英语作文评语经典批注模板【一】
1、结尾恰到好处地点明中心，语言朴实而含义深刻，耐人寻味。
2、以感受开关，以感受结尾。这样便使文章前后照应，首尾连贯，同时又使文章主题回环复沓，感染力极强。
3、结尾处对人物的赞美，情真意切，感人至深。
4、文章含蓄的结尾，既点题，又耐人寻味。
5、结尾处集中表达情感，既照应开头又总结全文。首尾连贯，一气呵成。
6、对细节传神的刻画，恰恰相反到好处地揭示人物的内心世界，这是本文的成功之处。
7、文章以…为结尾，言简意赅，其味无穷。
8、文章最后揭示中心之句，实属点晴之笔，概括之语，短促而有力。
9、结尾令人饱含期待与热情，言已尽，意犹未了。
10、文章开头与结尾时的诗化语言，充满想象与韵律之美，令人愿读、爱读，不忍释手。
11、虽为一件小事，但作者却描述得有声有色，结尾处不可或缺的点晴之笔，较好地突（）现了文章主题。
12、故事虽平凡，感情却真挚、充沛、感人。
13、文章结尾不落俗套，给人以欲还休的感觉。
14、结尾以…点明中尽，含蓄隽永，意味深长。
英语作文评语经典批注模板【二】
don't be afraid of change, you may lose out on something good, but you might gain something even better. —— leslie esdaile 不要害怕改变，尽管你可能会因此失去一些好的东西，但你也可能会得到一些更好的东西。
穷背景男孩和有钱家女孩无法相爱,在告别前他拜托她最后一件事,陪在他身边一盒烟时间,她答应了.于是他一边抽烟,一边回忆和她相爱的时光.后来他成了香烟厂老板,做出有过滤嘴的香烟,香烟的名字叫“marlboro”.man always remember love because of romance over.(男人只因浪漫而牢记爱情
【名牌的读音】好吧，看了之后我承认，我连ipod都读错了……你会读不？
one thorn of experience is worth a whole wilderness of warning. 一次痛彻心扉的经历，抵得上千百次的告诫。
最酷的口语──只含一个单词的英文句子。我们也可以把英语讲到酷。
straight ahead of him, nobody can go very far. 如果你要去的远方没有你的梦，没有你爱的人，那么，就算一直往前，也走不了多远。
where there is great love, there are always miracles.哪里有真爱存在，哪里就有奇迹。
【创意】一个相亲网站的公交广告，将文案分成两部分印在两辆公交车上，“find your perfect match”（找到和你最般配的另一半），比如和你最般配的另一辆公交车。
we say we love flowers, yet we pluck them. we say we love trees, yet we cut them down. and people still wonder why some are afraid when told they are loved.----- 我们说我们爱花朵，但是我们要采。说爱树木，但是我们要砍，我想这就是为什么那么多人在听到别人说爱自己的时候充满了恐惧。
关于爱 】 love at the first sight 一见钟情 cute meet 浪漫的邂逅 the chemical feeling 触电 first love/puppy love 初恋 truelove 真爱 courtship 求爱 propose 求婚 promise/pledge 誓言 a doomed couple 天生一对 all shall be well ,jack shall have jill
家庭（family）意味着：爸（father）和（and）妈（mother），我 （i） 爱 (love 你 (you ！爱（love）=倾听（listen） 感恩（obligate） 尊重（valued） 宽恕（excues）
a person who knows how to laugh at himself will never ceased to be amused.一个知道如何嘲笑自己的人，会永远生活在快乐里
这个应该不是人类的课本。。
woman's biggest pride is not her face, but her how conspicuous the men have many painful her．—— 女人最大的骄傲不是她的长相有多出众，而是她的男人有多疼她。
adults are always asking little kids what they want to be when they grow up because they're looking for ideas. -----大人们总是会问孩子你们长大了要做什么，那其实是大人们自己想要答案。
life is really simple, but we insist on making it complicated.----生活一直都很简单，但是我们也一直都忍不住要把它变得很复杂。
下午茶 “如果你简单，这个世界就对你简单”。简单生活才能幸福生活，人要自足常乐，宽容大度，什么事情都不能想繁杂，心灵的负荷重了，就会怨天忧人。要定期的'对记忆进行一次删除，把不愉快的人和事从记忆中摈弃 if you simply, the world is simple for you. "simple life can be a happy life
