24年四级作文范文超简单【一】
看这部电影的时候正是昨天，恰逢自己的23岁生日，带着给自己找点有纪念价值感的意思买了票。之所以题目中说他敬仰高于价值是因为觉得平心而论电影本身没有那么的触不可及，我尊重的是张扬带着个三十几人的团队用了一年的时间来做这件事。现在热钱充斥着这个影视圈，也许以张扬的名气可以选一条让自己很好过的路子在他这个年纪过得很安逸，但是他选择做艺术是因为由衷的热爱吧!
朝圣的路漫长且多难，一条遥遥相望的路却像一面镜子照得见人心看得出人性。看电影的时候我常在想假如匍匐在那条公路上的是我，我该以什么心态会做出何种举动?后来一想我的路也是一场修行，也不觉得自己差劲到哪里!在北京工作身在大家所谓的娱乐圈中，带带着些文人的自诩，常常会感叹一部好的作品，又常常会被耳语拉回现实，三观不正偏离主流的东西见的太多，又或者是文人间的风雅俗事早就让我乱了心去做事，如果说自己唯一感到自豪的话，那就是在自己的坚持里，在满足自己物欲之外，道德线以里画个圈。所以说张扬能带来这样一部静心之作无疑让我佩服。
电影值得一提的事节奏感做的不错，冗长的偏纪录片形式的电影，节奏感应该很重要吧，如果没有节奏感估计半年个小时之后影院中就已空无一人啦!安营拔寨，危机下生孩子，偶遇滑坡腿被砸伤，大家不在意时老人去世，意外车祸失去交通工具，整顿时碰上爱情，种种的麻烦事为电影提供了不错的节奏，拉拢了浮躁的心坐下来近两个小时的时间。只不过结尾的戛然而至让我有些惊讶，细细回想应该是导演想告诉大家的.，朝圣的路很长，人心的修炼也很长，长到你不知道期限。
当IP成为大家哄抢的资源，我们常常忘记了艺术来源于生活，张扬的这次遇劫归来给我们提了个醒。
24年四级作文范文超简单【二】
Dear Mary,
You said in your letter that many of your classmates wore fashionableclothes, but you couldn\'t afford them so you felt very depressed. There are dif-ferent views on people\'s clothes. The followings are my ideas:
Firstly, you shouldn\'t put too much emphasis on physical appearance.
Remember that the most important task for you today is to concentrate on yourstudies. No matter what you wear, you will really look your best when youcome out first in your examinations.
Secondly, you should understand that it is a fine virtue to live in fru-gality. Just as a famous saying goes, Frugality is the mother of virtue.
Since your family can\'t provide you with enough money to buy fashionableclothes, it is all the more necessary for you to try to lighten the financialburden of your family. And you will find the virtue of frugality benefit youa lot in your future life.
I hope you understand what I mean. Hope you will take a positive attitudetowards life and will be happy again when you read my letter.
Yours,
Anne
24年四级作文范文超简单【三】
Dear all,
I am writing this letter to express my gratitude to my parents for teaching me to be positive and to be strong. “Educating the mind without educating the heart is no education at all.” is the opinion held by Aristotle. It is the experience of our forefathers, however, it is correct even today, including my parenting.
It is widely acknowledged that parenting, which can also be explained as family education, is of great significance in our character forming and manner acquiring. To be more detailed, setting good examples instead of just giving precepts is the greatest achievement of my parents. They not only taught me to think for the best and prepare for the worst; they taught me how. They not only told me the benefits of being strong in mind; they proved it. All those things require huge amount of time and work, but it’s worth it.
Without my parents’ contribution and education, I would never be who I am now. But most importantly, I would never be more gratitude to them than today.
Yours,
XXX
24年四级作文范文超简单【四】
Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先，提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段：提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段：正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段：摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次，提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性，连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity：段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛，也不可太具体，做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明，另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence：关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰，层层展开。
完整性(completeness：以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头，这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次，提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型：It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单，注意练习并接句的使用，会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as，如：
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头，句式简单，我们可以通过把since提前改变句式，如：
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后，提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法：millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论，辩论”的意思，而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.，相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略：使用最近所学的单词，如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后，我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文，以供参考：
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
24年四级作文范文超简单【五】
分析范文或优秀作文是我们学好写作的第一步。不要小看任何的优秀小短文，那其中一定有需要你掌握的内容。To see a world in a grain of sand,
And a heaven in a wild flower,
Hold infinity in the palm of your hand,
And eternity in an hour.
一沙一世界，
一花一天堂，
手中即无限，
永恒亦短暂。
24年四级作文范文超简单【六】
这一条朝圣路，他们走了一年。
遇上许多状况。
有时，要顶风冒雪在雾茫茫中向前;有时，会途径一大片烂漫的油菜花田;有时，会在鲜花盛开的河畔跳起锅庄;有时，头顶上山体滑坡滚落的石块，会分分钟要命;有时，车会坏在路旁;有时，人会受伤生病;有时，肚子里的孩子突然要出生;有时，会被追尾撞得稀巴烂;有时，路旁有人会招呼你们喝茶;有时，要送给其他朝圣者糌粑;有时旅费用尽，要暂时打零工赚钱;有时，老人时辰到了就去世……
他们走走停停。
因为知道自己终将要去向哪里，所以，心安理得面对发生的一切。
接受。面对。理解。放下。
然后，歇息片刻，继续上路。
这一路，像极了人的一生。
它是一个隐喻。电影的英文名字，paths of the soul，意为灵魂的千条万条道路。
这一路，你要把喜怒哀乐遍尝，要把生老病流转。
跳舞有时，悲恸有时。
什么都会来，什么都会过去，什么都会回来。
电影最打动我的，是他们的“平常心”。好像，生活里发生什么，都是正常的。
孕妇想跟着一起去朝圣，好啊好啊。残疾的少年想去，好啊好啊。醉醺醺的屠夫想去，好啊好啊。
接受下来就是了。
他们不抗拒“麻烦”，不拒绝“波折”，不害怕“无常”。
发生什么，就面对就好了。
他们，没在怕的。
春天，山上的雪水融化，漫过了路面。
站在水汪汪的路上，他们彼此询问——怎么办，要不要磕过去?
答案是，要。
于是，众人欢快地脱掉身上的皮革围裙，脱掉厚重的外套，笑嘻嘻地在扑向水里。
水花四溅，每一个人都像孩子玩水一样欢畅。他们都在笑。
那个画面，真好看。
来什么，接什么。
24年四级作文范文超简单【七】
The Role of Mobile Phone in People's Communication
The popularity of smartphones has exerted great influence on the way people communicate, so much so that an increasing number of individuals contend that face-to-face communication is being replaced by texts and images on the mobile phone.
There are more than one angle to consider this phenomenon. On one hand, it is pleasantly acknowledged that smartphones shorten the distance between families and friends. Even people from different sides of the globe can share pictures, feelings and thoughts through various types of apps on the phone, thus building a long-distance connection. On the other hand, as the picture warns us, too much smartphone addiction interferes with people's real-life communication. Statistics show that over 70 percent of face-to-face communication consists of facial expressions and body language, which is why people should stay away from mobile phones when they have the chance to actually talk and communicate with others.
In a word, mobile phones act as an appropriate platform where people can always stay in tough however long the distance is, but a wise man should know when to put down his phone.
