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网课,是疫情时美丽的流行;关怀,是生活中永恒的经典。——题记
E-learning is a beautiful epidemic in the epidemic; caring is an eternal classic in life. ——Inscription
疫情的肆虐使今年的寒假出奇地漫长。为了让我们“停课不停学”,老师们都摇身变成了“主播”或线上“客服”。一时间,网课成了美丽的流行,而老师们隔空的帮助让学生觉得这个寒假不太冷。
This years winter vacation is surprisingly long because of the epidemic. In order to let us "stop classes and never stop learning", teachers have become "anchor" or "customer service" online. For a while, online classes became a beautiful fashion, and the teachers help in the gap made students feel that this winter vacation was not too cold.
网课之初,我们学生大部分还可以管控好自己。可“路遥知马力,日久见人心”,有些同学渐渐显示出了本色,私底下约定时间玩游戏、跟同学聊天,甚至忘记了上网课。可是你们知道吗,老师为了让我们“不停学”,费尽了心。
At the beginning of online classes, most of our students were able to control themselves. However, some students have gradually shown their true colors. They have privately arranged time to play games, chat with their classmates, and even forget about online classes. But did you know that the teacher made great efforts to keep us going.
就说我们班的黄老师吧,每天傍晚,都要为我们准备第二天的所有学习任务清单。老师要先把视频课看一遍,如果效果不好,又会继续搜寻,一定要寻找到最好的学习资源,争取不给学生留下一丝漏洞和不好的体验。
Lets say that Mr. Huang in our class prepares a list of all the learning tasks for us every evening. The teacher should watch the video lesson first. If the effect is not good, he will continue to search. He must find the best learning resources to avoid leaving any loopholes and bad experience for the students.
接着随时监督学生的作业完成情况,那一份份电子作业发出去,每一次都收到写55份作业图片。是图片啊,你能想象得到,老师在屏幕上认真批改每个同学作业的情景吗?不仅有勾画圈点,还有批语呀。张同学哪个字写错了,李同学这个句子不通顺,王同学的字迹太潦草……老师都会一一批注,还经常出现鼓励性语言,为同学们加油,而且几乎不重复。
Then monitor the completion of the students homework at any time. When the electronic homework is sent out, 55 pictures of the homework are received each time. Its a picture. Can you imagine that the teacher carefully corrects each students homework on the screen? There are not only sketching circles, but also comments. Whats wrong with Zhang? Lis sentence is not smooth. Wangs handwriting is too scrawly Teachers will annotate one by one, and often use encouraging language to cheer students on, and almost no repetition.
那次小朱同学忘提交作业了,老师便马上用短信提醒,收到作业图片后,又马上批改,并督促订正。面对作业质量差、态度不认真的同学,老师还会进行电话家访。老师还会在百忙之中抽时间解答学生的疑问呢!
That time, Zhu forgot to submit his homework. The teacher immediately reminded him with a text message. After receiving the pictures, he immediately corrected them and urged them to correct them. In the face of the students with poor quality and not serious attitude, the teacher will also make a telephone home visit. The teacher will take time out of his busy schedule to answer the students questions!
那一次,我在学习文言文《掩耳盗铃》时遇到了困惑,便发了一条信息咨询老师。知道老师很忙,根本没指望老师马上能回复。可出乎意料,不到一分钟,竟然收到了老师的回复,回复中不仅有文字,还有查证的图片,最后还附上一段让我信心满怀的鼓励性话语:很高兴你能这么积极主动地钻研,老师为你的发现和大胆质疑叫好。以后学习上遇到有分歧的问题,不要迷信权威,只管大胆求证。为你的探究精神点赞!
That time, when I was learning the classical Chinese "hiding my ears and stealing the bell", I met with confusion and sent an information consultation to the teacher. Knowing that the teacher is very busy, I didnt expect the teacher to reply immediately. But unexpectedly, I received the teachers reply in less than a minute. There were not only words but also verified pictures in the reply. At the end of the reply, I also attached a piece of encouraging words that made me confident and full of confidence: Im glad that you can study so actively, and the teacher applauds your discovery and bold query. In the future, if you encounter different problems in your study, dont believe in authority, just dare to prove it. Praise your spirit of inquiry!
