中考英语作文只有8分怎么办【一】
假如世上只有我一个人。
假如世上只有我一个，我就可以尽情享受那些令人垂涎欲滴的美食，还不用付钱；假如世上只有我一个，我就可以不受拘束地去玩耍，无忧无虑。
走在大街上，两旁都是店铺，我可以大摇大摆地走进去，随便拿，随便吃，不会有人来阻止我。从前妈妈严令禁止我接触的食物，现在都装进了我的肚子里。
大街空荡荡的，我任意走着，甚至翻着跟头，也不怕后面有车会撞到我。现在的我，是什么？是螃蟹，任我“横行霸道”，任我逍遥自在。
可是，独自一个人玩耍，没意思；独自一个人去影院，没意思；独自一个人去超市，没意思！
我想起了我的爸爸妈妈，虽然他们总是禁止我吃这个吃那个；我想起了我的朋友们，虽然我们经常拌嘴，甚至会冷战好几天；我想起了我的老师，虽然她总是布置很多作业……
独自一人在世上是孤独的，是悲伤的\'，甚至是暴躁的。有人陪伴时，是兴奋的，是愉快的，是幸福的！
所以，我不愿独自一人生存在世上。
中考英语作文只有8分怎么办【二】
1。 头绪分明，脉络清楚
写好记叙文，首先要头绪分明，脉络清楚，明确文章要求写什么。要对所写的事件或人物进行分析，弄清事件发生、发展一直到结束的整个过程，然后再收集选取素材。这些素材都应该跟上述五个“ W ”和一个“ H ”有关。尽管不是每篇记叙文里都必须包括这些“ W ”和“ H ”，但动笔之前，围绕五个“ W ”和“ H ”进行构思是必不可少的。
2。 突出中心，详略得当
在文章的框架确定后，对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的。选材要注意取舍，应该从表现文章主题的需要出发，分清主次，定好详略。要突出重点，详写细述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节，略写粗述那么非关键的次要情节。面面俱到反而使情节罗列化，使人不得要领。这一点是写好记叙文要解决的一个基本问题，也需要一定的技巧。如：
One night a man came to our house and told me， "There is a family with eight children。 They have not eaten for days。" I took some food with me and went。
When I finally came to that family， I saw the faces of those little children disfigured （破坏外貌） by hunger。 There was no sorrow or sadness in their faces， just the deep pain of hunger。
I gave the rice to the mother。 She divided the rice in two， and went out， carrying half the rice。 When she came back， I asked her， "Where did you go?" she gave me this simple answer， "To my neighbors — they are hungry also!"
3。 用活语言，准确生动
记叙文要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事、物加以叙述。一篇好的记叙文的语言既要准确、生动，又要表现力强，这样才能把人、事描写得具体生动，其可读性才强。试比较下面一篇例文修改的前后效果。
原文：
One day Xiaoqiang was wandering away。 He was soon lost among people and traffic。 He could not find the way back home and started crying。 Just then， two young students who were passing by found him standing alone in front of a shop and crying。 They went up to Xiaoqiang and asked him what had happened。 Xiaoqiang told them how he got lost and where he lived。 The two students decided to take him home。 Mother was pleased to see Xiaoqiang come back safe and sound。 She invited the two students into the house and gave them some money， but they didn＇t take it。 She served them with tea but they left。
修改后：
The other day， five-year-old Xiaoqiang left home alone and wandered happily in the street。 After some time， he felt hungry so he wanted to go back home。 But he found he was lost among the crowded people and heavy traffic。 When he could not find the way home， he started and crying。 Just then， two young students who were passing by from school found him sanding crying in front of a shop。 They immediately went up to him。
"Little boy， why are you standing here crying?" they asked。
"I want Mom， I go home。" said the boy， still crying。
"Don＇t worry， we＇ll send you home。"
And they spent the next two hours looking for the boy＇s house。 With the help of a policeman， they finally found it。
When the worried mother saw her son come back safe and sound， she was so thankful and she invited the students into her house。 Gratefully， she offered them some money， saying it was a way to express her thanks， but the young students firmly refused it and left without even a cup of tea。
中考英语作文只有8分怎么办【三】
I was born in a beautiful town with high mountains around it.The mountains are covered with all kinds of green bamboo.Through the town runs a small stream.It’s said that a new railway is going to be built to the east of the town and a bamboo factory to the west.All the children of the school age can go to school.If anyone is ill,he can go to see the doctor in the newly-built hospital.People in the town are hard-working and never take the backwardness lying down.Though they are having a richer and better life,they are not satisfied with what they have got.They are working hard to build their town into a modern one.
中考英语作文只有8分怎么办【四】
导入：
第1段：Some people hold the opinion that A is superior to B in many ways. Others, however, argue that B is much better. Personally, I would prefer A because I think A has more advantages.
正文：
第2段：There are many reasons why I prefer A. The main reason is that ... Another reason is that...(赞同A的原因
第3段: Of course, B also has advantages to some extent... (列出1~2个B的优势
结论：
第4段: But if all these factors are considered, A is much better than B. From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that ...(得出结论 オ
中考英语作文只有8分怎么办【五】
周末跟着妈妈上街，车挤、路挤、商店挤。放眼望去，到处是人，唉，假如世界上只有我一个那该多好。
假如世界上只有我一个人，我会乘着飞机去环游世界，去美国走走、去北极看看。
假如世界上只有我一个人，我会乘上宇宙飞船，去宇宙玩一玩，去看看太阳，看看月亮，到那些我们不了解的星球上逛逛。
假如世界上只有我一个人，我会乘着潜水艇，沉入海中，去碰碰鲸鱼，摸摸鲨鱼，骑骑海豚，捉捉螃蟹。
假如世界上只有我一个人，我会呆在家中打打电脑，看看书。我是多么的自由自在，无拘无束啊。
可是，我没有了母亲和亲人，我不就是一个孤儿了吗？我生病了，没有医生可以给我治病。我需要帮助，没有人能为我服务。时代虽在前进，但是社会没有力量去发展，到了那时，没有农民来耕作，地球上寸草不生，任其荒芜。没有人来创造，飞机可能只是一堆废铁，难道这些都要我去干吗？告诉你，我不会。
也许，世界上只有我一个人，是件好事，但更多的可能是坏事。一个人的能力是有限的，每一个人只要将自己的爱贡献出来，把自己所学的知识奉献给社会，服务于社会，世界才会更美妙。
中考英语作文只有8分怎么办【六】
导入：
第1段：提出一种现象或某个决定作为议论的话题
As a student, I am strongly in favour of the decision. (亮明自己的观点是赞成还是反对
The reasons for this may be listed as follows. (过渡句，承上启下
正文：
第2段：First of all... Secondly... Besides...(列出2~3个赞成或反对的`理由
结论：
第3段：In conclusion, I believe that... (照应第1段，构成\"总—分—总\"结构
