走进五月,感受和煦的风与细雨谱写的音乐在你我的身边流淌。多少个英雄的节日相拥在五月:劳动节、青年节、母亲节、护士节……在这粉色的五月,护士节也如同天使般向我们款款走来,她像春风张满风帆,鼓舞我,放下紧缩的翅羽,飞得更高更远!
我是一名护士,在刚开始接受医学启蒙教育时,我的老师曾说,你选择了这一行就选择了奉献。当时我还不太明白这“奉献”二字的深刻含义。可是从我第一次进病房起,戴上燕尾帽,穿上白大衣,我才明白这白衣天使称号的背后有多少人在无私的奉献。从我的.亲身经历中,我才真切的感到我们的工作是多么的辛苦!打针、发药、铺床、输液,在苦中感受着呵护生命的快乐;交班、接班、白天、黑夜,在累中感受生命轮回的航舵。在医院特有的气味中,我们走过了清纯的少女时代;从染的伤口边,我们走过了炙热的青春年华;在白色蒙蒙的氛围中,我们用一颗真诚的心来面对无数个夜晚的漫长;在亲人的期待和焦怨声中,我们把自己奉献给了一个个身患疾苦的病人……
每当我看着镜中一袭白衣的自己,脑海中总会想起南丁格尔女士那段感人至深的话语,她说道:“只要我此身存在,我一定为你们的生命而奋斗,并用我的一生实践这一诺言。”这是一位伟大的女性在经历了太多生与的抗争搏斗之后发出的感叹!此时此刻,我终于亲身体会并深深地领会到了这其中的感情。
然而护士也有心酸和苦闷。节假日里,你想牵手爱人和孩子上街挑选自己心爱的衣物,你不能,因为你是护士;风雨夜里,你想找个女性的理由推迟上班,你不能,因为你是护士;在隔离病房,你怕感染?你不能,因为你是护士。在产房,你怕鲜?你不能,因为你是护士。想起一个个新生命降临,想起那一个个无助期盼的眼神,想起那一声声呼唤,你天使般的脚步马不停蹄,总是和病人的心贴得很近。有人说,用自己的左手温暖自己的右手是一种自怜,而用自己的双手去温暖别人的双手,却是一种最原始最真诚的奉献。我不是诗人,不能用最漂亮的诗句讴歌我的职业;我不是学者,难以用深邃的思想思考我的价值;我不是歌手,更没有动听的歌喉咏颂我平凡的岗位。我戴的燕尾帽,没有皇冠的典雅,但却闪耀着圣洁的风采;我的白大衣没有礼服的美丽,却代表着天使的纯洁。我不是演员,但我却在人生的舞台上展示优美的白衣神韵,我是一名普普通通的护士,可我却能用勤劳的双手和博大的爱心将人类的至真、至善、至美传递给每一位患者,用满满的真情,换来患者满意的笑脸和真诚的感谢。
我把微笑写在脸上,把心酸埋在心底,把燕尾留在发梢,把圣洁挂在胸前。我愿和我的护理姐妹们一起,在这个没有掌声,没有喝彩,只有生与的舞台上永远前行。
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第1段:提出一种现象或某个决定作为议论的话题
As a student, I am strongly in favour of the decision. (亮明自己的观点是赞成还是反对
The reasons for this may be listed as follows. (过渡句,承上启下
正文:
第2段:First of all... Secondly... Besides...(列出2~3个赞成或反对的`理由
结论:
第3段:In conclusion, I believe that... (照应第1段,构成"总—分—总"结构
Last Sunday, Jim went out to fly a kite. The kite flew highly in the sky. Jim ran with it happily.
Suddenly the line was broken and the kite flew away. Soon it disappeared. Where was it?
Jim had no idea. So he had to run here and there to look for the kite. At last he saw it on the top of the tree. He tried to get it down. But he couldn’t. He felt sad.
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第1段:Some people hold the opinion that A is superior to B in many ways. Others, however, argue that B is much better. Personally, I would prefer A because I think A has more advantages.
