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第1段:Some people hold the opinion that A is superior to B in many ways. Others, however, argue that B is much better. Personally, I would prefer A because I think A has more advantages.
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第2段:There are many reasons why I prefer A. The main reason is that ... Another reason is that...(赞同A的原因
第3段: Of course, B also has advantages to some extent... (列出1~2个B的优势
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第4段: But if all these factors are considered, A is much better than B. From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that ...(得出结论 オ
Last Sunday, Jim went out to fly a kite. The kite flew highly in the sky. Jim ran with it happily.
Suddenly the line was broken and the kite flew away. Soon it disappeared. Where was it?
Jim had no idea. So he had to run here and there to look for the kite. At last he saw it on the top of the tree. He tried to get it down. But he couldn’t. He felt sad.
翻开日历本,九月十号被红红的颜色描绘着.教师节马上就要到了,每到这个时候,同学们都会向新的老师送上贺卡.鲜花和祝福.我在小学,每到教师节我都会送给老师们一张贺卡,上面写着我真诚地祝福,祝愿老师工作顺利,万事如意什么的.每次我来到办公事,看见老师们的桌上总是放着许许多多的卡片,这是学生对老师的一份心意
想来老师也真是辛苦,在我们不懂事时就教育我们要学会做人,那时的我们怎么可能懂这些,不好好听老师的话,总是调皮捣蛋,惹老师生气,每次教育好我们后,我们又会犯下同样地错误,老师又不厌其烦的教育我们,因为他知道在这时候,孩子就像一棵小小的树苗,如果不纠正,小树就会一天天长歪,最后被人放弃,纠正暸以后,小树就会茁长成长,成为一颗参天大树,成为有用之才.所以他总是耐着性子和我们沟通,进行教育,我们却总是觉得他烦,全然不知他这样做都是为了我们好
现在我长大了发明白老师真的很伟大,我们上学,老师不仅仅就教给我们课本上的知识,而是把人生的真谛也教给暸我们.在路上捡起一张纸片,在车上起身让座,一个细微的动作,都可能包含着老师含辛茹苦的教诲
师恩是一盏的灯,拨去我们心中的乌云,古往今来,尊师爱师的人数不胜数,像大雪之中等待老师醒来的时候,;功成名就之后,不忘感激老师的居里夫人;访美时,不望去探望老师的江……这些名人都知道感恩老师,我们又有什么理由不去感恩老师呢?
岁月虽磨去了您的青春美貌,可您是我们心中永远的爱神,美神;辛劳虽夺走了您美妙的歌喉,可您的每句话都是我们心中的金音绝韵。您给予我们激励,当我们碰到难题时,您给我们耐心讲解,教给我们做人的道理,教给我们科学文化知识,教给我们打开成功之门的钥匙。正如古人云“一日为师,终生为父”。
师恩难忘!难忘师恩!您的谆谆教诲我们永远忘不了。再华丽,再美妙的语言也赞颂不完您的功德。
感谢师恩,对师恩最好的报答,就是努力学习、天天向上,把自己培养成德、智、体全面发展的高素质接班人,为了祖国,为了父母,为了老师,我们要成为一个理想远大道德高尚的新时代中学生。
1。 头绪分明,脉络清楚
写好记叙文,首先要头绪分明,脉络清楚,明确文章要求写什么。要对所写的事件或人物进行分析,弄清事件发生、发展一直到结束的整个过程,然后再收集选取素材。这些素材都应该跟上述五个“ W ”和一个“ H ”有关。尽管不是每篇记叙文里都必须包括这些“ W ”和“ H ”,但动笔之前,围绕五个“ W ”和“ H ”进行构思是必不可少的。
2。 突出中心,详略得当
在文章的框架确定后,对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的。选材要注意取舍,应该从表现文章主题的需要出发,分清主次,定好详略。要突出重点,详写细述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节,略写粗述那么非关键的次要情节。面面俱到反而使情节罗列化,使人不得要领。这一点是写好记叙文要解决的一个基本问题,也需要一定的技巧。如:
One night a man came to our house and told me, "There is a family with eight children。 They have not eaten for days。" I took some food with me and went。
When I finally came to that family, I saw the faces of those little children disfigured (破坏外貌) by hunger。 There was no sorrow or sadness in their faces, just the deep pain of hunger。
I gave the rice to the mother。 She divided the rice in two, and went out, carrying half the rice。 When she came back, I asked her, "Where did you go?" she gave me this simple answer, "To my neighbors — they are hungry also!"
