英语高考作文开头通用句子【一】
议论文是高考最常见的文体之一。考场作文，时间紧迫，篇幅有限，怎样用最直接的方式擦亮评卷老师的眼球？什么样的开头才是好的开头呢？——我国元代乔梦符说，文章的开头要像“凤头”。这种说法形象地说出好的开头要娇小、美丽、灵活。那么，我们究竟怎样巧饰凤头，展现我们的才情？那就是：文无定法心中有法，合理运用有的放矢，巧设开头增色三分，亮明观点决不含糊。
英语高考作文开头通用句子【二】
1. Nancy is too young to dress herself.
Nancy is not _____ _____ to dress herself.
2. My watch doesn't work well.
There is ____ _____ _______ my watch.
3. Jane doesn't go to work by bus any longer.
Jane ____ _____ _____ to work by bus.
4. It took Mary two weeks to prepare for the exam.
Mary _____two weeks____ ______ for the exam.
5. It seems that they have known each other.
They seem to _____ _____ each other.
6. "My grandpa doesn't like coffee or coke" said Bob
Bob said that _____grandpa liked _____coffee _____coke.
7. Cao Fei joined the League three years ago.
Cao Fei _____ ____ _____ the League for three years.
8. I prefer walking there to going by bus.
I prefer to walk there ____ _____ going by bus.
9. -Thank you very much. -You're welcome.
- ____ a lot. -Not at____ .
10. Kitty does well in English.
Kitty ____ ____ ____ English.
11. They realized Hainan was a beautiful place after they reached there.
They____ realize Hainan was a beautiful place_____ they reached there.
12. We will have to finish the work hardly if you don't help us. We can't finish the work _____ _____ ______
13. My dictionary isn't so thick as yours.
My dictionary is _____ than yours.
14. Could you tell me where the East Street Hospital is? Excuse me, ____ is the _____ to the East Street Hospital?
15. The book is exciting to read.
It is ____ _____ read the book.
16. Jack's mother asked him, "Have you packed your things?" Jack's mother asked him ____ he ____ packed his things.
17. She likes singing better than dancing. She ____ singing ____ dancing.
18. Remember to ring me up as soon as you get to Nanjing Make ____ to give me a ring as soon as you _____ Nanjing.
19. They couldn't catch the train because of the heavy traffic. The heital?
15. The book is exciting to read.
It is ____ _____ read the book.
16. Jack's mother asked him, "Have you packed your things?" Jack's mother asked him ____ he ____ packed his things.
17. She likes singing better than dancing. She ____ singing ____ dancing.
18. Remember to ring me up as soon as you get to Nanjing Make ____ to give me a ring as soon as you _____ Nanjing.
19. They couldn't catch the train because of the heavy traffic. The heavy traffic _____ them from _____ the train.
20. My brother has been away from home for two days.
My brother _____ home two days _____ .
21. Li Lei decided to move to Canada when he was thirty.
Li Lei made a _____ to move to Canada at the _____ of thirty.
22. Jim was too careless to pass the exam last term.
Jim was not_____ _____ to pass the exam last term.
23. If you don't hurry up, you can't catch the train.
Hurry up, _____ you may _____ the train.
24. Yang Li wei said to us, "I'm going to visit your school tomorrow. " We were all pleased.
We were all pleased when we heard Yang Li wei_____ visit_____ school the next day.
25. This is the most interesting film I have ever seen. I have ____seen _____ an interesting film before.
26. I was late for school because of the traffic accident. The traffic accident _____ me _____ getting to school on time.
