我们去北京旅行英语作文五年级【一】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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我们去北京旅行英语作文五年级【二】
经过一晚上的火车路程，凌晨四点钟总算到了北京天安门广场，那时天还没有亮人们都在睡觉呢!可到了六点钟，人们都起床了，天安门广场简直人山人海，好不热闹。这时我看到一对军人庄重的走到旗杆那。装好国旗后，随着一阵哨声把国旗的一角往空中一抛，十分洒脱。等国旗升到顶上去时人们也渐渐散去了。
我和爸爸妈妈找好旅店后，就去故宫看了一边，故宫有名“紫禁城”是古代皇帝住的地方，是当今世上最大的一座宫殿，十分壮观。
去玩故宫后我看了八大奇迹中的长城，长城有一个传说：孟姜女的丈夫范喜良去修建长城了，可一直没有音讯，听说是累了，孟姜女去长城找了几天几夜，也没有交到实体，伤心欲绝，居然把长城给哭倒了!我走上了长城，当时年幼的我走起来十分吃力，没走一段就不走了，十分累。
晚上在旅店里休息一夜的我们，第二天就在颐和园出发了。
到了颐和园，这里到处都是古装扮演，里面有扮皇上的，格格的……许多许多。我在那里饰演皇上，妈妈饰演格格，我说：“朕，今天心情大好，女儿，带我去御花园走走吧!”妈妈接了一句：“是!皇阿玛。”我们在那里玩了很久，才依依不舍的离开了。
最后一个景点是北海公园的九龙壁，那九条龙栩栩如生，活灵活现，仿佛随时都有可能要你口的感觉，看到这里我想到了一首歌：”让我们荡起双桨‘小船儿推看波浪，海面荡起了美丽的白塔……”
虽然仅仅只有七天的短暂时间，但我依然很高兴，因为我看到了许多新奇的东西，让我增长了视野。啊!真希望下次还能再来北京玩啊!
我们去北京旅行英语作文五年级【三】
这个暑假，爸爸带我去了我们国家的首都——北京，它就好像似中国的心脏一样，一直为中国奉献者。
那天，我们三点钟就起了床。看完升国旗，参观完天安门城楼后，我们就进了故宫。
故宫位于北京市中心，也称“紫禁城”。这里住过24个皇帝，是明清两代（1368年——1911年）的皇宫，先辟为“故宫博物院”。故宫的整个建筑金碧辉煌、庄严绚丽，被誉为世界五大宫之一（北京故宫、法国凡尔赛宫、英国白金汉宫、美国白宫、俄罗斯克里姆林宫），并被联合国教科文组织列为“世界文化遗产”。
一进太跟门，一个大大的金殿映入眼帘，那就是皇上上朝的太跟殿。据说，太跟殿内所有砖都是金砖，辉煌极了。我们手上的相机正准备按下快门时，导游告诉我们，照不同的建筑有不同的意义，而照太跟殿有不好的意义。看来故宫还有许多神秘之处。
游完太跟殿，就来到中跟殿。中跟殿有一特色：就是它四个角上各有十二只脊兽，这十二只兽由小到大排列着，十分有趣。我们一看里面，哇！好漂亮。一把龙椅放在正中间，左右各一个大花瓶，真是庄严而辉煌。
看完中跟殿后，我们还去了保跟殿、乾清宫、坤宁宫等多个景点，但是我最感兴趣的是御花园。御花园里的花五颜六色，哪里的叶绿如碧水，那里的假山十分逼真。走进去里面，无论是山的形状，还是山上的装饰，都足以让人觉得自己身于大山之中。
游完御花园，我们便从神武门出来了。游完故宫，我感觉到了中华民族劳动人民的伟大，先辈们在科技那么落后的情况下把故宫修建得那么漂亮，我们一定要学习他们的这种精神。
