beforeandnow英语作文写母亲与我【一】
就在一个星期之前，我读了《智慧背囊》这一本书，其中有一个故事令我深有感触——蜗牛与我，故事的内容是这样的：有一天，老天也给我安排了一个任务，让我带着一只蜗牛去散步，可是蜗牛费劲九牛二虎之力也爬不快，身上冒着热汗，用着十分抱歉的眼神看着我，我责备它，催促它。后来，我看见了满天亮晶晶的星星，一个漂亮的大花园，我才知道，原来老天是让蜗牛带着我去散步啊。
我觉得，我们做好每一件事，慢慢享受整个过程的人一定是最快乐的`。
那一天，我们学校举办运动会，沐参加了1500米的长跑比赛，我想1500米一定可以赢，沐耐力很强，一般人会累的气喘吁吁，大汗淋漓的。开始比赛了，可是沐就一直甘于下风，，谁知，更加不幸的事情发生了，在最后一圈时，沐摔了一跤，我顾不上什么赶忙跑上去扶她起来，我陪着她跑，虽然没有以前那么快了，但是在我们的谈笑风生中，居然超过了一个又一个，最终以优异的第四名取得了成功。就在陪她跑的时候，我们谈了好多生活中各种各样搞笑的精彩瞬间，随之，脚步轻盈了无数，所以才能取得这么优良的成绩啊！
生活中，有许许多多这样的例子。是的，当我们在慢慢享受美好的过程的同时，成功大门就会为你而开启的。
因为，虽然结果很重要，但是要有了过程才能有结果。
过程会使你快乐。
过程会使你自信。
过程会使你胜利。
过程会使你自豪。
过程会使你勇敢。
beforeandnow英语作文写母亲与我【二】
Dear Mum,
Such is sons’ nature; I really do not know how to express my thanks to you. However, I can imagine, on the day 18 years ago, when you gave birth to me, what a complex feeling you had. In the past few years, every day you struggle me up in the morning and prepare breakfast for me, then in the afternoon, you always welcome your only son with delicious foods after a day‘s hard work. Now your son has been 18 and will go to university soon, like a bird is leaving its parents. Nevertheless, your footprints on my heart will never ever fade and I love you mum!
your son
beforeandnow英语作文写母亲与我【三】
When he got home， he did his best to cook some nice food，though he couldn‘t do the cooking well. Thenhe cleaned the room. He felt very tired， but he was very happy.
When his father and his mother came back and saw the clean rooms and dishes which weren‘t so nice， they were very happy.They had their supper together. His mother said， Thank you，my child!
今天是母亲节。孙峥觉得应该为妈妈做点事，他决定帮妈妈做些家务。放学回家的路上，他去商店买了食品。到家后，他尽全力做些好吃的，尽管他并不擅长烹任。做完饭，他又打扫了房间。他感觉有些累，但仍然很高兴。
当父母回来后，看见干净的房间和并不太荚味的`菜，他们依然很高兴。他们一起吃了晚饭。妈妈说：“谢谢你，孩子。”
Today is Mother‘s Day. I know some of my classmates are going to help their mothers with the housework， others .are going to buy some flowers for their mothers. I want to say to her that I love her very much. But as a boy， it is a bit difficult for me to show my heart. I think only girls can do that.
My mother is very kind. She takes care of me day and night.
She spends little money， but buys anything for me that I need.
This time I must show my love. I am going to give her a card and write like this， I love you， mother! I am going to put it under her pillow.
今天是母亲节。我知道一些同学打算帮妈妈做些家务，还有一些同学打算给妈妈买些花。我只是想对妈妈说一声，我非常爱她。但是对我来说这样表达我的情感有点儿难，因为我是个男孩。我觉得只有女生才这样做。
我妈妈是个非常善良的人。她对我照顾得无微不至。她自己很少花钱，但能给我买我需要的任何东西。
这次我一定要表示我对她的爱。我打算送她一张写有“我爱你，妈妈”的卡片，我还打算把它放在她的枕头下面。
beforeandnow英语作文写母亲与我【四】
Dear Mom，
I recently read the book, Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mom by Amy Chua. I found that you and Ms. Chua have a lot in common in parenting. Today, I’ d like to share some of my views on this topic.
Childhood memories of your strict “dos” and "don’ts" came flooding back. Because count- less hours were invested on practicing musicalinsUu- ments, there was not even a slim chance for me to participate in parties and school plays, let alone fully enjoy the authentic pleasures of family life.Moreover, deprived of the freedom to choose hob- bies, I sometimes felt that I was just like a lonely pup- pet manipulated by others. Dear mother, do you be- lieve that time and time again I woke up from beau- tiful dreams with tears streaming down my face?
However, though Ive labeled it as a brutal regimen when I was young, as I became heavily involved inme outside world, I’ve come to realize that it was quite rewarding to have been tiger trained. As George Eliot putslt,"It never rains roses: when we want to have more roses, we must plant trees". This is as true of 0ur growing up, especially in an unprecedentedly stressful so- cietyr, Fortunately, tiger parenting has equipped me with exceptional study habits,thus helping me stand out in the intense competition. Furthermore, it has endowed me with strong willpower as well as inner self-poise, which bas proved to be a most pre- cious quality of mine. Finally,thanks to your firm discipline, not cmly have I cultivateda discerning taste in art, but I’ve also built my own set of moral values. In view of all these facts, tiger parenting has benefited me in the lorlg run despite the cost of the immediate joy of a normal carefree cbildhood.
Now, looking back on my childhood with your specialparenting method,I want to extend my sincerest appreciauon to you, my dear mother. As I am to commence my college life now,I promise you that Ill improve myself ina "tiger" way, going all out to fulfill all of my dreams.
Love,
Daughter
专家点评：
通过这封写给母亲的信，作者把母亲的教育方式和“tiger mom”的方式作对比，阐述自己的观点。开篇简洁明了，正文欲扬先抑，强调对“tiger training”的赞同，依此出发向母亲表达深切感激之情。文章结构清晰，观点明了，逻辑性强，行文通顺。作者词汇量丰富，长句驾驭能力强。建议适当改变句式，保证长短错落有致。
beforeandnow英语作文写母亲与我【五】
My dearest Mother，
The mother's day is coming and I would like to say “Happy mother's day” in this letter. I love you and thank you so much for everything you did for me. This day，I will stay away and can't give you my appreciation at home. I know I will watch myself，so don't worry about me. I am doing very well on my study. My schoolmates and teachers are all very nice. Though I can't be at home， I hope you have a wonderful mother's day.
Love，
Your son
