Dear my father and mother,
This letter is my inner feelings. I want to thank both of you for so many years’ care and help.
During my growth, you have made a lot of efforts and love for me. When I make a success, both of you are more excited than me, and support me to do better. Even though I have failed, you always share sorrow with me and encourage me not to give up. Especially, during my preparation for CET-4, the support from you is always everywhere. I have passed the exam successfully.
You love is so unselfish that I am deeply affected, so I will study hard to be a useful person and won’t make you disappointed. Anyway, I would like to express the deep gratitude to you.
With best wishes.
Sincerely yours,
Li Ming
Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先,提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段:提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段:正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段:摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次,提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性,连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity:段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛,也不可太具体,做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明,另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence:关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰,层层展开。
完整性(completeness:以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头,这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次,提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型:It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单,注意练习并接句的使用,会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as,如:
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头,句式简单,我们可以通过把since提前改变句式,如:
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后,提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法:millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论,辩论”的意思,而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.,相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略:使用最近所学的单词,如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后,我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文,以供参考:
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
地球,是我们生活的源泉,地球妈妈赐予我们优利的环境,它赐予我们现在的科技,可是,我们有曾想到,地球妈妈经常会在深夜里哭泣着,现在的地球妈妈。早已千苍百孔,让我们一起来保护地球环境吧!让我们下定决心,去保护我们赖以生存的家园。做一个保护环境去拯救地球的文明小卫士吧!
有这样一句话:“树木拥有绿色,地球才有脉搏,”没错,绿色是环保的主色,也是地球的本色。我们要去保护环境,一:是要先让自己静下心来,对身边的景物,负一定的责任。二:我们先要从身边的处处小事做起,让自己先学会环保。三:提醒别人比如说,看见有一个人倒垃圾时,把垃圾随便仍到路上的话,你应该即使阻止这一行为,让他的行为没有第二次的出现。说到“绿色”,我们的第一反应应该就是植树吧!对呀,我们除了让周围的垃圾,变少。保护环境之外,我们应该去美化地球。所以,我们一定要做一个环保小卫士。当周末有空的时候,可以动起手来植树,还可以尽量去鼓励他人,也参加这一美化地球工作,算是为地球母亲尽一份力吧!
让我们敲响上一个世纪环境恶劣的丧钟,让我们去迎接下一个黎明,迎接下一个美好的地球村!让我们永记:绿色——生命之源;草木绿,花儿笑,空气清新环境好!
绿色环保是当今社会急需解决的事情,是关系国计民生的问题,关于绿色环保的,让我们一起努力营造绿色的生活。
一天在家,小猪懒懒,小鸡花花,小狗壮壮,还有小蚂蚁大力士他们几个在探讨如何收拾前院的垃圾时,壮壮得意的说:“我有一个好办法,可以给垃圾分类,我把垃圾里的肉类吃了,不就可以解决问题的一小部分。”接着懒懒又说:“这些垃圾里虽然没有我的食品,但是我可以帮你们呀!然后在收拾干净。”花花和大力士齐声说:“我们一起干吧!”爱干净的花花虚心的说:“干活时,要带口罩和手套还有套袖和围裙呢!”带好,穿好,收拾好就该干活了!懒懒用心地拿铲子挖垃圾,把手都搓红了!大力士和花花不间断地把挖出来的'垃圾扔进塑料袋,壮壮在垃圾堆里寻找骨头吃,吃的可香了!好比吃天下的山珍海味,他们各自干着自己的天使派来的使命。认真地做,仔细地做,不出一丁点马虎的做。让人们觉得羞涩,它们干完所有的使命之后,镇长乌龟爷爷看到它们的劳动成果后赞不绝口,立马邀请他们到他家去做客。慈祥的乌龟奶奶用心的做了一顿大餐,招待他们。真是有付出就会有回报呀!
听完了这个小故事,我觉得自己很惭愧,所以我要从小事做起,看护好一花一草,做一个小小的环保员!
人要保持卫生;物也要保持卫生;就连植物也保持卫生。你看,人是高级动物,保持卫生很正常,但是动物和植物保持卫生让你很惊讶吧!那就让我这位小老师讲讲动物保持卫生的有趣故事吧!