我不知道这次疫情还有多久才能结束,但网课却给我们的学习增添了新时代的快乐,已成为我成长中遇到的最美丽的流行;老师的付出和大爱,让我们的心通过互联网这根神秘的丝线,紧紧地联系在一起,那无微不至的关怀,已成为我生活中永恒的经典。
I dont know how long it will take for the epidemic to end, but online classes have added a new era of happiness to our learning, which has become the most beautiful fashion I have ever met in my growth. The teachers efforts and love have made our hearts closely linked through the mysterious thread of the Internet. That meticulous care has become an eternal classic in my life.
现在疫情当前,为了学生安全,不集聚在一起,我们不能到学校上课,历史上放得最长的一次寒假。为了我们学习,老师在网上直播辅导我们学习。
At present, for the sake of the safety of students, we cant go to school without gathering together. Its the longest winter vacation in history. For our study, the teacher tutored us live online.
为了这次疫情,全国各省各地展开“停课不停学”老师直播上课行动,许多教育机构推出各种学习软件。名师在线免费教学,帮助学生学习,在线辅导。
In order to deal with the epidemic, all provinces and regions across the country launched a live action of "no suspension of classes" for teachers, and many educational institutions launched various learning software. Famous teachers online free teaching, help students learn, online tutoring.
因为上网课直播,各省老师出现了不同的争论。湖南哪吒“对多数学生说,网课的授课效果根本得不到保证,这种形式主义何必存在?”我觉得湖南老师说得不错,上网课,有一部分爱学习的学生能坚持上网课,但是有一部分不自律的同学开着直播就该干嘛干嘛去。所以说上网课不一定得到学习效果。
Because of the live broadcast of online classes, teachers in various provinces have different arguments. Hunan Nezha said to most students that the teaching effect of online courses is not guaranteed at all. Why does this formalism exist I think Hunan teachers are right. In the online class, some students who love learning can insist on the online class, but some students who are not self disciplined can do what they should do when they open the live broadcast. So online classes dont necessarily get learning results.
我个人是觉得上网课没什么学习效果,上网课,老师在线直播辅导各同学,但是人数多,老师又不能每一个人都顾及得到,每个人的问题不一样,只能挑重点讲。一个人在房间里学习,没有在学校教室里学习氛围好。作息时间混乱,晚上熬夜,晚睡觉,预定多个闹钟。早上起来打完卡接着睡。上网课老师不能面对面教导,许多同学都是敷衍了事。老师与同学之间缺乏互动,对于学习好求者可能受益匪浅,但是对于厌倦学习者,学习上没有一点效果,需要老师面对面教导,当面监督学习情况。
Personally, I dont think the online class has any learning effect. The online class and the teachers live online tutoring for each student have a large number of students, but the teacher cant take everyone into consideration. Everyones problems are different, so we can only focus on them. A person in the room to study, not in the school classroom learning atmosphere. The schedule is chaotic. Stay up late, go to bed late, and reserve multiple alarm clocks. Get up in the morning, punch in and go to sleep. Teachers cant teach online lessons face to face, many students are perfunctory. The lack of interaction between teachers and students may benefit those who are good at learning, but for those who are tired of learning, there is no effect in learning. Teachers need to teach face-to-face and supervise learning face to face.
上网课对贫困家庭来说,不方便,有可能老是断网,要是家庭人口多的家庭,孩子都在上网课有可能网络卡。住在农村里的有一些没有信号不好的同学来说也麻烦,不能好好上网课。对上小学的同学们都是没有手机的,父母要出去工作,根本起不到学习作用。
Internet class is inconvenient for poor families. It is possible to always disconnect from the Internet. If there is a family with a large population, it is possible for children to use Internet cards in Internet class. Living in the countryside, some students who dont have a good signal are also in trouble. They cant have a good online class. There is no cell phone for the students in primary school. If parents want to go out to work, they cant learn at all.
