我爱学校英语作文五年级【一】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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我爱学校英语作文五年级【二】
??爱广州-五年级-写景我从小就住在广州，广州是我的第二家乡。我喜欢这座城市，这里历史悠久，文化底蕴深厚，承载着我对美食的向往，对美景的喜爱，以及对历史文化的敬意。现在就让我给大家介绍一下它吧。
俗话说：“食在广州！一提到广州美食，我最喜欢的就是早茶了。切上一壶热气腾腾的茶，再配上凤爪、虾饺、萝卜糕等点心，色香味俱全，令人垂涎三尺。广州美食的`背后，还藏着许多传奇故事呢！比如姜撞奶，相传在广东番禺沙湾镇，一位年迈的老婆婆犯了咳嗽病，听说姜汁可治咳嗽，但姜汁太辣，老婆婆根本喝不下去，媳妇急中生智，把牛奶倒入装姜汁的碗里，过了一阵，牛奶竟然凝结了，老婆婆喝后觉得满口清香，隔天病就好了。这个小故事闪耀着人性的光辉，表达了中国孝文化的现代伦理意蕴。
广州，又被称为美丽的花城。春天时，火红的木棉花竞相开放，使整个城市看起来娇艳迷人，又热情奔放。广州有很多美景，有风景迷人的白云山、高耸的广州塔、雄伟的中山纪念堂、有岭南特色的陈家祠等景点。其中，广州的夜景最让我着迷。每当夜幕来临时，婀娜多姿的广州塔就会发出七彩的光芒；珠江两岸的灯光投射在江面上，把江面衬托得格外漂亮，犹如江下还藏着一个美丽的世界。
广州还是个有着2000多年的历史文化古城。这里是海上丝绸之路的起点，有千年商都的美誉。这里留下了许多历史古迹，比如南越王墓、陈家祠、农民运动讲习所等。这里有岭南文化的特质，有古朴的传统建筑，粤剧表演、粤曲小调脍炙人口，河涌的赛龙舟争勇斗艳……而我最喜欢的就是看龙舟了。每年的端午节，这里的各村都会举办龙舟比赛。每当此时，现场气氛热烈又紧张。龙舟队员们个个都憋红了脸，咬紧牙关，使出全身力气一起奋力向前划。那一瞬间让我无比动容，也深刻地感受到了广州文化蕴含的奋勇拼搏、积极向上、团结协作的精神内涵。
我爱广州，爱我的第二故乡。祝愿广州越来越好！越来越美！