一天在家,小猪懒懒,小鸡花花,小狗壮壮,还有小蚂蚁大力士他们几个在探讨如何收拾前院的垃圾时,壮壮得意的说:“我有一个好办法,可以给垃圾分类,我把垃圾里的肉类吃了,不就可以解决问题的一小部分。”接着懒懒又说:“这些垃圾里虽然没有我的食品,但是我可以帮你们呀!然后在收拾干净。”花花和大力士齐声说:“我们一起干吧!”爱干净的花花虚心的说:“干活时,要带口罩和手套还有套袖和围裙呢!”带好,穿好,收拾好就该干活了!懒懒用心地拿铲子挖垃圾,把手都搓红了!大力士和花花不间断地把挖出来的垃圾扔进塑料袋,壮壮在垃圾堆里寻找骨头吃,吃的可香了!好比吃天下的山珍海味,他们各自干着自己的天使派来的使命。认真地做,仔细地做,不出一丁点马虎的做。让人们觉得羞涩,它们干完所有的使命之后,镇长
绿色环保,从我做起,因为这个大家庭需要更多的人来维护。
地球是我们人类赖以生存的家,像母亲一样哺育了我们,让我们感到温暖!可是现在的地球妈妈老了,青丝变成了白发,她还在拼最后一丝希望,要教导自己的孩子。
曾经那一座座高大雄伟的山,在一夜之间突然变矮了,难道它们会变魔术吗?不,不是这样的。是因为那山太黑了,连心都是黑的,黑心的山倒塌了,肚里空空,什么也没有,只剩下一坡残土。当我在城镇偏远处瞭望时,一股浓浓的黑烟冲天而上,仿佛是要告诉天神它们的冤屈,它们把云姑娘白色的彩群给污染了,是谁在操纵他?也许背后有一位高深而有难测的‘老大’,那‘老大’又是谁呢?也许以后的以后才知道答案。那黑烟‘使者’怎么就那么就那么大胆呢?后来才知道,原来‘烟囱大王’吞噬了黑山的心,在修炼它想要的‘武器’。
以前清清的湖水,连鱼儿自由游戏也看的一清二楚。在太阳的光照射下,仿佛一块梳妆的镜子。春风吹过湖面,一层层的波浪一叠一叠,越荡越远,河岸旁的的杨柳垂下而生,像一位漂亮的姑娘穿上一条碧绿的裙子,调皮的风姑娘也来捣乱,揭起裙子,游人也来看热闹。而现在的湖水像是倒了染缸一样,有红色的,有黑色的,也有绿色的,它们仿佛是要完成某种特殊使命,人们从过路过,它也跟人类玩起了‘游戏’,偶尔发出臭鼻的气味,也许它是在的‘警告’我们,它生气了,不想再和我们人类做朋友了。
如今山瘦了,他们的心都被人挖空了,留下了一副空躯。水也干了,变成了平地,鱼儿消失了,仿佛回到另一个天堂……
所以今天,我们要重视绿色环保,重视地球的使命,我们只有一个地球,只有她才能给我带来永久温暖,那一座座的山被挖空,用煤来炼出自己满意的财富,而不知那浓烟滚滚的危害,那一条条的小河被填为平地,修建高楼大厦,占用田地,破坏河流,却不知为人来带来相对的危害,水源断绝,鱼种灭绝,下游没有水源,生活艰难,这是地球妈妈教我们做的吗?
现在砍光了整个山坡的树,拿去挣钱,却不知砍树在于一瞬间,而种树成活却是几十年,漫长的岁月,造成了泥石流,土地松软,给人类带来了灾难,这一切都是我们自己造出的祸,又能怪谁呢?
To see a world in a grain of sand,
And a heaven in a wild flower,
Hold infinity in the palm of your hand,
And eternity in an hour.
一沙一世界,
一花一天堂,
手中即无限,
永恒亦短暂。
The green campus is not only the environmental being green, but also the sprite being green, which means we should do other things like helping each other or caring each other. Therefore, we should both beautify the campus environment and create a campus culture.
As middleschool students, we enjoy the campus time while we have responsibility to build our green campus. In spiritual term, we should respect teachers, classmates and other people work for the school. In environmental term, we should have good habits to keep campus in a clean surrounding.
我们都知道,一个更好的研究结果可以带来一个更好的'学习环境。因此,我们有必要建立绿色校园。绿色校园不仅能提供一个良好的环境对我们的学习,而且是构建和谐社会的一部分。
绿色校园不仅是绿色的环境,还被绿色的精灵,这意味着我们应该做其他的事情互相帮助和互相关心。因此,我们应该美化校园环境和校园文化。
作为中学学生,我们享受校园时我们有责任来建设我们的绿色校园。在精神上的术语,我们应该尊重老师,同学和其他人在学校工作。在环境来看,我们应该有好的习惯来保持校园在一个干净的周围。
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