正文:
第2段:There are many reasons why I prefer A. The main reason is that ... Another reason is that...(赞同A的原因
第3段: Of course, B also has advantages to some extent... (列出1~2个B的优势
结论:
第4段: But if all these factors are considered, A is much better than B. From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that ...(得出结论 オ
1。 头绪分明,脉络清楚
写好记叙文,首先要头绪分明,脉络清楚,明确文章要求写什么。要对所写的事件或人物进行分析,弄清事件发生、发展一直到结束的整个过程,然后再收集选取素材。这些素材都应该跟上述五个“ W ”和一个“ H ”有关。尽管不是每篇记叙文里都必须包括这些“ W ”和“ H ”,但动笔之前,围绕五个“ W ”和“ H ”进行构思是必不可少的。
2。 突出中心,详略得当
在文章的框架确定后,对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的。选材要注意取舍,应该从表现文章主题的需要出发,分清主次,定好详略。要突出重点,详写细述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节,略写粗述那么非关键的次要情节。面面俱到反而使情节罗列化,使人不得要领。这一点是写好记叙文要解决的一个基本问题,也需要一定的技巧。如:
One night a man came to our house and told me, "There is a family with eight children。 They have not eaten for days。" I took some food with me and went。
When I finally came to that family, I saw the faces of those little children disfigured (破坏外貌) by hunger。 There was no sorrow or sadness in their faces, just the deep pain of hunger。
I gave the rice to the mother。 She divided the rice in two, and went out, carrying half the rice。 When she came back, I asked her, "Where did you go?" she gave me this simple answer, "To my neighbors — they are hungry also!"
3。 用活语言,准确生动
记叙文要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事、物加以叙述。一篇好的记叙文的语言既要准确、生动,又要表现力强,这样才能把人、事描写得具体生动,其可读性才强。试比较下面一篇例文修改的前后效果。
原文:
One day Xiaoqiang was wandering away。 He was soon lost among people and traffic。 He could not find the way back home and started crying。 Just then, two young students who were passing by found him standing alone in front of a shop and crying。 They went up to Xiaoqiang and asked him what had happened。 Xiaoqiang told them how he got lost and where he lived。 The two students decided to take him home。 Mother was pleased to see Xiaoqiang come back safe and sound。 She invited the two students into the house and gave them some money, but they didn't take it。 She served them with tea but they left。
修改后:
The other day, five-year-old Xiaoqiang left home alone and wandered happily in the street。 After some time, he felt hungry so he wanted to go back home。 But he found he was lost among the crowded people and heavy traffic。 When he could not find the way home, he started and crying。 Just then, two young students who were passing by from school found him sanding crying in front of a shop。 They immediately went up to him。
"Little boy, why are you standing here crying?" they asked。
"I want Mom, I go home。" said the boy, still crying。
"Don't worry, we'll send you home。"
And they spent the next two hours looking for the boy's house。 With the help of a policeman, they finally found it。
When the worried mother saw her son come back safe and sound, she was so thankful and she invited the students into her house。 Gratefully, she offered them some money, saying it was a way to express her thanks, but the young students firmly refused it and left without even a cup of tea。
你问先看什么,呀,当然是中国四大奇观里的吉林雾凇了。在冬天里,雾凇雪白如云,一层层的.,毛茸茸的,漂亮极了,挂在树枝头。南来北往的游客,为了看雾凇,他们不远千里万里来到这里,就为了看她的模样。要不,吉林雾凇怎么会当之无愧光荣地成为中国四大奇观之一呢?
接下来,让我们一起来到吉林市的松花江边儿吧。到这儿干什么,当然是领你们看看这条源远流长的松花江了。这江,多美,像绿色的长幅画卷,像一面白净净的镜子,像一双母亲的手,是她,养育了我们一代又一代吉林子孙。
这样奇妙的雾凇,这样美丽的松花江,加上“左青龙(龙潭山)、右白虎(小白山)、前朱雀(朱雀山)、后玄武(北山)”四面环绕,让你感觉到她有着无穷的诗意,仿佛在梦里,一步一步地前进,不眨眼,看着四处美景……
I was born in a beautiful town with high mountains around it.The mountains are covered with all kinds of green bamboo.Through the town runs a small stream.It’s said that a new railway is going to be built to the east of the town and a bamboo factory to the west.All the children of the school age can go to school.If anyone is ill,he can go to see the doctor in the newly-built hospital.People in the town are hard-working and never take the backwardness lying down.Though they are having a richer and better life,they are not satisfied with what they have got.They are working hard to build their town into a modern one.
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