Gradually Hachi grew up from a puppy into a bigger one. Every day , Hachi accompanied Parker to go to the station on time. At 5:00 in the dusk, it punctually appeared at the station exit to wait for Parker. That was the tacit agreement between them! Around the station, the hot-dog vendor and the store proprietress always saw an impressive scene that once Parker came out from the station and called “Hachi”, the dog excitedly rushed forward, scratched his trousers, licked his face and groaned with pleasure. In his free time, Parker wanted to teach Hachi to pick a ball with its mouth, even lying on the ground and picked the ball with his mouth to set an example for Hachi, but gradually he felt it difficult to teach Hachi to do it. But one day, Parker went to the station as usual, suddenly he felt Hachi bitting his trousers. When turning back, he found that Hachi should pick the ball, Parker was very happy. But he still leaved. At that time, Hachi had a premonition that it would never see Parker again.
In fact, it was the last precious recollections between them. Because on that day, Parker suddenly collapsed in the classroom, he died of the heart disease. He never returned to the station. But Hachi didn’t realize it. Afterward, Hachi still waited for the professor at 5:00 pm every day. The leaves became green and yellow, the snow fell and began to melt. Year after year, ten years slid past unconsciously. Hachi still waited and waited until it died. The moment Hachi died, it seemed to see Parker coming out from the station exit again, and called it “Hachi” gentlely. Hachi wanted to stand by him, but it couldn’t. It groaned weakly as if it wanted to say “I miss you very much!” Finally, they stayed together in the other world.
As I watched the film, my eyes filled with tears.I was moved by the emotion between them, especially the loyalty of Hachi. Hachi devoted the whole life to waiting for Parker. Nowadays, few people can love someone to this extent. Yes, We can’t! What we could learn from Hachi are that what the true love is and how to love. By the way, the film was based on a true story happened in Japan in 1935.
要做到情感真切充沛,考生可以从以下几个方面人手:
一、事件真实,有感而发
有的同学在写作上下了很大功夫,可是写出来的作文却不感人,主要原因是叙述的事件不够真实。只有真实的事件,才能有感而发,才能引起读者共鸣。如魏巍的《我的老师》中,所写的蔡芸芝老师就是实有其人,文中所叙述的七件事也都是真实发生过的。因此,作者在叙述过程中,才能不时被这些事所感染。叙述第一件事“她从来不打骂我们”后,作者写道:“我用儿童狡猾的眼光察觉,她爱我们,并没有存心要打的意思。孩子们是多么善于观察这一点啊。”这种学生爱老师,老师爱学生的感情就显得非常真实。
特别需要注意的'是,虽然我们在写记叙文或小小说的时候,也可以虚构,但这种虚构是建立在生活基础上的(即生活中这样的事确实存在过或将来会发生,也非凭空编造。都德的小说《最后一课》即是如此。普鲁士军队侵占了法国的阿尔萨斯和洛林,强迫这些地方的学校改学德语,这样的事情是真实存在的。
二、抓住细节,精心雕琢
朱自清的《背影》何以如此动人?那是因为作者抓住了父亲几次“背影”的细节,尤其是为“我”买橘子过铁道时的细节,作了细致的描绘。如:“我看见他戴着黑布小帽,穿着黑布大马褂,深青布棉袍,蹒跚地走到铁道边,慢慢探身下去,尚不大难……他用两手攀着上面,两脚再向上缩;他肥胖的身子向左微倾,显出努力的样子……”这是对父亲外貌和动作的细节描写,字里行间饱含着作者对父亲的拳拳之心,和父亲不顾年迈亲自为儿子买橘子的深沉的爱。生活中每个人的外貌和动作等都有其各自的特点,抓住这些细节作精心描绘,你的情感也就自然地融入其中了。
三、融情于景,情景交融