英语高考作文开头通用句子【三】
1、开门见山式
这是议论文最常用的一种开头方式。就是开篇就将文章的中心论点摆出来，然后再逐层展开论证，不蔓不枝,主旨豁然明朗。如：《谈骨气》“我们中国人是有骨气的。”一句话单刀直入，开门见山，表明中心论点，简洁明了。采用开门见山式开头应注意的问题:写作前要经过认真的思考,提炼出能够引领全文主题内容的开头；这种开头语言要非常精练,简洁明了,有一种能使阅卷老师一望便知全文重点的效果。
例：诚实守信,是我们中华民族的优良传统。千百年来,人们讲求诚信,推崇诚信。诚信之风质朴醇厚,历史越悠久,诚信之气越充盈中华,诚信之光越普照华夏。诚信早已融入我们民族文化的液,成为文化基因中不可或缺的重要一环。(《诚信》
2、释题入篇式
释题入篇法，就是在文章开头，就对标题或相关概念的含义加以解释和阐发，表明自己的观点。这样开篇，鲜明而简洁，且有时能较鲜明的展示作者的思考深度。
例：感恩是一种处世哲学，一种生活态度，一种优秀品质，也是一种道德情操。（《谈感恩》）
3、比喻生辉式
用浅显常见的事物对深奥的道理加以说明，使道理深入浅出。可使说理变平淡为生动，化抽象为具体，增强说理的形象性和灵动性，增强理的感染力。
例1、自负，像一个泥潭，陷进去就难以自拔；自卑，像一根受了潮的火柴，难以把希望之火点燃。所以，我们既不能自负，也不能自卑。（《自负与自卑》）
例2、微笑，恰如淌过的溪流，柔和恬静；微笑，恰似那悬挂的一刀新月，皎洁光亮；微笑，又恰似那挺拔的苍松，积蓄着万般力量……如果说，有一种力量可以让人坚忍不拔，那便是微笑的力量；如果说，有一种力量可以让人自信满满，那便是微笑的力量；如果说，有一种力量可以让人心头一暖，那便是微笑的'力量！（《这也是一种力量》）
4、排比点题式
排比手法的运用可达到彰显气势 炫示文采的效果，但要注意紧扣题旨，不能为排比而排比，为文采而文采，以致以辞害义；同时更要注意分句间的逻辑层次，否则开头就会显得杂乱无章。
例1：科学家的意气，让他们登上学术的高峰；工人的意气，让他们不畏艰苦的条件；学生的意气，让我们拥有勃勃的精神。意气当它代表人类坚韧的意志和宽广的气概时，是自古不变的美德，是永远经典的操守！（《谈意气》）
例2：如果说雏鹰腾飞苍穹要经历风雨的打击，那么，那搏击长空的意气就是它那犀利的双眼；如果说骏马奔驰于旷野要经历千万里奔跑的锤炼，那么，那奔腾万里为夙愿的意气就是助其翻越千山万水的铁蹄。人，欲傲立于世，成为一代雄主，立一世伟业，那舍我其谁、勇战万方的意气就是其成功的基石。（《谈意气》）
5、引用名言式
引用名言可达到言约意丰，加深主题的效果。但当你所引用的名言表面上看似与中心论点没有多大关联的时候，一定要在所引用的名言与论点之间加上过渡语（看例6）。同时还得注意所引用的名言一定要准确真实。引用法引用的内容是很丰富的，除了引用名言警句以增强论证效果、突出主题外，还可引用古语、谚语、、歌词、广告词等等。这就要求我们有丰富的积累，所以希望大家平时多读多记，在写作时才能信手拈来，运用自如。
例：席慕蓉说：“生命是一条奔流不息的河，我们都是那个过河的人。”在生命之河的左岸是忘记，在生命之河的右岸是铭记。我们乘坐各自独有的船在左岸与右岸穿梭，才知道——忘记该忘记的，铭记该铭记的。（《在忘记与铭记的两岸》）
6、对比引入式
运用对比引入式，可直接帮助人们判断是非曲直，上下优劣，利弊得失，很快步入论述的主题。
例1、古今中外，凡是在事业上有所造就、取得成功的人，没有不是用辛勤的汗水换来的；反之，那些懒惰昏庸的人，就难得成就事业。由此，我们可以说：勤则成事，惰则败业。（《说勤》）
例2、一位孔繁森，光芒四射，人们提起他的名字，总是与伟大、光明、进步联系在一起。一位，臭名昭著，人们提起他的名字，总是与贪婪、黑暗、丑陋联系在一起。两个人都走完了人生。但一个永存人间，一个早已被人唾弃。人生的价值，在两人的鲜明对比中，不是已经显现出来了吗？
7、设问开篇式
就是在文章开头，先就要议论的问题提出疑问，然后在回答问题中提出自己的观点。如：
爱美之心人皆有之。作为新时代的青年，我们应该追求什么样的美？车尔尼雪夫斯基说：‘美是生活。’人们生活中美的语言，美的行为，美的心灵，美的生活方式，这才识我们所追求的最主要的美。”(《青年应该追求什么样的美？》（采用设问，引起读者注意，然后自问自答，在释疑中自然推出全文的中心论点。）
英语高考作文开头通用句子【四】
It ______ ______ ______ the train will be late.
答案：is likely that
2. It is likely that the typhoon will sweep across the island.
The typhoon ______ ______ ______ ______ across the island.
