英语六年级下期末常考作文外研版【一】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：
互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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英语六年级下期末常考作文外研版【二】
【例句】
13.Don’t forget to bring your book！
to bring your book！
14.My mother is not in/at home.
My mother is.
【正确答案】13.Remember14.out
【规律分析】这部分要求掌握一些基本的反义词，然后通过否定反义词的方法达到肯定的目的。
英语六年级下期末常考作文外研版【三】
天气日渐热了，空气漂浮令人窒息的热气，太阳疯狂了，到处布满了金色。我趁着空闲到家后面的山里游玩乘凉。
山上满是苍翠欲滴的绿，阳光被实实在在挡在外面；我庆幸着，终于摆脱了这恼人的炎热的阳光，悠闲地坐在绿荫环绕的一座小亭子小憩。这里，空气不再是热的，这里，不是太阳的地盘；我仿佛挣脱了夏季的束缚，打开心扉地享受这来自大自然的赐予。
不经意间注意到亭子旁边，茂密的树丛，上面除去绿，还能看见另一些颜色；近点看，是淡紫色，再近点，终于看清了，那是牵牛花，它们奄奄一息，花瓣儿已经蜷缩成一团，垂着头；它们快要了，在太阳的照射下，脆弱美丽的花可是经不起这些阳光，我不由得心生怜惜之情。
在这绿意盎然的夏，牵牛花却要亡，结束生命，这难道不令人悲哀。可是，几天之后，天却变了。晴朗、湛蓝的天变得黑暗了。下起雨了，雷在咆哮，雨也在呻吟；空气里弥漫着泥土的气息。日渐地雨停了，风静止了，一切都恢复了平静。天空返晴了，太阳变得温和，散着柔和的光。
我第三去了一趟小亭子，携带一本书，依然坐在那儿。令我意想不到的是，一些新奇的颜色进入我的眼睛，仔细看，那是紫色，那是重获新生的牵牛花。它们张大嘴巴似的张开了花瓣儿，挺挺的；再往后看，绿色的草丛上布满了零零星星的紫色，我看到它们张着笑脸，在欢乐的海洋里荡漾；牵牛花儿们复活了，宣告了它们对夏季的挑战，它们不会在它的打击下，同意失败。我懂了，那些紫色的意义；即便在严酷的威压下，生命的期望依然存在。
英语六年级下期末常考作文外研版【四】
N 主从复合句与并列句的相互转换
【例句】
18.Hurry or you will be late for school.
you don’t hurry， you will be late for school.
N 从句与从句的相互转换
【例句】
19.He came only after the meeting was over.
He didn’t comethe meeting was over.
N 从句和不定式的转换
【例句】
20.The box is so heavy that I can’t lift it.
The box isheavy for melift.
【正确答案】18.If 19.until20.too……to…….
【规律分析】这部分要求考生了解常见复合句的主句与从句间的关系，掌握复合句从句引导词的用法以及一些起连接作用的词组的用法。
英语六年级下期末常考作文外研版【五】
【例句】
9.He spent 20 dollars buying this book.
He20 dollars this book.
10.She does well in English.
She is English.
【正确答案】9.paid.。.for10.good at
【规律分析】这部分考查同义词或词组的替换。有些词虽然意义相近或相同，但往往在用法和结构搭配上有区别，考生应尤其注意。
英语六年级下期末常考作文外研版【六】
【例句】
7.They have studied English for 20 years.
They began to study English 。
8.He went to the class at 9 o’clock.
He didn’t go to the class 9 o’clock.
【正确答案】7.20 years ago8.until
【规律分析】这部分要求掌握英语中一些习惯用法的表达方式。在改写句子时，要求用不同的句型或不同的词表达出相同的意思。