学生的专注不在直播上,面对着QQ、微信、游戏、电视的诱惑,有很多学生难以拒绝诱惑,没有吧精力放在上网课上。老师也不知道学生在干什么,人数过多,有的学生一边手机上网课,一边睡觉。或者手机上网课,而学生却在看电视。手机电脑电视对眼睛视力有一定影响,对眼睛不好。
Students focus is not on live broadcast. Facing the temptation of QQ, wechat, games and TV, many students are hard to resist the temptation and have no energy to focus on online classes. Teachers also dont know what students are doing. There are too many students, some of whom are sleeping while taking lessons on the Internet. Or mobile Internet class, while students are watching TV. The mobile phone computer TV has certain influence on the eyesight, but it is not good for the eyes.
所以我觉得,上网课不一定取得到老师授课学习效果,有一些学生未能适应网上学习。学习情况未能得到提升。但是在这个特殊时期,我们现在只能在网上学习了,无论如何,还是希望各位同学们认真上网课,能学一点是一点了。希望学校开学通知早一点来,开始怀念在教室里面学习的日子了。
So I dont think that online classes can achieve the effect of teaching and learning by teachers, and some students cant adapt to online learning. Learning has not been improved. But in this special period, we can only learn online now. In any case, I hope that all the students will take online classes seriously and learn a little bit. I hope that the school notice will come earlier and start to miss the days of studying in the classroom.
I’m very happy to receive your letter, and I’m glad to hear that you will go to China to learn Chinese here. I have already found a fiat for you. It is on Fangcao Street, which is not far from Jianxin Chinese School. Bus No.11 can take you there, and it is one stop before the Chinese School. The flat is on the third floor with 3 rooms, one of which is bedroom, the other two are bathroom and kitchen. There are a bed, a sofa, a desk and some chairs in this 25 square-metres small fiat, and the rent is 500 yuan per month. Maybe this fiat is not as good as your wish, but I’ll try my best to meet your needs. If it is not suitable enough, write to me and I will look for another better place.
Hope you will come here soon!
All the best!
Yours,
Li Hua
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价值之花缀于责任枝头
如果我是山,就站成一种尊严,让山花烂漫,山风拂面,让每个角落都透着梦的语言,让我们的价值在太阳下展现;如果我是水,就流成一种磅礴,让小船远航,鱼儿欢畅,让我的价值随水儿流淌。
——题记
每个人都有每个人的责任,每个人都有每个人的价值,如果你选择的是双翅,就去拥抱整片蓝天!如果你选择的是鱼鳍,就去亲吻茫茫碧海;如果你选择的是四足,就去莽莽绿林。而我选择的'是责任,是价值,我要让我的人生过得有意义。
青山绿水,衣袂翩翩,是那诗酒为伴的李太白吗?“且放白鹿清崖间,须行既骑访名山”,杯酒之间,便留下满纸华章。在朝为官,他不谙官场的黑暗,即便郁郁不得志,犹令高力士磨墨脱靴,作为诗仙的他,怎能忍受官场的黑暗与倾轧。倒骑青牛,寄情山水,清风为伴,明月为友,诗仙的责任不就是如此吗?即便是高官厚禄也挡不住李白对自己责任的追求。这才是真正的诗人。
如此大的灾难,尤其是腐刑,使司马迁精神上受到了极大地刺激,他曾一度想自,但想起父亲的遗言,且以孔子、屈原、左丘明、孙子、韩非等在逆境中发奋有为鼓励自己,终于忍辱负重地活了下来,经过六年的牢中生活,他终于完成了这部“究天人之际,通古今之变,成一家之言”的巨著——《史记》。它是以本纪、表、书、世家、列传五体结构,创造性地写出了以人物为主体的巨著。司马迁为何能在那样艰苦的环境中完成这一部令世人震惊的巨著?那不正是因为他知道自己的责任,他明白自己应该怎样去实现自己的价值吗?正是这一点让他成为了后人心中的英雄。
盛田昭夫——索尼公司董事长。即便他自己有很大的资产,也不忘去创造更方便的产品让人们享受。随身听就是他在晨跑期间看见一位老朋友提着一个很笨重的收音机而生的灵感。他觉得如果生产一种小型收音机那大家不就方便了吗?于是他又一次令世人震惊。正是她的责任心让他的价值尽情展现。
是鸟,就应该飞向蓝天;是鱼,就应该游向大海;正如是猫儿就应该捉老鼠。无论怎样的诱惑,我们都应当记住自己的责任,让自己的价值像七色光般绽放光彩!
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