答案：is likely to sweep
3. I think trying to stop the couple quarrelling will be of no use.
I think it's ______ ______ ______ to stop the couple quarrelling.
答案：no use trying
4. Every time I was in trouble, he had no hesitation in helping me.
Every time I was in trouble, he came to help me ______ ______.
答案：without hesitation
5. He never hesitates to help if I have any problem.
He always helps me ______ ______ if I have any problem.
答案：without hesitation
6. I crossed the street so as not to meet him, but he saw me and came running towards me.
I crossed the street to ______ ______ him, but he saw me and came running towards me.
答案：avoid seeing
7. It seems that the students in that class have all passed the qualified exam.
All of the students in that class ______ ______ ______ ______ the qualified exam.
答案：seem to have passed
8. It seems that the boys of the class are playing football on the playground.
The boys of the class ______ ______ ______ ______ football on the playground.
答案：seem to be playing
英语高考作文开头通用句子【五】
一． .................................................................................................................................................. 1
二． .................................................................................................................................................. 1
三． .................................................................................................................................................. 2
四． .................................................................................................................................................. 3
五． .................................................................................................................................................. 8
一简述
1. 当过去分词在句末时，不管有无逗号，都是就近修饰名词;
2.现在分词在句末时，无逗号是就近修饰的名词的定语；
3.当现在分词在句尾且前有逗号时,修饰邻近句子的'主语,做主语的伴随状语或做句子的伴随结果.因此不能用句尾现在分词修饰前面句尾的名词. 所以OG127说C选项:"the phrasehaving been assigned...is uncertain in reference,making the sentence unclear."-->就是说这个现在分词本来是应该修饰前面的employee的,却变成了修饰主语governments了. (另外在GMAT里,having been done的用法错误,应直接用done
避免上述错误的方法:所修饰的名词在句尾用定语从句修饰--OG127正确选项B (而不用加逗号的现在分词修饰.其实分词是定语从句的省略形式,在句中无逗号分词(注意是无逗号的,有逗号的在句中有歧义就比定语从句简洁还有 OG120也是同样道理:修饰句尾名词,正确选项A用定语从句.E选项的句尾现在分词错误.
4.当现在/过去分词在句中且前没有逗号,修饰前面紧邻名词;
5.当现在/过去分词在句中且前后都有逗号,有歧义:1修饰前面紧邻的名词,2向后修饰后面句子的主语.
这种结构在GMAT肯定错,如果修饰某句主语,则避免将该分词置于以名词结尾的句后.避免方式:1用定语从句/介词短语明确修饰对象.2可将分词提到句首,所修饰主语及所在句子紧跟其后-->形成句首分词修饰句子主语.见OG179
6.在前面有多个名词如名词1+介词+名词2结构,而要用分词修饰名词1时,为避免歧义要重复名词1即用同位语结构:名词1+介词+名词2,名词1+分词.见OG208
二．
1、doing/done,SVO 注意分词的逻辑主语与S一致
2、介词/连词+doing/done,SVO 也要注意分词逻辑主语与S一致
3、S,doing/done,V 分词作定语修饰主语（前后一对逗号隔开，相当于定语从句）
注意：如果出现: “名词,doing,名词”，则会有分词前后的修饰歧义，如179DE，245E
4、SVO doing 分词作定语修饰主语，如 96AC，121C，146E，222A，234B，237E
5、SVO,doing
A、分词优先作状语
1）修饰主语（与分词在句首一样，注意逻辑主语），如 33B，39C，44B，120E，163D，256B
2）修饰主句动作，如 78BD，119B，154A，259A
B、其次作定语，但没有定语从句清晰，会有修饰歧义，如 253DE，（“，including”除外 249）
6、SVO done 分词作定语修饰O（同4）
7、SVO,done
A、分词作状语修饰S，如 大全558
B、分词作定语修饰O，如 127A（分词相当于形容词 253A）
some people base on sth是绝对错误的。但是有sb. base sth. on sth.的用法. 三．
1.SVO+doing,无逗号的情况下doing是针对宾语的动作,96AC(OG says : assuring针对主语有问题，121C，146E，222A(OG says: enabling很好的修饰了宾语，234B，237E -------以上证明了ets的偏好,svo+doing修饰主语是模糊的,修饰宾语是清晰的
2.SVO, doing有逗号,33B，39C(Og says:protecting很好的
解释了主语的行为，44B，120E(Og says:错误选项有可能混淆的指代主语而不是逻辑上正确的宾语，163D(Og says:sleeping正确的修饰了主语，256B --------以上证明了在Og中svo,doing的doing多指代主语