“一切景语皆情语。”情与景总是不可分割的。有时候我们只要把景物描绘出来,情感和心情也就表现出来了。如鲁迅的《故乡》开头:“时候既然是深冬;渐近故乡时,天气又阴晦了,冷风吹进船舱中,呜呜的响,从篷隙向外一望,苍黄的天底下,远近横着几个萧索的荒村,没有一些活气。”这几句深冬荒凉景色的描写,就将“我”悲凉的心情融入了其中。
此外,还可以融情于事,即在事件的叙述中,不动声色地融入自己的情感。
时光凿去狂妄,磨出温润。——题记
人生最难熬的阶段,不是没有人懂你,而是你不懂自己。常常也会对自己产生疑问,觉得出发时选错了方向,而又不知道该如何更改,便迷迷糊糊地继续走了下去。
跨进初中的大门以来,如同咿咿呀呀童谣的无忧生活瞬间转变成了快节奏的青春奏鸣曲。而我似乎从一开始就没有跟上节拍,成绩一直处于中上游,离自己梦想的高中还相隔甚远。然而这却并没有成为我奋进的动力,相反,我选择了逃避,以求得暂时的安逸。于是每每与家人老师谈论起成绩,我都会推说下学期再努力。一直克服不了惰性,一直盘算着拖延。
诚然,时间的洪流不会因为我的无知而减速,初中生涯的最后一个寒假悄然而至。我手足无措,陷入极大的震惊与恐慌中,回想当初背着新书包蹦蹦跳跳来报道时的情景,恍如昨日。面对我期末时更糟的成绩,妈妈的疾言厉色变成苦口婆心的劝说。我始终不为所动,并不是不懂她的良苦用心,毕竟心中还揣着一直以来的梦想。只是始终觉得自己需要去一下那颓废的生活,从中获得拼搏的力量。在寒假刚开始的那一周时间里,我整天对着电视,对着电脑,睡到中午才起,不洗脸不整理头发,更不出门。妈妈也不再劝说,只有叹气,偷偷的抹眼泪。
下学期就毕业了,我想我真的不能也无法不努力了。难道我要看着父母失望吗?难道那种颓废堕落的生活是我所期待的吗?我觉得眼前有好多问号,心里像是被一团棉花堵住了,闷闷的。这次寒假是个暖冬,雪也不多,日子很长,该是我好好沉淀,确立自己接下来目标的时候了。
我接二连三不知疲倦的奔向书店,购买许多有益的书。在家里仔细品读,汲取其中营养。作者经历许多风霜磨难而总结的教训,让我得以在涉世未深时一窥究竟。我享受优质的音乐,轻音乐舒缓悠扬,平息内心的烦躁不安;摇滚乐放荡不羁,燃起胸腔的炽热渴望。我感动于古今杰出人才的艰难成功之路,并大受鼓舞。冰面是光滑的,但却容易摔倒,因为没有坎坷。有谁不是在泪与汗的陪伴下披荆斩棘博取成功的呢?又有谁的人生没有迷茫过呢?
洋溢着书香、环绕着音乐,温存着感动的生活,使得我逐渐自信,拥有了奋进的勇气与力量。沉淀自己的假期过的异常踏实,我已经做好在初三最后关头搏一把的准备。感谢这个假期引领我慌乱,悔恨,波涛汹涌的心趋于平静。暖冬会带给每个人感动,将暖流注入我们心中。
人生总有那么一段空白的时光,不喧嚣,不造次,我们在等待,在坚忍,在静默。用时间去沉淀,远离喧嚣,洗尽铅华,我们都会成为最好的自己。
This is a story between a dog and his host. The dog called Hachi moved me to tears. This film changed my mind to dog from fear to love and appreciate.
This film tell the story in a simple, without big billows, but it touch people heat and soul. The college professor Parker Wilson find a lost puppy at a train station and take it home, which take much annoyance to his wife Cate. However, parker and the dog develop such a remarkable bond that Cate is forced to relent and Hachi becomes a devoted member of the family.
After several months, Parker and Hachi get along very well, they become partners. Every morning, Hachi accompanies Parker to the train station and waits patiently for his return, becoming a regular fixture of Hachi’s life.
However, Every day is not Sunday. One day, Hachi become abnormal, he barked fiercely and didn’t want to see his host off. At last, Hachi come to the station to see Parker off with a ball between Hachi’s tips, which cost Parker mach time to train him but was failed. Parker was so excited to see this, but this is his last to see Hachi. He was dead because heart disease.
However, Hachi persist in waiting for his host, day after day and year by year. Hachi came to the station to wait his host in the day time and sleep under a discarded train at night. The dog’s discarded moved the people in the train and the people all over the world.
This story present a animal’s morality that human beings are ill needed. The dog give us a vividly lesson that we all have to loyal to our boss, loyal to our wife or husband, loyal to our family, loyal to our country.
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