五年级我的家庭的英语作文【一】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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五年级我的家庭的英语作文【二】
Computer is a very useful machine. Some of them are big, but some of them are very small .Many people like playing computer. Computer has many functions, so that people can do a lot of things by computer, like watching movies, listening to the music or playing games. It can make our lives very colorful and convenient. Various people can make good use of computer. Children can use computer to learn and play games. Parents can use computers to work. I think computer is a kind of wonderful and interesting machine, so I like computer very much.
电脑是一种很有用的机器。有的电脑很大，但是有的'很小。很多人喜欢玩电脑。电脑有很多功能，人们可以i用电脑做很多事情，比如说看电影，听音乐或者玩游戏。它可以使我们的生活充满色彩和便利。各种各样的人都可以好好利用电脑。小孩子可以用电脑来学习和玩游戏。父母可以用电脑来工作。我认为电脑是一种神奇有趣的机器，所以我很喜欢电脑。
五年级我的家庭的英语作文【三】
我的家乡在著名的海滨城市——大连，一年四季，它都有别样的风景。
春姑娘迈着轻盈的脚步缓缓而来，大地的一切都在人们不经意间恢复生机。漫步在植物的木栈道上，欣赏这一派春意盎意。阳光恰到好处，暖融融地照在你身上，惬意而又舒适。树木都抽出新芽，嫩绿嫩绿的。小野花便地都是，红的、黄的、紫的……在微风下微微摇曳，为大地添上了一缕缕淡雅的花香。人们悠闲地散着步，脸上荡漾着微笑。几个孩子在奇形怪状的柳树中上蹿下跳，家长们坐在长椅上静静地看着……
时间不紧不慢地走着，转眼间，春天过去了，夏天悄悄来临。夏季，火热的季节，人们都选择去海边消暑。星海广场的海滩上缀满了帐篷与躺椅。瞧，一个女孩正在躺椅上沐浴阳光呢，柔和的海风轻轻吹拂着她的长发，她闭着眼，嘴角荡起一丝甜甜的微笑。向前看去，一个小女孩赤着小脚，手里捧着一小堆闪闪发光的贝壳，在阳光的照射下，如同珍珠散发着光泽。但更多人们在大海中嬉戏，一望无际的大海，如一块晶莹剔透的蓝宝石覆盖在大地上，宝石中人们绽开的笑靥与水面上溅起的层层涟漪都如鲜花般绽放。浅海中，是孩童们玩水的天地，孩子们身上套着五颜六色的游泳圈，随着波浪轻轻的荡漾。他们童稚的笑声回荡在空中。深海中，也有游泳健儿们矫健的'英姿……
夏日渐渐褪去它火热的颜色，变成清凉的世界。秋，来临了，天高云淡，秋高气爽。天空中飘着各式各样的风筝，孩子们手握风筝线，自由自在地奔跑。劳动公园中落英缤纷，如蝴蝶般飞舞……
冬日迈着她优雅的步伐悄然而至。冬日中最传统的节日----春节到了。人民广场满天飞雪，银装素裹，节日的气息让冬日不再孤单。一层白雪覆盖在草坪上，上面有一层金色的小灯，与天空中的星辰交相辉映。广场四周屹立着一棵棵笔直的松杉，上面落上了一层晶亮的白雪，经过灯光的照射，如同五彩斑斓的水晶，广场中央巨大的屏幕上不断更换着一幅幅绚烂的画面，向远处眺望高楼林立，霓虹灯闪烁……
春夏秋冬，一年一年地流转，一年四季，大连都有独特的美。