3.svo,doing有逗号,78BD(doing指代了前面整个句子的行为，119B(同前，154A(*，259A(同前------------以上证明了Og中svo,doing的doing多指代前面的整个句子
四．例子
产生participle phrases原点是为了to reduce wordiness by replacing longer adverbial or relative clauses，另外要强调的重要讯息不会写成participle phrases，因为分词修饰语属于次等地位(The
modifier is subordinate to the main clause。也就是说A….and B…(A与B一样重要，如果A…V..,B...Ving (就重要性而言A>B
简单一句：分词构句是主要句子的意义延伸。
目前我看到有几种句意：
1. 因果(★★★★★
2. 补述：解释某事(★★★、描述状态并列或伴随(★★、纯举例
participle
phrases如此具困扰性是因为可以改写的来源多
1.由adj. clauses (如who, which开头可改写成分词词组。考题中可分形容词子句限制性、非限制性改分词的考法。
2. 副词子句(有连接词开头的也可改分词词组，所以有因果关系或时间关系，单纯就时间关系看，可以有先后或同时，会有动作是伴随或是并列关系。
3.当三个以上的动词用and相连时，后面的部分也改写成分词(V, Ving... and Ving...。
我看过的说法中，觉得Manhatan GMAT备考网站，里面指导员所讲的分词概念不错，但是他的目的在卖书，所以讲的真的不多。
1.当分词构句放句首，修饰后面句子的主词。前几天看到有人发帖的整理，讲到分词在句首，表示此动作先于主要句子的动作，讲的真好。
2.当分词构句不放在句首时:
if
there's NO COMMA before a participle, then the participle creates an adjective phrase that modifies the noun immediately
preceding.
if
there's a COMMA before a participle, then the participle creates an adverb phrase that modifies the action of the preceding
clause.
PS：逗号的产生可能是插入语，遇到插入语可以跳过不看，不代表分词修饰这个插入语。
判断上抓前句的动词与主词，如果用中文想就是「此主体这个动作的行为导致或表示.....」(to modify the action of。而且不可以只有思考主词或动词。 如果遇到前句有数个动词，以找最近的动词为主，譬如V1 to V2，分词构句修饰V2
3.
participle (V-ing after the comma can not modify the subject of the preceding clause's
noun.
這個考「什么情况下不可以改成分词构句?」除了需要有对等连接词的句子，不可改分词构句，因为句意重要性会被改变外，
打逗号的Ving分词，无法修饰逗号之前的名词，所以非限制的形容词子句最好不要改分词Ving构句(有7個考題，但是Ved分词例外(有两个考题。
英语高考作文开头通用句子【六】
非谓语动词系列训练（二）
一：在句子意思不变的情况下用分词或不定式改写下列句子：
1.When he saw from the top of the mountain, he viewed a beautiful city.
-----___________from the top of the mountain, he viewed a beautiful city.(用分词
2．When it was seen from the of the mountain, the city looks like a garden. (用分词 ------_____________from the of the mountain, the city looks like a garden. city. (用分词
3.When he was asked why he went there, he said he was sent there to be trained for a space flight.
-------When ________ why he went there, he said he was sent there to be trained for a space flight. (用分词
4. Do you know the boy who knows Japanese?
----- Do you know the boy ___________ Japanese? (用分词
5. Do you know the boy who is called Tom.
---- Do you know the boy ________Tom.- (用分词
6. This is the man who organized the activity.
This is the man________________ the activity. (用分词
7. He followed his students and came in.
------ He came in, ____________ his students(用分词
8. He came in and was followed by his students
----- He came in ,____________by his students(用分词
9.The woman who was dressed in a blue skirt delivered a speech to us.
---- The woman _____________ in a blue skirt delivered a speech to us. (用分词
10. Because he is a physicist, he could well explained how to do the research.
---- _______ a physicist, he could well explained how to do the research. (用分词
11. He was born on the 18th of January, 1979 in Taiwan, and he was raised by his mother and was shy and quiet during his childhood.
----- ____________on the 18th of January, 1979 in Taiwan, and he was raised by his mother and was shy and quiet during his childhood. (用分词
12. The flowers his friend gave him will die unless it is watered every day.
---The flowers his friend gave him will die unless ____________ every day. (用分词
13．When we were walking dogs, we came across a famous professor.
