不能过于空洞,也不能脱离现时,否则就失去了举例的意义。
Most female consumers shop unwisely.
Most female consumers and their girlfriends shop unwisely and spend too much money.
这时主语和谓语都已经进行了改善。但是你问还有提升空间吗?当然有!
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