不是很笨呢！”
看着垂头丧气的我，教练语重心长地对我讲道：“同学，你是一个容易紧张的人，而你的一切错误都源于你的紧张，开车前望你先想一想如何放松自己！”对我而言，教练所说的紧张应该属于一种恐惧！一种源于性格中被外来事物所深深放大的缺陷！无法置否，一件细微的.事情便足以透露一个人的性格，那些在不留意中显露出来的性格弱点，在一些风口浪尖的津口或明朗人眼中便构成了一个人致命的缺陷。关于这种缺点，不是我不想改变，谈及改变，在四年之前选专业时便迫切地寻觅改变，只是，一个人的性格早已在他有能力记忆人间变幻时便过早的定格，欲要改变，需要的又岂止是时间和勇气！亦如，在前几日的校园招聘专场，纷纭的公司简介推嚷着眼球应接不暇，随意地将简历递送给一个企业的主管。片刻间，主管笑着问：“为什么不选择做销售呢！销售相当磨练一个人，更何况你的专业本身与销售很贴近！”，我回道：“我的性格不适合销售！”接着，主管反问道，——又有谁的性格会是天生注定的呢！
又有谁的性格是天生注定的！
这个问题萦绕了许久，一直到时下，我仍旧没有答案。只是，在每日寻觅和学车往返中，我迎来了学校的复试。而令我惊异的是，在与几位导师面对面交流时，我似乎没有以往那一袭不知所措的紧张感，侃侃而谈近半小时间，即使同行的考友都忍不住问道，“你和老师们说了什么！怎么谈了这么长时间！”。静静地，将曾经与此刻相映照，恍惚间，一卷莫名的亲切感袭来，因为日复一日的熟悉，所以心绪渐渐平坦；因为不敢停歇的准备，所以有话想说。音尾之余，依旧会联想起面试老师的最后一句话，“研究一门学问的时间越久，你便越不敢说话。如果你再学习上几年，我相信你不会再这么滔滔不绝了！”，但是，倘若自己在那个季节果真丧失了语言，那我相信那一刻，相信那一刻的自己，相信那一刻自己的心是安静的。
也许，人生的某一项任务的完成，无论是否完美，都应该有它的归属和祭奠。因为如此，日后才可以用记忆来磨平此端的伤感和欣然。同时，对每个人而言，这又是另一种人生的开端。我想，这是一种多元而破碎的重量和厚度！校友向我邮来一篇关于钱穆的名为《用温情和敬意诠释历史》的文章，其中，尤为衷情于那么一句，“自古以来的学人很少有及身而见开花结果的。在今天讲文化思想，似乎不像科学家的发明，不论别人懂与不懂，即可获得举世崇拜。因为科学有一个公认的外在价值，而讲文化思想只有靠自己具有一份信心来支持自己向前，静待时间的考验，故其结果往往在身后”，纵然其中仅仅提及思想文化层面，但试想，无论结果发生在身前或身后，人生中的哪一样不是靠自己的一份信心来支撑呢！哪一项不是需要静等时间的考验呢！
学车如是，性格的改变如是，思想文化如是，而人生亦如是。
中考英语作文车【五】
导入：
第1段：提出一种现象或某种困难作为议论的话题
正文：
第2段：Many ways can help to solve this serious problem, but the following may be most effective. First of all... Another way to solve the problem is ... Finally...(列出2~3个解决此类问题的办法
结论：
第3段：These are not the best but the only two/ three measures we can take. But it should be noted that we should take action to...(强调解决此类问题的根本方法
中考英语作文车【六】
导入：
第1段：Some people hold the opinion that A is superior to B in many ways. Others, however, argue that B is much better. Personally, I would prefer A because I think A has more advantages.
正文：
第2段：There are many reasons why I prefer A. The main reason is that ... Another reason is that...(赞同A的原因
第3段: Of course, B also has advantages to some extent... (列出1~2个B的优势
结论：
第4段: But if all these factors are considered, A is much better than B. From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that ...(得出结论 オ
中考英语作文车【七】
I was born in a beautiful town with high mountains around it.The mountains are covered with all kinds of green bamboo.Through the town runs a small stream.It’s said that a new railway is going to be built to the east of the town and a bamboo factory to the west.All the children of the school age can go to school.If anyone is ill,he can go to see the doctor in the newly-built hospital.People in the town are hard-working and never take the backwardness lying down.Though they are having a richer and better life,they are not satisfied with what they have got.They are working hard to build their town into a modern one.
中考英语作文车【八】
1。 头绪分明，脉络清楚
写好记叙文，首先要头绪分明，脉络清楚，明确文章要求写什么。要对所写的事件或人物进行分析，弄清事件发生、发展一直到结束的整个过程，然后再收集选取素材。这些素材都应该跟上述五个“ W ”和一个“ H ”有关。尽管不是每篇记叙文里都必须包括这些“ W ”和“ H ”，但动笔之前，围绕五个“ W ”和“ H ”进行构思是必不可少的。
2。 突出中心，详略得当
在文章的框架确定后，对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的。选材要注意取舍，应该从表现文章主题的需要出发，分清主次，定好详略。要突出重点，详写细述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节，略写粗述那么非关键的次要情节。面面俱到反而使情节罗列化，使人不得要领。这一点是写好记叙文要解决的一个基本问题，也需要一定的技巧。如：
One night a man came to our house and told me， "There is a family with eight children。 They have not eaten for days。" I took some food with me and went。
When I finally came to that family， I saw the faces of those little children disfigured （破坏外貌） by hunger。 There was no sorrow or sadness in their faces， just the deep pain of hunger。
I gave the rice to the mother。 She divided the rice in two， and went out， carrying half the rice。 When she came back， I asked her， "Where did you go?" she gave me this simple answer， "To my neighbors — they are hungry also!"
3。 用活语言，准确生动
记叙文要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事、物加以叙述。一篇好的记叙文的语言既要准确、生动，又要表现力强，这样才能把人、事描写得具体生动，其可读性才强。试比较下面一篇例文修改的前后效果。
原文：
One day Xiaoqiang was wandering away。 He was soon lost among people and traffic。 He could not find the way back home and started crying。 Just then， two young students who were passing by found him standing alone in front of a shop and crying。 They went up to Xiaoqiang and asked him what had happened。 Xiaoqiang told them how he got lost and where he lived。 The two students decided to take him home。 Mother was pleased to see Xiaoqiang come back safe and sound。 She invited the two students into the house and gave them some money， but they didn＇t take it。 She served them with tea but they left。
修改后：
The other day， five-year-old Xiaoqiang left home alone and wandered happily in the street。 After some time， he felt hungry so he wanted to go back home。 But he found he was lost among the crowded people and heavy traffic。 When he could not find the way home， he started and crying。 Just then， two young students who were passing by from school found him sanding crying in front of a shop。 They immediately went up to him。
"Little boy， why are you standing here crying?" they asked。
"I want Mom， I go home。" said the boy， still crying。
"Don＇t worry， we＇ll send you home。"
And they spent the next two hours looking for the boy＇s house。 With the help of a policeman， they finally found it。
When the worried mother saw her son come back safe and sound， she was so thankful and she invited the students into her house。 Gratefully， she offered them some money， saying it was a way to express her thanks， but the young students firmly refused it and left without even a cup of tea。
