暑假里,我去了一趟大连的星海公园,那是个风景优美的地方。
这是一个依山傍海的广场式公园,一踏入星海公园的大门,眼前的一幕让我惊呆了。广场上有许多铜制的人物雕像,有的在弹吉他,有的在拉小提琴,有的在唱歌┄┄。在广场正中通往海边的空地上有一条长20米宽1、5米的铜板,上面踩满了大大小小的脚印,看到旁边的说明才知道是为了纪念大连建市100周年而做了。铜板尽头临近海边处是一本用大理石做成的展开的“大书”,可供人们在上面休闲和娱乐。大书长约20米,宽约30米,呈两边高中间低的凹型状,最高处有近10米高。它虽然坡度很高,但还有人在上面骑单车。来到大书上,我就奋力地向坡儿上爬,可是怎么也爬不上,这时,我突然发现了一个小牌,我就对爸爸说:“我们抓着那个小牌上去吧。”爸爸说:“那我们就试一下吧。”我们抓着小牌用力向上爬去,终于爬了上来,我不禁向下看去,可这一看却吓了我一大跳,我心想:“这坡怎么这么高呀!还是快点儿下去吧。”
公园的广场上还有很多景观让人留恋忘返,和着海风,伴着蔚蓝色的大海,眼前的美景让人心旷神怡。啊,星海公园真是一个美不胜收的公园。
好的文章动静结合、张弛有度有节奏感。句式也是一样,要有变化性,这不仅能使文章更生动,也是语言表达方式的需要和表达能力的体现。句式的`变化,主要是要注意两点:
● 不要从头至尾使用一种句型。
● 长短句结合。
由于语言功底的欠缺和惯用思维,很多人写的文章一种句式到头,如:
I think …
I hope…
He does it.
He will take it
这样的文章虽然意思表达出来了,却显得呆板,欠生动。解决的办法是:
1.间或使用主从复句。
Because he is very much determined, he will carry it out this time. (原因
比较:He is very much determined. He will carry it out this time.
2.使用分词结构句。
The weather being fine, a large number of people went sightseeing.
比较:The weather is fine. A large number of people went sightseeing.
Africa is the second largest continent, its size being about three times that of China.
比较:Africa is the second largest continent. Its size is about three times that of China.
3.使用不定式句。
To be or not to be, that is a question. (莎士比亚
To study or not to study, that is much different.(引申
To do it well, you must plan it well.
比较:You want to do it well. And you must plan it well.
4.倒装句
Only when we fully recognize its importance can we have control of its essence.
比较:After we fully recognize its importance, we can have control of its essence.
No sooner had he arrived home than it began to rain.
比较:He arrived home. And it began to rain.
5.失衡句
whether or not he will come is still unknown to all the people present.
比较:No one present knows whether he will come or not.
That he has done it all by himself is known to everyone.
比较:Everyone knows that he has done it all by himself.
当然,句子并不是越长越好,也不是越复杂水平就越高。凡事皆有度。太多长句的堆砌让人觉得是买弄。有时侯,一个短小精辟的句子可以起到画龙点睛的作用。特别是在文末段尾。比如:
●As a creature, every one knows.
●Actions speak louder than words.
●Practice makes perfect.
这张照片是旅游时爸爸妈妈带我在大连星海公园照的,那时我才七岁。看了这照片可能有同学问:“你在和谁下棋?”我会告诉他们那是我在海边和用铁塑造的假人在下棋。
大连是个美丽又清洁的海滨城市,马路两边种着鲜艳夺目的花草,空气中散发出海的气息。
当我看到大海特别高兴,大海真宽阔啊!一望无边。我赤脚走在柔软的沙滩上,海浪扑打着我的脚面感到非常快乐。然后,爸爸妈妈就带着我坐着汽艇飞一样的到海中间的一个小岛上,岛上全是贝壳和螃蟹,还有小鱼和海带,还有人钓鱼呢。
我和爸爸妈妈找来一些瓶子装了许多小鱼、螃蟹和贝壳,在岛上玩得可开心,转眼间到了傍晚我们就恋恋不舍离开了大海。
我非常喜欢大连!
同学们你们想去吗?
一个好的主题句是文章成功的一半。不仅文章有主题,段落有纲,句也必有中心。文章失却主题,就会不知所云;落无纲,则一盘散沙,句缺中心,就无意义。所以,在立足于篇章时,一定要首先明确文的主题;在发展段落时,也要首先写好主题句。从PETS三的特点来考虑,主题句最好是置于文首或段首,这样让人一目了然! 以下就是两个实用的开门见山式发展主题句的方法。
●To begin with, we must attach the greatest importance possible to this issue/fact (key word.
●As is well known to all, it is now high time that we took this (topic word into serious consideration.
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