五年级英语在动物园的作文【一】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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五年级英语在动物园的作文【二】
我走上前去，厉声质问妈妈：“你为什么要宰我的鸭儿。你不觉得这样很残忍吗？它是我的好伙伴，你却这样伤了它。书上不是说动物是人类的好朋友，我们要保护动物吗？”爸爸说：“区区一个鸭子，有什么好哭。”我再也不想跟他们辩了，于是直冲入房，捂住被子，号啕大哭起来。
吃完饭，我打开电视，在转到宠物频道时，我看到有一个人养了一只鸽子。有一天，那鸽子在树上被卡住了，飞不下来。于是，主人就不顾危险爬到树上去，将鸽子救了下来。但是却把他困在了树上，直到有人打了求助电话，他才平安地下来。
是呀，为了一只动物，那个养鸽人却能不顾生命危险去救助，多么令人感动呀！我们人类与动物就应这样和睦相处，好好保护我们地球的生态环境。不过，我听老师说，对圈养来改善生活的家禽、家畜，我们是可以区别地分开来对待的。
爱护弱小，是我们中华民族的传统美德。我想，用在这里，也是相通的。所以，我们一定要珍惜动物的生命，尽量不要伤害他们。
观点明确，论述深刻、发人深省，文约而意丰，论述语言有理有据、有力、富有文采、形象生动具体，给伤害动物的人们敲响了警钟。
五年级英语在动物园的作文【三】
寒假的一天，我和妈妈来到向往已久的重庆动物园。
一进动物园，我就拿着导游图，到处乱跑，一会儿跑到参观狮子的地方，一会儿跑到参观老虎的地方……妈妈追不上我，就由着我自己去看，我挨着观赏动物，我参观了熊猫、大象、鹦鹉、豹、虎、狮子、猴子、狼……和好多好多的动物，熊猫正在懒洋洋的睡大觉，大象正在用长鼻子把草卷起来送到嘴里吃，鹦鹉正在飞来飞去，美洲豹在笼子里走来走去，威武极了，狮子和老虎也很威武，狮子把笼子摇得“匡啦匡拉”响，老虎不时的奔跑和吼叫，最调皮的就数猴子了，它东跳一下，西跳一下，顽皮之极，狼也比较懒，睡在地上不起来。记得在去看斑马的时候，我还差点迷了路，幸亏我记得正确的路转弯那里有个“魔奇世界”，不然我就迷路了，真是有惊无险啦。
离开了动物园，我已是筋疲力尽，但我却很高兴，因为我看到了许多在电视上看过，而没有在现实生活中看过的动物，另外，我还想到野生动物园去看一看。
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