------ When ____________ dogs, we came across a famous professor. (用分词
14. He donated over 10 billion dollars in order that he could sponsor education, culture, sports, and public welfare in the earth-stricken area.
----- He donated over 10 billion dollars _____________education, culture, sports, and public welfare in the earth-stricken area.(用不定式
15 After he had finished his homework, he played the piano.
----- ____________ his homework, he played the piano.
16. After the bridge had been completed, it went through a hard time because of the bad weather.
----______________________, it went through a hard time because of the bad weather.
17 It is said that Bell invented the telephone.
18. Bell is said __________ the telephone. (用不定式
19. I don’t decide what I should do.
I don’t decide what__________(用不定式
20. It happened that he had been invited
---- He happened _____________
21.He was so young that he could not go to school. He was too young __________ to school.
22. When the test was finished, we began our holiday.
----- The test __________, we began our holiday.(用独立主格结构
23. As time goes by ,he becoms aware of it.
With time ________ by, he becomes aware of the significant of it.
24. The moon, which travels round the earth once every month, is a natural satellite of the earth.
---- The moon, ___________ round the earth once every month, is a natural satellite of the earth.
25. Though he had been told several times, he didn’t understand me.
-----_______ several times, he didn’t understand me.
26. After the problem was solved,he took a rest.
----With the problem ____________, he took a rest.
27. If time permits, we will
28．He lay there, his hand clenched, his eyes looking straight up.
---He lay there, his hand_______, his eyes looking straight up
29.I once read a book called Man, Woman and Child, which enabled me to understand the love in a family.
------I once read a book called Man, Woman and Child, ______________ me to understand the love in a family. (用分词
30.There are many places of interest, among which is the Yunji mountain,whose scenery is very beautiful, which attracts lots of tourists from different places every year.
------There are many places of interest, among which is the Yunji mountain,whose scenery is very beautiful, ____________ lots of tourists from different places every year. (用分词
二：非谓语动词完成句子练习
there was no doctor available. (only
, playing cards at home or taking a walk in the park? (spend
. (think
包括三名儿童）. (child
5. 根据他的话判断）, he did well in his exam. (judge
the Tang Dynasty. (date
7. This is an article （由五部分组成）five parts. (consist
five parts.(make
as soon as possible. (solve
bored a lot of fans to death. (concern
, l cannot object to your marriage. (concern
子）at school? （keep）
（躲在木箱里）behind the door. (hide
,we had to walk home last night. (be.
in the broad daylight yesterday. (rob
（满是脚印）. (mark
（石油价格上涨）, the economy of that country is slowing down. (go
18. When the national flag is being hoisted, all the students stand at attention, . (fix
him, I decided to write again. (hear
20. He doesn’t seem to mind by others. (make
next week is of great importance. (hold
is very important. (hold
is of great importance. (hold
the Third World. (belong
（致力于研究）, the professor paid little attention to his surroundings. (devote
in the morning. (come
（为了确保那孩子尽快康复），five doctors took turns looking after him day and night. (ensure
，the old man struggled to his feet. (help
, the parents were taken to the dining room. （show）
（.support）
. （drop）
, I am not familiar with this kill. (tell
（为了不被注意）by others . (notice
三：合并下列句子
1. The annual school sports meeting was held yesterday. It presented a marvelous opening ceremony.
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2. After the opening ceremony, we sat in the base of our class. We waited patiently for the beginning of the race.
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3. Some of my classmates work very hard, and they hope to fulfill their dream. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
4..My friend Christine took part in the 800-meter race. She had received training many times, so she kept calm before the race. After 400 meters, though she looked tired, she still tried her best to run. We screamed and beat the drum when we saw she passed by. She won the medal, and we were proud of it. (把短文中的从句或并列句改成非谓语动词
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四：语篇填空 用所给动词的适当形式填空。(一）
Freud was one of the first scientists [1]_________（make）serious research of the mind. The mind is the collection of activities [2]_________（base） in the brain that involve how we act, think, feel and reason. He used long talks with patients and the study of dreams [3]___________（search） for the causes of mental and emotional problems. He also tried hypnosis(催眠. He wanted to see if [4]________（put）patients into a sleep-like condition would help ease
[5]________（trouble） minds. In most cases he found the effects only temporary. Freud worked hard, although what he did might sound easy. His method involved [6]________ (sit with his patients and [7]________（listen）to them talk. He had them [8]________（talk）about whatever they were thinking. All ideas, thoughts and anything that entered their mind had to
[9]___________（express）. There could be no[10]________（hold）back because of fear or guilt. 基础写作 :最近，你就读的学校——广东实验中学高中部将举办开放日。 你将作为学校的
学生代表向前来参观的英语老师介绍高中校区的基本情况，请准备好你的解说词，文章的开头和结尾已为你写好。(学会用非谓语动词表达）
?位置交通：位于广州市西部，荔湾区；出行便利，步行到地铁站约10分钟。 ?学校历史：逾120年的悠久历史；现高中校区于2004年 竣工并投入使用。 ?校园环境：占地面积约125,000平方米；植物繁茂，绿树成荫，环境优美。 ?校园设施：课室宽敞明亮，配备齐全；拥有标准运动 设施，
其中综合体育馆可用于举办比赛、会议和典礼。
?师生情况：目前学生约3000人，教师约200人；全体师生正在
为学校更美好的明天共同奋斗。
?【写作要求】
?只能用5个句子表达全部内容。?【评分标准】 ?句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。
Good morning, teachers! Welcome to Guangdong Experimental High School!.....