you`re waiting for a train. a train that will take you far away. you can`t be sure where it will take you. but it doesn`t matter. because we`ll be together你在等一班火车，火车会带你到很远的地方，你并不确定火车会带你到何方，不过这不重要，因为 ，我们会永远在一起《盗梦空间》
[心]love is when you take away the feeling, the passion, the romance, and you find out you still care for that person. ------ 爱情是：当感觉、热情和浪漫统统拿掉之後，你仍然珍惜对方。
many things because distant and beautiful, many things because of beautiful and distant. not because of distant and give up, just because going up and distant. 许多事因为遥远而美丽，许多事因为美丽而遥远，不是因为遥远而放弃，只是因为放弃而遥远。
love is like an hourglass, with the heart filling up as the brain empties.-----爱情就像沙漏，心满了，脑子就空了。
[太阳]three things in life when gone never come back: time, opportunity, and words. 人生有三样东西不可挽回：时间，机遇，以及说出去的话。
【实用烹饪词汇】1fry 油炸 2roast 烘烤（肉类 3bake 烘焙（面食类） 4grill 用（烤架）烤 5stew 焖 6simmer 炖 7steam 蒸 8knead 揉面 9mash 捣碎 10boil 煮熟 11mince/chop 绞碎 12dice 切小块 13shred 切丝 14 whip 搅拌 15grate 磨碎 16）toss 拌 17）drain 捞 18）shell 剥皮
success is getting what you want; happiness is wanting what you get.--- 成功意味着你得到你想要的，幸福则是你享受你得到的。
# if there is no cure for the pain,no shelter from the rain,you should not have fallen into love or gone into the cloud at first.no hope,no pain. --------如果没有治愈伤痛的办法，没有可以躲雨的屋檐，那么在最初就应该避免沉浸在爱中，避免走进这场大雨。心不动，则不痛。
happiness is a warm person looking for life; and i'm still waiting for you, but you have forgotten had been here; love so short, forgetting is so long. ------ 幸福，就是找一个温暖的人过一辈子；而我还在原地等你，你却已经忘记曾来过这里；爱那么短，遗忘那么长。
【各种的love】deep:深深的爱;chaste:贞洁的爱;devoted:专一的爱; loyal:忠诚的爱;tender:温柔的爱;sincere:真挚的爱;fervent:热烈的爱;burning:炽热的爱;intense:强烈的爱;wild:狂热的爱;at first sight:一见钟情;story:爱情故事;triangle:三角恋爱;affair:韵事。转发爱情好运！
don't go for looks; they can deceive. don't go for wealth; even that fades away. go for someone who makes your heart smile. 别倾心于容貌，因为它具有欺骗性；也别倾心于财富，因为它终究也会消散，倾心于那个能带给你真心笑容的人吧！
and not talk to suit together derived; and not for, can together; and not able to together will be together forever; and not always together will be happy. 并不是聊得来，就适合在一起；并不是适合，就能够在一起；并不是能够在一起就会永远在一起；也并不是永远在一起了就会幸福的。
every man is afraid of something. that's how you know he's in love with you; when he is afraid of losing you.----- 每个人都会害怕些什么，所以如果你发现一个男人很怕失去你，那是因为爱上你了。
it is a terrible thing to see and have no vision. - helen keller 只有视力没有视野很可怕、
to love is to risk not being loved in return. to hope is to risk pain. to try is to risk failure. but risk must be taken, cause the greatest hazard in life is to risk nothing. 爱也许没有回报,希望会带来伤痛,尝试可能会失败,但我们必须去承担风险,因为人生最大的风险在于没有风险可承担.
