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The Children Park
儿童公园
A new park for children has been set up to welcome' the coming of Children's Day,
The park is in the south of our city, covering an area of 500 mu. Entering the park you can see statues of children in different races, hand in hand,which is the symbol of the world peace. In the middle is a lake, around Which are all kinds of trees and flowers. There are many boats on the take and some children are boating happily, To the south of the lake is a hill with a lot of monkeys on it. The Children's Pa]ace lies to the east, in which all kinds of exhibitions are on show. To the west of the lake is a place for children to play, where there are many recreational facilities.
I'm sure the children in our city will have a happy festival this year.
为迎接儿童节的到来,新的.儿童公园已经落成。
公园位于城南,占地500亩。走进公园,你可以看到不同种族的儿童雕像,手挽着手,象征着世界和平。中间有一个湖,周围有各种树木鲜花,湖面上有很多小船,孩子们在愉快地划着。湖南面有一座猴山。少年宫在湖的东面;里面有各种展览。湖的西面是一个儿童游乐场,里面有各种娱乐设施。
我相信我们市的儿童今年会度过一个愉快的节日。
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