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非谓语动词练习答案
1．Seeing 2.Seen (原句有误，请改成When it was seen from the top of the mountain,the city is beautiful (用分词 3. asked 4. knowing 5. called 6. organizing 7. following 8. followed 9. dressed 10. Being 11. Born 12. watered 13. walking 14. to sponsor 15. Having finished 16. Having been completed 17 18.. to have invented
19.to do 20. to have been invited 21. to go 22 finished 23. going 24. travelling 25. Having been toldTold 26. solved 27.permitting 28. clenched 29.enabling 30. attracting
二：非谓语动词完成句子练习
Keys:
1. only to be told (that 2. to spend your spare/free time
3. thinking about 4. including three children/ three children included
5. Judging from / by his words/what he said
6. dating back to/from (which dates back to/from
7. consisting of / which consists of
8. made up of/which is made up of 9. to solve the problem
10. concerning the football match 11. As/So far as I am concerned
12. (in keeping five children 13. hidden in a wooden box
14. There being no bus 15. to have been robbed
16. Seen from the top of 17. Seeing from the top of
18. To see 19. marked with footprints
20. the price of oil going up 21. fixed on/upon the national flag
22. with (both his hands tied 23. Not having heard from
24. (his being made fun of 25. to be held
英语高考作文开头通用句子【七】
1西天残阳如。
2我遇到了两位老人，两位向我伸出双手的老人。
3那是个夏日黄昏。哎，天气真热，我早已汗流浃背，于是，骑上自行车兜了几圈后，到那只有几平米却号称超市的地方买了瓶雪碧，来透心凉让心飞扬。无意间，我发现不远处一位老奶奶正盯着我，我疑惑了——我根本不认识她呀，看见她手里提着那只空空的麻袋，我才知道，她是想要我手中的塑料瓶。老奶奶衣衫褴褛，白发苍苍，两只枯井般的眼睛没有一点儿亮。我的心震动了！可是，这饮料怎么啦，怎么这么多呢，总觉得喝不完似的。平时总感觉厂家少装了一半，我倚着车架喝完，刚准备移步，低头发现眼前也有一双手，发现也是一双干枯的手一位老爷爷，头上的几根白发稀稀拉拉的，驼着背，老人的手向我手中的塑料瓶慢慢伸来。
4我犯难了：给他吧，老奶奶先来;不给吧，他又离我最近，只值一毛钱的塑料瓶啊，怎么给我出了这么难的题目呢？要知道，一向果断的我从来没有这么犹豫过，老人终于拿过了我手中的瓶子，口中喃喃地说道：“谢谢，谢谢。”
5老奶奶依然站在那里，瘦瘦的身体一直没动过，夕阳下的她被照成了青铜色，那双眼睛明明道出了一分忧伤。我终于无法面对，冲入“超市”又买了一瓶饮料，迎风一饮而尽。我拿着塑料瓶，带着一份沉重向老奶奶走去，老人吃力地抬起双手，那是一双怎样的手啊——老人的手在颤抖着，我猛地发现她的眼里闪出一丝亮光。那是残阳下一颗浑浊的老泪，老人家哭了。她颤抖着手接过瓶子，放进了麻袋。我发现，袋子是空的，确实是空的'！老奶奶
什么也没说，我却能那声发自心底的感激，一声让我变得沉重的感激，夕阳就快落下，风吹过一片紫云，将它遮掉了一半，那一半残阳－似。那似的残阳啊，也有人去关心吗？