when the rain is blowing in your face, and the whole world is on your case, i could offer you a warm embrace, to make you feel my love. 每当雨打风吹，世人都在挑三说四的时候，我能给你的是一个温暖的怀抱，让你感受到我的爱。
i will be strong enough to make you feel bad。
我会坚强到让你们心疼。
[心]trust should be like the feeling of an one year old baby when you throw him in the air, he laughs.because he knows you will catch him. that's trust. ————信任就如同一个一岁小孩的感觉，当你将他扔向天空的时候他会笑，因为他知道你会接住他。这就是信任。
又见中国式标语。。。超级碰碰车。
active long will be very tired, care about for a long time will crash! 主动久了会很累，在乎久了会崩溃!
being happy doesn't mean that everything is perfect. it means that you've decided to look beyond the imperfections......开心不表示凡事都完美，那是说明你已经不再只看缺陷了
世上所有的事都有迹可寻，并能遵照此规律更好完成它，惟独爱情不是，在爱情中寻找规律，只能让爱变得庸俗不堪。
photo by basegrinder.music now by garou
it is not easy to meet each other in such a big world. 世界这么大，能遇见，不容易
if i could have anyone in the world, it would still be you.---纵然世间任我挑，我的选择仍是你。
if you love somebody, let them go. if they return, they were always yours. if they don't, they never were. 如果你真的爱上谁了，就放他走，如果他回来了，他永远是你的，如果没回来，他就从来未属于过你。
【经典双语】英语必懂简写：lol=laugh out loud哈哈 asl=age,sex,location年龄性别哪的 bbs=be back soon/brb=be right back马上回来 thx=thanks ur=your g2g=got to go得走了 ttyl=talk to you later等会聊 bbl=be back later等会回来 cya=cu=see you回见 ft=faint我晕 you rock你牛b
【微笑，2011】use your smile to change the world. don't let the world change your smile. 用你的笑容去改变这个世界，别让这个世界改变了你的笑容。
some people dream of success while others wake up and work hard at it. 有些人还在继续梦想成功时，另一些人却已经醒来努力为之奋斗了。
i know that life is not a fairy tale, and i’m not asking for a happy ending. all i’m asking is a real imperfect love story about you and me. 我知道，生活不是童话，所以我不求童话般的完美结局，只希望能拥有一个不完美但却真实的爱情故事。故事的主角，只有——你和我。
your life only lasts for a few decades, so be sure that you don't leave any regrets. laugh or cry as you like, and it‘s meaningless to oppress yourself——人生短短几十年，不要给自己留下了什么遗憾，想笑就笑，想哭就哭，该爱的时候就去爱，无谓压抑自己。
if you think you can win, you can win. faith is necessary to victory. 如果你觉得你会赢，那你就会赢，信念是取得胜利的必需品。
– william hazlitt
please remember: when the pain of holding on is greater than the pain of letting go, it's time to let go. 记住：当坚持之苦大过放弃之痛，就是该放手的时候了。
英语作文评语经典批注模板【三】
Every girl dreams and Li Xie is no exception. She has read dozens of books on how to be a ballerina and Swam.
每一个女孩都有梦想，李协也不例外。她读了很多书，都是关于如何成为一个芭蕾舞演员的
Lake is her favorite. She hopes one day her dream will come true. She has taken ballet lessons and all her teachers confirm she is a good student.
她最喜欢的是天鹅湖。她希望有一天能梦想成真。她参加了芭蕾舞培训班，所有老师都认为她很优秀。
One day she saw an advertisement that a famous ballerina troupe will be performing in her hometown.
一天，有一则广告说一个著名的芭蕾舞团要在她的家乡演出
Her thoughts ran wild, "I must meet up with the leader of the troupe and show him my skills, " she murmured to herself.
她看到后顿时思绪纷杂，自言自语道：¨我必须要见见团长，展示一下我的`才艺。¨
She dressed herself in her ballerina costume and managed to evade the guards and hid in the dressing room.
