春节大扫除英语作文简短五年级【一】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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春节大扫除英语作文简短五年级【二】
一年一度的春节又悄悄地来临了，在这个象征着新气象的节日里，家家户户都要买年货，拜年当然，也少不了年夜饭了。
在今年的年夜饭上，爸爸妈妈可是化了不少心思哦!以前我们都是在奶奶家过年的，而今年因为刚搬了新房，必须在自己家里吃年夜饭了。
下午两点多，爸爸妈妈便开始忙活了。他们又是炖又是炒，一阵阵的香味从厨房里时不时地飘出来，把正在玩电脑的我弄得是“口水流下三千尺”啊!不时的跑出来问爸爸妈妈快熟了没有
在一阵漫长的'等待后，年夜饭终于做好了。我迫不及待地坐上了桌。等爸爸妈妈和奶奶都坐上来后，我便开动了。先尝一口青鳖炒年糕，再来一口冬虫夏草炖鸭，还有竹笋炒青椒，鲜美的虾
实在太丰盛了!一样样美味的菜让我都不知道该吃哪样了。
吃完饭后，我们全家坐在一起，津津有味地看着春节联欢晚会，耳边是周围一阵又一阵的鞭炮声。这感觉真是美好，我真希望每天都是春节啊!瞧，我这记性，当然还希望都有爸爸妈妈，亲朋好友的红包哦!
在爸爸和奶奶都去睡了以后，我和妈妈便到楼下去放鞭炮，当时外面下着蒙蒙细雨，但我仍然风雨无阻，顺手拿起桌上的一根香点燃，在妈妈雨伞的庇护下，我点燃了引线后便跑到了楼上，可过了好长时间，都没有如愿听到鞭炮的响声。下去一看，引线竟然没点到。唉，我真是太马虎了!但是浓浓的年味让我兴奋无比。
过年的滋味真是非同寻常，真希望每天都像过年一样!小朋友们，你的感觉一定跟我一样吧!
春节大扫除英语作文简短五年级【三】
快要到春节了。今天，我家要大扫除。
妈妈给我分了工。让我打扫我的房间。我爽快地答应了。走到自己房间里一看，真乱呀！我先收拾床铺，整理书桌。然后，我拿起扫把，开始扫地。照着妈妈的样子认认真真的扫起来。扫完之后，又拖地。大扫除真累呀！用了一个小时多，才把我的小房间打扫干净。干完之后，我兴高采烈地喊：“妈妈，快来看，我扫完房间了！”妈妈过来了，我以为妈妈一定会表扬我。谁知道她却不满意。说我没擦桌凳，还有好几个地方都没扫。听了妈妈的话，我仔细打量了一下，果然有一些地方没扫干净。
刚才怎么没看到呢？于是，我又一次拿起了笤帚扫起来。这次我不放过任何地方，把那些小垃圾都清理出来了。底下的垃圾用扫把够不着，我就那拿来拖把，把拖把轻轻地伸到床底下，边往外拖垃圾，一边嘟囔：“看你们往哪里跑！”这次，那些小垃，听到命令似的从床底下跑出来了。
终于，忙完了，干了一个上午的活，累得我满头大汗，看着干净的房，妈妈笑了，也笑了。
春节大扫除，我们把家里打扫的干干净净迎接新年。
春节大扫除英语作文简短五年级【四】
新年快到了，我们要把家里打扫得干干净净。
爸爸把玻璃窗拆了下来，妈妈用水把窗子洗干净，爸爸再把窗装回去，窗子变得亮晶晶，像镜子一样，都能照出我做作业的样子了。然后爸爸又把灯罩拆下来递给妈妈，妈妈把灯罩洗得干干净净，爸爸装好了灯罩，换上了新的灯管，然后打开灯。哇！屋子里一下了就变得亮堂堂了。我也不甘示弱，我帮妈妈来擦墙壁。我拿着抹布，把墙壁上的灰尘都擦干净了，还站在小凳子上把门也擦了一下，墙壁也变得非常雪白的了。最后由我扫地，妈妈拖地。整整一天，把我们忙得满头大汗，终于把家里打扫得象新装修好的房子一样。
可是瞧瞧屋里，好像还缺了点什么。哦，我们在窗户上贴了窗花，在门上贴了爸爸自己写的“福”字和春联，还在灯下挂了小红灯笼。现在，我们的家顿时充满了新年的喜气，非常有快要过大年的样子了。
今天，虽然我们大家都非常累，但是我们心里都非常开心。特别是我，我帮爸爸妈妈做了不少的事，因为今年我长大了，我要过一个有意义的马年。我特别开心！
春节大扫除英语作文简短五年级【五】
“太棒了！终于到了我梦寐以求的海南啦！”我兴奋地大叫。这是我第一次来海南，也是第一次坐飞机呢！
海南有很浓的南国风情，属于热带、亚热带气候。我们的大巴车在公路上行驶，我看见道路两旁长满了高高大大、郁郁葱葱的椰子树，十分养眼，十分漂亮。
海南有异乡风情，也有异乡的文化了，海南那儿有“十八怪”：老太太爬树比猴快；十八岁的姑娘像老太；老太太长得像妖怪……真有趣！日记大全
海南，海南，主要就是海，于是我来到了海边，那儿的海真蓝啊！甭提有多漂亮了，海风吹来，原本平静的大海，一下子变得波澜壮阔，十分壮观。海风姐姐轻轻地抚摩着我的脸，一股清新的海腥味钻到了我的鼻子里……光着脚丫，提着鞋子，漫步在柔软细腻的沙滩上，一边轻轻地用鞋子撩着一阵阵涌上来的海水，呼吸着海的香味……
