my trip to 深圳的英语作文六年级【一】
要求:1、主题明确。语言流畅。思路清晰。2、字数在100字以内。
思路点拨
写记叙文要按照事物发展的客观规律叙述,所叙述的内容要交代清楚,条理清晰,重点突出,主次分明,详略得当。
这篇文章也是记叙文,主人公应该用第三人称,时态以一般过去时为主。以主人公为中心线索,以一、两件事件为重点内事件为重点内容去组织材料,反映主人公的形象特征。整个内容情节要合情合理,有真实感,叙述时可按事情发展的顺序进行,同时加以点评。
参考范文
My Classmate
Liu Kai is my classmate. He is a good student and always ready to help others.
One day on his way to school, he saw a little girl crossing the road. A car was coming towards her quickly and the girl was too frightened to move. The car nearly hit her. Just then LiuKai rushed up to her and caught her by the arm. The little girl was saved. She told him where she lived, and he took her home. When LiuKai hurried into the classroom, the teacher had already begun his lesson. He told the teacher why he was late. He was then praised for what he had done.
my trip to 深圳的英语作文六年级【二】
I love travelling. When I was young, my parents always took me to other places to visit, such as Beijing, Zhuhai and Guilin. But as I grow up, there s such a heavy study-pressure that I can hardly afford time and energy to travel. Fortunately, I can travel to a lot of far-away attractions in the fantastic world of books and TV. Recently I have learnt about Rio De Janeiro from books. I feel excited and want very much to travel there.
Rio De Janeiro lies along the coast of Atlantic Ocean. It s Brazil s second largest city. Firstly, I love the climate in Rio De Janeiro. Sea climate is comfortable and it never gets too dry or too wet. Secondly, I love the beautiful beaches. I always form a picture in my mind of being at the seaside. I imagine myself walking on the beach. The sunshine is mild in the late afternoon and I feel the soft wind moving across my face. I can see the sun moving slowly below the sea level, just like a hot, red ball falling into the water. Some seagulls are flying above the sea and others rest themselves on ship-boards. I take off my shoes. Soft sand flows through my toes. Little waves sometimes run towards me and wet my trousers, just like naughty children. I enjoy this feast for both my body and spirit. Now I know that the beauty of nature is the greatest beauty in the world.
Alone, I m just walking, walking and walking
my trip to 深圳的英语作文六年级【三】
很多专家都说，我们深圳有一个十分光明的前程。但是我觉得如果我们深圳人不好好来珍惜深圳、爱护深圳的话，深圳简直就和一些农村一般。
就拿文明来说吧，公交车上让位，很平常的一件事，但，这件事能反映出一个人的心。在深圳的许多公交等车站，设有母子或母女上车的位置，但为什么还能经常看见一些大男人和弱小的母亲抢位置呢？难道说这是文明的现象吗？“粒米虽小却不易，莫把辛苦当儿戏。”这句话说得好，但是又有几个人能够做到呢？当你向公共场所的垃圾桶中望两眼，就可以看到半个面包，或半个鸡蛋，或还没有喝完的牛奶。连大人没都没有做好榜样，我们的校园里就不用说了。吃早点的时候，同学们吃不下了，就把还没有喝完的牛奶、没有吃完的\'面包扔进垃圾桶。虽说是吃饱了，但是同学们在小店买的零食，垃圾桶里却堆满了一大堆吃完剩下的零食袋，每个零食袋里都是干干净净的，这又能说明什么呢？当然啦，肯定是说明了同学们没有吃饱正餐的饭，而去吃零食，并且是路边摊贩上买到的零食，我相信同学们都应该知道这些零食是不干净的吧？但为什么又要买来吃呢？同学们可能会反驳说，吃就吃，还和文明沾上边了。我的回答是，没错，你看看，有哪个同学不是吃完了零食不乱扔？
如果我们到现在都还没有认识到“文明”真正是什么，那深圳的未来该怎么来创造呢？
新闻上讲了很多次了，说什么一次性餐具啊，什么一次性塑料袋啊，反正是一次性的，就不要使用那么多。可是，有些做生意的人，只想到自己的利益，没想到“环保”，只想到自己有钱赚，不去体会别人的想法，他们赚来的钱就可以说是赚黑心钱。我就觉得奇怪了，难道做生意的人都是没良心的吗？我当然相信不是啦。可是行动证明一切嘛。
如果我们能够学会节能减排，学会尽量地减少温室效应，那么现在的大气污染也不会那么严重，现在的气温也不会上升的那么厉害，现在北极的冰川也不会融化了一大半。
我相信，只要我们深圳人能学会节能减排、减少温室效应，学会文明和环保，深圳的明天将更加美好！
my trip to 深圳的英语作文六年级【四】
I valued my time in the No.1 middle school very much,because I know there is no endless banquet in the world.Before appling for xiao yu zhong,wondering whether it is the sixth sense, there was a prediction that I would leave my mother school,so I valued the left time which I have spent with my teachers and classmates.Perhaps some students and teachers didn’t understand why I was still so hardworking since I have been recruited by ShanDong university,Ididn’t have a very mature reply at that time.Now I can make a summary:After all,I have been in the science class for two and a half years.Not only was I interested in the subjects but also I have formed good privity with my teachers;Futher,many people take part in the National Entrance Examination in order to go to college,including me,but before the second term of senior three,I have known I have been admitted,to tell you the truth,I can’t accept it right now,so there was a time when I adjusted to it.
During my presence in the school,I was xiao san hao student in a row,and I obtained Li Zhen De bonus for two years.I got the second prize in the maths competition held by Shan Dong Province,After I was admitted ahead of time, I got a prize in the English speaking competition in jinan held by CCTV.
Besides my efforts,above all,I owe my scores to my teachers.It is teachers who passed knowdege to me,without them,I can’t have such scores,here,Ishall say sincerely,toilful are teachers!
In the study life in the future,I will develop my advantages and get over my shortcomings,making me more excellent,I can say full of confidence,I am pround of yizhong and yizhong is pround of me!
June sixth,2006