她穿上芭蕾服，尽量避开门卫躲进了化妆室。
To her luck the leader entered and she timidly knocked at the door.
很幸运，团长进来了，她胆怯地敲了敲门。
She bravely approached him and handed him a bunch of red roses and in her excitement the thorns pricked her hand but she did not make much ado about the pain.
她鼓足勇气走近他，送上一束红玫瑰。激动之余，玫瑰的刺戳到了她的手，但她根本没有在意。
The leader observed her action as she told him her dream. "Alright, you dance and I will give you my verdict."
在她给团才讲自己的梦想时，团长注意到了她的举止。“好吧，你先跳，我再说我的意见。"
But half way through the dance he stopped her and said, "I'm sorry you're not good enough!"
但是她只跳了一半，团长就让她停下来，说道： ¨我很抱歉你跳得还不。
On hearing this Li Xie ran as fast as her legs could carry her and was ashamed. She gave up her dream.
听到这话，李协非常羞愧，拼命地跑开了。从此，她放弃了梦想。
Many years later, she heard that the same ballet troupe was performing in her town again.
多年以后，她听说原来那个芭蕾舞团又一次来到她家乡演出。
Bitter memories of the leader's harsh words came flooding back to her.
团长尖刻的话语涌上心头，这是一次痛苦的记忆。
This time she was determined to find out Why the leader had told her she was not good enough when all her teachers thought otherwise.
这次她决定向团长问个究竟，为什么别的老师都认为她跳得很好，而他却不这样认为。
This was his reply, "I tell this to every student." She angrily shot back, "You've ruined my life!一 Then she got a further shock, "
团长回答道：u我对每个学生都这样说。¨她生气地反驳说：“可是你毁了我的一生!”团长的回话让她更震惊了：
I remember your gift of roses and how the thorns had pricked your fingers but you carried on bravery.
“我记得你送的玫瑰，刺戤到了你的手指，而你却勇敢地继续表演。
If you only had treated bal}et like that and did not give up so easily; therefore, you still deserve my verdict! "
如果你能以那种精神对待芭蕾舞，就不会轻易放弃了。因此，我的意见对你仍然受用。
英语作文评语经典批注模板【四】
当我背靠着墙壁时，母亲手拿着书，用书背轻轻地放在我的头上，尽量与墙壁保持垂直。我在那里耐心地等着，等候着母亲为我量身高，我知道，这能给她一点欣慰感，所以我尽量站地直直的。待她对好后，便用一支笔在墙上深深地来回划着横线，嘴里时不时地念着：“长得比妈妈都高了。”画好后又凑近墙面，把墙上以前所画的痕迹仔仔细细地看了一遍，嘴角时不时可以看到欣慰的一丝笑容，像一个雕塑家正在欣赏自己的雕塑作品。
这时，我发现了她的白发，密密实实的夹在昔日的黑发中。我努力地想去数清它，可它早已是我英语单词中的不可数名词。不对呀，我分明记得昨天我还牵着她的手，抬头望着她，望着她美丽的面庞，望着她华丽的黑发，在她的怀里撒着娇，那时的她，是那样的美丽，那样的炫目。可是怎么一转眼却已换做母亲抬头仰望我了。那张略显沧桑的脸庞，满怀期望的眼神。让我至生难忘。
我不禁回想起那顿饭，有我最爱吃的红烧牛肉，我伸出筷子夹起了一块肉，尝了一下。但总觉得少了点什么东西。
“妈，这牛肉少放了点什么东西吧？味道没以前好了？”我大声的嚷嚷着，对着正在厨房里忙碌的妈妈责怪着：“不好吃，我不吃了！”“少放了什么？”妈念着，努力的回想起来。“少放了……”“哦，花椒油！”“对的，起锅时没放花椒油！”妈终于想起来了，满脸愧疚的表情，让人忍不住想去抹平！
怎么了，母亲无声无息的老了。她用她的青春雕刻着我们。她对我们的爱就像那美丽的风景，永远地映在了我们成长的路上。可让我惭愧的是，我平时的日子里总是忽略着这道美丽的风景。我天真地以为妈妈会像我每天上学路过的那棵桂花树，日复一日，年复一年地随着季节散发着她的迷人的身姿和芳香。我只是恣意地享受着。从不付出。
母亲，我错了，我会记得用我的爱去维护着您的时光。我会认真刻苦的成为你骄傲的雕刻作品。让我和您一起，成为我们彼此心中最美丽的那道风景！