在海底潜水，对我来说可是一个很新奇的事啊！妈妈答应让我潜水，我好开心啊！我穿上那边提供的潜水服，很厚，应该是用来保暖的把！再穿上胶鞋，最基本的准备就做好了！接着教练给我们讲了一些在海里的知识，怎么做等等，我们就要下水咯！
我们一行人坐着快艇来到了海中央的一个驿站上，做好一切准备，下水啦！我背上氧气瓶，戴上游泳眼镜，咬住呼吸器，看上去还挺有架势的！潜水教练让我适应了一下，我们就开始“海底征程”了。
我放眼望去，那五彩斑斓的珊瑚礁，真漂亮！还有一些水草，会飘的海底生物，就象头发一样飘逸，美丽。我还在一块礁石上拾到了一个小小的海蛰，长得像甜甜圈似的，晶莹剔透。海底的大千世界无奇不有，海底的小鱼也是十分光彩夺目的！它们都是一群一群的，长得十分绚丽多彩，鳞片闪闪发光。有的小鱼很蓝，蓝得发亮；有的小鱼很扁，扁得几乎没有厚度；还有的鱼很小，小得让你感觉不到它的存在……热情的小鱼成千上万地围绕着你，感觉好象你就是海底的“小鱼饲养员”了呢！
海底的大千世界真是美妙，奇特，“海底征程”还真给我增加了好多知识呢，这趟海南游真是不虚此行啊！
春节大扫除英语作文简短五年级【六】
春节快到了，我和妈妈要大扫除，因为这样就能把去年的霉运通通扫地一干二净。 妈妈把武器都准备好了，有拖把、抹布、扫帚、吸尘器。开始大扫除啦！我和妈妈分头行动。妈妈先拿起了扫把扫地。我拿了一块抹布准备擦窗户。
我打了一盆水，然后把抹布往水里浸浸湿，在拧干。我搬了一张椅子踩在上面，用抹布反复地擦着窗户，把窗户擦得亮闪闪地，一点儿灰尘都不留。接着，妈妈拖地，我用吸尘器吸灰尘，我点了一下按钮，只听见一声巨响回荡在我的耳畔，这吸尘器发出的声音如同一只狼在怒吼，我用手紧紧地抓着吸尘器的手柄，我在家里；来回穿梭，把家里每一个角落的灰尘都吸地一干二净，远远望去，这房子仿佛是新买的。
最后一件任务，责任重大，妈妈是主负责人，我是她的助手。最后一件任务就是洗被子。洗被子分成三个层次，先把被子放在外面晒一会，然后在洗被子，最后再把被子晾晾干。
我先和妈妈一起把被子放在阳台上的晒被架上。然后再等个一个多小时。被子晒好一后，我和妈妈再一起收上来。接着，我帮妈妈把被子都放进洗衣机里，妈妈再倒上洗衣粉。最后洗衣服这件事就交给洗衣机啦。在一阵漫长地等待后，被子终于洗好了，接下来就交给我啦，我把被子都挂到晒衣架上。这样大扫除就完成了。我和妈妈伸了个懒腰，然后击了个掌，又朝对方笑一笑。
不扫不知道，一扫吓一跳，平常总觉得自己的房间和家里都很干净，可等你去好好打理时，会发现很脏。
春节大扫除英语作文简短五年级【七】
有人喜欢夏天的风，可是夏天的风太闷热了；有人喜欢秋天的风，可是秋风太干燥了；有人喜欢冬天的风，可是冬风又太冷了。而我却喜欢那暖洋洋的春风。
春风是一位大画家，它来到哪里，哪里就被它用神奇的画笔，点上亮丽而独特的颜色。
春风来到田野里，田野立刻充满了勃勃生机。经过一个冬天的考验，小草终于坡上了绿袍，它们在风中快活地翩翩起舞；春风先把桃花吹开了，每枝树枝上只开着四五朵粉红的桃花，桃花小巧珍珑，仿佛是工匠精心雕刻出来的；梨花也开放了，那花朵洁白纯净，花瓣中没有一丝污点，花儿开满了整棵树，真是“忽如一夜春风来，千树万树梨花开”呀！在田野中，最壮观的景象应该是大片大片的油菜花吧。远远望去，油菜花地就像一大群黄色蝴蝶在飞舞，又像是散落一地的黄金，还像外出采风的画家打翻调色盘洒了一地黄颜料，那景色美丽极了！
春风离开了田野，现在要奔赴到城市。
春风来到城市，让公园的花草树木重新拔上美丽的新装。它用温暖唤醒万物，池塘边的柳树醒了，抽出嫩绿的新芽重新垂下长长的头发，那嫩绿的柳叶又细又长，用“不知细叶谁裁出二月春风似剪刀”来形容再合适不过了。人行道两边的紫荆花也开了，淡紫色的花儿向四面八方绽放开来，好看极了。
春风又绿江南岸！春风让我们身边的一切变得生机勃勃。
优爸点评：现在虽然已经渐渐入夏，但优爸还是从小作者的文章中感受到了“吹面不寒杨柳风”的春意，小作者真是把春风写活了呢！优爸想重点说一下文章的过渡，小作者很聪明地以春风的脚步作为段落之间的过渡，如“春风离开了田野，现在要奔赴到城市。”这样的语句承担了田野和城市两个场景之间的转换功能，很不错！具体说到内容，小作者巧妙运用拟人的修辞，让春风所到之处之景全部鲜活起来，小草在跳舞、柳树也醒了过来，处处都是勃勃生机的景象。另外，小作者对于画面的把控也很值得一说，田野的一段，草的绿、桃花的红以及遍地金黄的油菜花，多种色彩的交织形成一幅五彩缤纷的图景，真可谓文中有画了！
