英文阅卷作文【一】
议论文，分析事实，论证道理，当然要遵循一定的思维规律；这种思维规律反映在文章的外部形态上，就是具有一定体式的文章的结构。怎样写议论文才算“合体”呢？
一是根据议论问题的一般思维模式，应当是按“提出问题、分析问题、解决问题”（或曰“引论”、“本论”、“结论”）三大块构成。“提出问题”即在议论文开头一般要鲜明地提出中心论点，“分析问题”即在文章的中间要围绕中心论点展开分析论证，“解决问题”即在文章的结尾部分或者得出综合性结论，或者提出前瞻性希望等。这一点，众所周知，兹不赘述。
二是分析问题即本论部分，要按一定的向度分层展开论述。所谓“向度”即论述展开的方向。这个“向度”有四个：是什么，为什么，怎么样，何果。一般情况下，一篇中学生议论文作文，其本论部分只要从这四个向度中选择一个或者两个展开即可。但无论是从哪个向度展开，其分论点之间都要形成一定的联系。一般来说，有并列式、递进式和对照式三种。
所谓并列式，就是围绕中心从同一个向度列出几个分论点，逐一论证。如果仅仅围绕一个向度写，那么几个分论点之间的关系大多是并列关系。例如：议论文范文1
递进式同并列式结构相比，除了论点之间的意义联系不同以外，其段落的结构模式与并列式相同，就不再说了。
所谓对照式，就是从论题的正反两个方面入手，进行正反对比论证得出结论。其优点是结构简洁，论证充分，容易上手。最简单的对照式是在提出观点后，一段从正面论证观点，一段从反面论证观点，最后得出结论。还有一种对照式结构是在正面进行论述或者摆出论据后，紧接着用转折或者假设的方式从反面展开论述。例如：议论文范文2
英文阅卷作文【二】
This summer my sister and I follow my mother to travel to the United States, we went to the three cities and one island, San Francisco, Los Angeles, Las Vegas, and Hawaii.
Hawaii is my favorite, although only two days, but I went to the beach for several times, is the famous waikiki beach, listening to the tour guide said where the sand came from Australia, where the water is clear, the sand is very clean, when I was in the sea waves to see the small fish, I also into base sand castle on the sand beach, made apple mould sand, crabs, bottle gourd, the shape of a fish, I also want to go to the seaside.
英文阅卷作文【三】
Alas! Speaking of my summer vacation, that's a really rich and colorful! The most make me happy is my mother and I to play in the window of the world, playing all day. Can be happy!
Just to the gate, a Roman glass pyramid, came into our eyes, inscribed with four Chinese characters "window of the world", the word what a magnificent! I was thinking. Around the pyramid, it is a fountain of some two meters high. Is this four characters more gorgeous and colorful!
The door to watch has ended, we bought the tickets, hurried into the window of the world, we first to a call Japan laurel detached palace, here is introducing tea, wash cup, the style of tea. Because of this, I understand the style of Japanese tea.
Then, we visited some sculptures, such as: the world trade center, Japan's palace, and so on some of the building.
In this way, we then suddenly, until half past eleven we all of a sudden, forest through place, see this, I talk about playing with heart, and at work, I can't help, my mother and I immediately to start the game, wow! Good fast ah! My heart a, just relax, and nervous, just relax, and nervous,... My heart is such a.
Later, we played a lot of fun and exciting game, well, how did you feel today, I have a good time?
英文阅卷作文【四】
I went to Beijing more than eight times. Beijing is the capital of China. It’s a big city. I am very familiar with Beijing. It takes an hour and forty minutes from Nantong to Beijing by plane. There are many tall buildings in Beijing. It’s a modern city. My family visited the Great Wall, the Summer Palace, the Palace Museum, the Beihai Park, the Space Museum, etc. I went to the countryside of Beijing to go boating and fishing. It was very interesting. I went shopping in WangFuJing. I bought lots of souvenirs and other things. I like eating Beijing snacks. They are delicious. Don’t miss the Beijing Duck. It is really nice.