批注：这是一篇叙事文章，文章描写细腻，特别是关于妈妈为我量身高的细节描写动人心魄。文章同两件事情，反映了妈妈对于自己的关爱，记叙描绘中也表达了作者对于妈妈的感激，以及对于生活真谛的认识。
英语作文评语经典批注模板【五】
Study the picture above carefully and write an essay entitled “After Graduation” In the essay, you should (1describe the picture (2interpret its meaning (3give your opinion about the phenomenon. You should write about 200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET2. (20 points
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Graduation is an important event for all of us. It is the divide between school and a full-time working life. After graduation, we are no longer students protected by parents and teachers, but a member of the real society. Let’s look at the picture first. A graduate is told by his teacher, “You must depend on yourself during your life journey after graduation…” He finds that some former graduates fly high into the sky while some experience a drastic fall.
The picture tells us a principle. Graduation is not the end of your education, but the beginning of your real journey. At school, we may find we are no different from our classmates. However, there will be a great gap between us after graduation. Some may try their best to improve themselves and become the mainstay of our ear era? While some are indulged in creature comforts and give up their initial ideals.
Therefore, we should remember that graduation is the beginning of our real life journey. If you want to be a person useful to society, you should make all efforts to learn as much as possible from others and improve yourself. In this way, you may fly high in the sky.
英语作文评语经典批注模板【六】
优秀与成功
作家周国平说：“在为人生确定目标时，第一目标应该是优秀，第二目标才是成功，成功是优秀的副产品。”努力可以成功，也可以优秀，成功和优秀是相辅相成的。我十分赞同作家周国平的.观点，因为他道出了人生目标的含义。
先来说说优秀吧，因为这是拥有成功最基本的资质。那么优秀是什么呢？可以把它看成成功成功之师，或许是一张满分的成绩单，或是一个红色的优星，或是老师对你说的一句：“你优秀了，你很棒！”，或是，总的来说优秀可以是语言上的，也可以是物质上的。优秀对我来说近在眼前，但又遥不可及。怎样才能成为真正意义上的“优秀”呢？首先，你先要具备优秀的道德品质。其次，品学兼优，学习上的优秀。最后，你要做到内心的优秀。谁又能真正地优秀呢？
再来谈谈成功吧。或许你更爱听成功这个词，因为它“表面颜色”比优秀更丰富。“只有优秀了才会成功”，成功是多么多么的遥不可及啊！一个成功者和一个失败者或许就只有那么一点点的差距，因为失败者没有在失败时再等等。如果他们等了等，或许下一刻迎接他们的将会是成功的号角。
如何才能做一个成功者呢？首先，成功者应具备的是宽阔无比的胸襟。其次，才具备“优秀”。最后，要有懂人、识人、用人的能力。对于我来说，好的学习方法是优秀的第一步，首先我会给自己设定一个好的目标，我会努力地去完成它。其次，我会用良好的心态去面对所有。最有，我会把精力集中在十分钟内，过一个又一个十分钟，我的精力一直集中着，我会为一个又一个目标而乐此不疲。当然我还没有算得上是优秀。
批注：你可以选择成功或者选择优秀。当然这中间需要时间、汗水和努力。优秀和成功的人其实并没有什么天生的本领，而是他们比别人花去了更多的时间、精力去努力。端正态度，认真仔细地努力吧，相信自己，你一定可以品尝到成功的甘露，聆听到成功的号角，看到优秀之神在向你招手