3。 用活语言,准确生动
记叙文要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事、物加以叙述。一篇好的记叙文的语言既要准确、生动,又要表现力强,这样才能把人、事描写得具体生动,其可读性才强。试比较下面一篇例文修改的前后效果。
原文:
One day Xiaoqiang was wandering away。 He was soon lost among people and traffic。 He could not find the way back home and started crying。 Just then, two young students who were passing by found him standing alone in front of a shop and crying。 They went up to Xiaoqiang and asked him what had happened。 Xiaoqiang told them how he got lost and where he lived。 The two students decided to take him home。 Mother was pleased to see Xiaoqiang come back safe and sound。 She invited the two students into the house and gave them some money, but they didn't take it。 She served them with tea but they left。
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The other day, five-year-old Xiaoqiang left home alone and wandered happily in the street。 After some time, he felt hungry so he wanted to go back home。 But he found he was lost among the crowded people and heavy traffic。 When he could not find the way home, he started and crying。 Just then, two young students who were passing by from school found him sanding crying in front of a shop。 They immediately went up to him。
"Little boy, why are you standing here crying?" they asked。
"I want Mom, I go home。" said the boy, still crying。
"Don't worry, we'll send you home。"
And they spent the next two hours looking for the boy's house。 With the help of a policeman, they finally found it。
When the worried mother saw her son come back safe and sound, she was so thankful and she invited the students into her house。 Gratefully, she offered them some money, saying it was a way to express her thanks, but the young students firmly refused it and left without even a cup of tea。
I was born in a beautiful town with high mountains around it.The mountains are covered with all kinds of green bamboo.Through the town runs a small stream.It’s said that a new railway is going to be built to the east of the town and a bamboo factory to the west.All the children of the school age can go to school.If anyone is ill,he can go to see the doctor in the newly-built hospital.People in the town are hard-working and never take the backwardness lying down.Though they are having a richer and better life,they are not satisfied with what they have got.They are working hard to build their town into a modern one.
伊春兴安森林公园位于伊春南山脚下,是一处以游览森林风光为主,集观赏、游乐、森林浴为一体的森林生态公园。公园就自然山脉之势,借天然风景辟建而成,园内景区主要有獾子岭、醉泉、留客谷和攀岩极限运动区等六处景点。2004年被国家林业局批准为“国家级森林公园”,2005年被国家旅游局评定为“国家3A级”旅游风景区。
景区群山环绕、巍峨挺拨,小兴安岭的珍贵树木分布整个山峦。尤其是公园大门旁书写的“伊春兴安森林公园”八个大字格外醒目,大门西南侧是留客谷,呈现在我们眼前的是幽潭,潭水是由山中的泉水下泻汇集而成,潭的上面是一座美丽而独特的多功能舞台,格外引人注目,已先后举办了三届伊春森林音乐会,奏出了优美的'森林音乐华章,使林都伊春名声大震、响彻全球。
沿着婉蜒曲折的山间步道顺势前行,好像一条巨龙盘卧在祟山峻岭之中,步道两侧景色优美、树海浩瀚、树木参天,?当行走在山间这片被赋予神密圣洁的土地时,就会让你感到大森林景观的奇险独特,使人心旷神怡???
步行一段路程后,我们先后来到了醉泉、留客谷和攀岩极限区。“醉泉”位于公园山腰处,是一个天然形成的泉眼,泉水清澈甘洌,常年不绝。此处还建有观赏木亭,供游客休息、饮水品尝。“留客谷”是猛兽伏击捕猎的最佳场所,罕见的东北虎群在此盘踞繁衍,七十年代初才悄然消逝。在姿态各异的峰脊岩丛中东北虎雕塑前,我们饶有兴趣地驻足拍照留念。走着走着我们又被眼前富有刺激和挑战性的所吸引,“攀岩极限区”是一项极限运动,此岩壁最高处达12.6米,吸引着国内外众多攀岩爱好者前来挑战自我。
沿着蜿蜒的山路欣赏美景之际,已到了日落西山之时,徇丽的晚霞已透过林间空隙照射而来。我俩拿起相机站在巍峨的山野欲拍照之时,举目远望天际,只见远处山峦晚霞衬映着天空朵朵彩云,或徐徐变幻、或似盛开的鲜花骄阳似火,山坡上的树木倾刻间变成了五颜六色,当晚霞的范围慢慢缩小,颜色渐渐变淡之时,此时的山野已融入一片茫茫的暮色之中,彩云在夕阳的余晖下,变得越来越淡,夜的帷幕缓慢而落,晚霞向我们告别。
坐落在海拔653米高的兴安塔和海拔660米高的林都明珠观光塔,最引人瞩目。第二天清晨,我俩登上了巍峨矗立、高大雄伟的17层82米高的林都明珠观光塔,用相机拍摄了林海日出的瞬间美景。当红日冉冉升起之际,我们极目远望天边,只见茫茫林海绿海接天,一轮红日如同被山岭的巨臂轻轻托起,金色的阳光照射在崇山俊岭显得分外妖娆,可与泰山晓日相媲美,朝阳放射出的五彩之光照耀了千里茫茫林海,形成了一幅俊美的山水画,此情此景使我们兴奋不巳。当我们站在兴安之巅,不仅欣赏了壮丽的北国冬季秀美之山川,同时,也一览了伊春市区的全貌。
让我们尽情地张开双臂,再一次拥抱美丽的小兴安岭之冬和绚丽的兴安森林公园!
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第1段:Recently we’ve had a discussion about whether we should... (导入话题
Our opinions are divided on this topic.(观点有分歧
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第2段:Most of the students are in favour of it.(正方观点
Here are the reasons. First... Second... Finally...(列出2~3个赞成的理由
第3段:However, the others are strongly against it. (反方观点
Their reasons are as follows. In the first place... What’s more... In addition...(列出2~3个反对的理由
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第4段:Personally speaking, the advantages overweigh the disadvantages, for it will do us more harm than good, so I support it.(个人观点 オ
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