英语中考作文押题2023云南【一】
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第1段：Recently we’ve had a discussion about whether we should... (导入话题
Our opinions are divided on this topic.(观点有分歧
正文：
第2段：Most of the students are in favour of it.(正方观点
Here are the reasons. First... Second... Finally...(列出2~3个赞成的理由
第3段：However, the others are strongly against it. (反方观点
Their reasons are as follows. In the first place... What’s more... In addition...(列出2~3个反对的理由
结论：
第4段：Personally speaking, the advantages overweigh the disadvantages, for it will do us more harm than good, so I support it.(个人观点 オ
英语中考作文押题2023云南【二】
1。 头绪分明，脉络清楚
写好记叙文，首先要头绪分明，脉络清楚，明确文章要求写什么。要对所写的事件或人物进行分析，弄清事件发生、发展一直到结束的整个过程，然后再收集选取素材。这些素材都应该跟上述五个“ W ”和一个“ H ”有关。尽管不是每篇记叙文里都必须包括这些“ W ”和“ H ”，但动笔之前，围绕五个“ W ”和“ H ”进行构思是必不可少的。
2。 突出中心，详略得当
在文章的框架确定后，对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的。选材要注意取舍，应该从表现文章主题的需要出发，分清主次，定好详略。要突出重点，详写细述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节，略写粗述那么非关键的次要情节。面面俱到反而使情节罗列化，使人不得要领。这一点是写好记叙文要解决的一个基本问题，也需要一定的技巧。如：
One night a man came to our house and told me， "There is a family with eight children。 They have not eaten for days。" I took some food with me and went。
When I finally came to that family， I saw the faces of those little children disfigured （破坏外貌） by hunger。 There was no sorrow or sadness in their faces， just the deep pain of hunger。
I gave the rice to the mother。 She divided the rice in two， and went out， carrying half the rice。 When she came back， I asked her， "Where did you go?" she gave me this simple answer， "To my neighbors — they are hungry also!"
3。 用活语言，准确生动
记叙文要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事、物加以叙述。一篇好的记叙文的语言既要准确、生动，又要表现力强，这样才能把人、事描写得具体生动，其可读性才强。试比较下面一篇例文修改的前后效果。
原文：
One day Xiaoqiang was wandering away。 He was soon lost among people and traffic。 He could not find the way back home and started crying。 Just then， two young students who were passing by found him standing alone in front of a shop and crying。 They went up to Xiaoqiang and asked him what had happened。 Xiaoqiang told them how he got lost and where he lived。 The two students decided to take him home。 Mother was pleased to see Xiaoqiang come back safe and sound。 She invited the two students into the house and gave them some money， but they didn＇t take it。 She served them with tea but they left。
修改后：
The other day， five-year-old Xiaoqiang left home alone and wandered happily in the street。 After some time， he felt hungry so he wanted to go back home。 But he found he was lost among the crowded people and heavy traffic。 When he could not find the way home， he started and crying。 Just then， two young students who were passing by from school found him sanding crying in front of a shop。 They immediately went up to him。
"Little boy， why are you standing here crying?" they asked。
"I want Mom， I go home。" said the boy， still crying。
"Don＇t worry， we＇ll send you home。"
And they spent the next two hours looking for the boy＇s house。 With the help of a policeman， they finally found it。
When the worried mother saw her son come back safe and sound， she was so thankful and she invited the students into her house。 Gratefully， she offered them some money， saying it was a way to express her thanks， but the young students firmly refused it and left without even a cup of tea。
英语中考作文押题2023云南【三】
来到云南，最喜欢的是天上的云。有时是你记忆深处的棉花糖，柔柔软软，沁出香甜的气味；有时是极散极轻的柳絮，舒张自在，飘过头顶，如梦如幻。当然，云朵背后蔚蓝的天空，也是令人惊叹的。当柔和的蓝色光线进入瞳孔，仿佛把你的双眸也染成了蓝宝石色。
蓝天白云，像极了小镇的扎染艺术，渲染出一片朦胧的美。
英语中考作文押题2023云南【四】
如今，我来到了云南香格里拉，开始了一次心旷神怡的旅行！
首先，我们坐车开到了大草原，天空万里无云，蓝晶晶的十分的美丽，一群不知名的鸟儿在天空飞来飞去。向前注视一会儿，高耸入云的山站在大地上，好像一个顶天立地的巨人。在大山的旁边，有几只可爱的野兔跳来跳去，好像在说：“这高耸入云的大山，我肯定能跳过去的。”在草原的边上，有好几片树林，碧绿葱翠，茁壮成长。在草原的中心，一大群黄牛、大马、绵羊和藏獒都在津津有味的吃着草呢！
接下来步行来到史都湖，湖的四周环绕着各种各样的植物，有大树，有花草……它们那婀娜多姿的身子倒映在如明镜般的史都湖中，使这美丽动人的湖显得更加生机勃勃，在湖上，还有一群鸭子在捕食小虾……这一切太美了，我都忘记看路了，害我摔了个大跟头！
令我最痴迷神往的是那个国家级的普达措森林公园，，此时，天气晴朗，我被这优美的景色迷住了。那些已经生苔的一颗颗大树与新长的葱绿挺拔的小树形成了鲜明额对比。并且形成了一个绿色的大自然天堂。哪怕是仙人，从天上看下去也会觉得这是块绿色的翡翠，晶莹透亮！公园里的动物也非常的多，野兔，小鹿等一些小动物都住在这里，远处，有一片紫罗兰和一片红玫瑰，它们各自散发着迷人的芳香，使人心旷神怡！
香格里拉的风景真是太美了，这片美丽的净土让一批批游人流连忘返！我爱香格里拉！
英语中考作文押题2023云南【五】
云南山美、水美、人美、风景更美。云南最令人惊讶、有趣的就要算云南十八怪、三十六怪、八十一怪、一百单八怪等，这些怪里有：大象逛大街，老虎游郊外；堂屋中间划国界；四季鲜花开不败；火车没有汽车快，不通国内通过外；独树成林大家爱；姑娘叫老太；鸡蛋串着卖等等，多的数不清楚。接下来我就给大家介绍云南那里最普遍的“仙山”吧！
云南的“仙山”很多，很有名，因为它山底是炎热的夏天，山底长着弯弯的香蕉，甜甜的菠萝，黄黄的芒果等一些各种各样的热带水果，真是应有尽有，树木密密麻麻的，长长的枝条和大大的树叶把树林封得严严实实，挡住了人们的视线，遮住了碧蓝的天空，盖住了火红的太阳；半山腰是春天，山上的树木抽出了新的枝条，长着嫩绿的小叶子，树林里的小鸟们在枝头叽叽喳喳地唱动听的歌，小动物们在如地毯似的草地上开心、快乐的玩耍；山头是凉爽的秋天，遍地都是金黄的落叶，就像地上撒满了黄金一样，小动物都在忙着寻找食物过冬了；山顶是寒冷的冬天，洁白的小雪花从蔚蓝的天空中翩翩飞舞着，还有一点儿缺氧，小动物们不得不躲进各自的洞穴里，老虎捕到一只羚羊当野餐，黑熊只好舔着自己又肥又厚的大脚掌，小松鼠靠秋天收藏的松子过日子，有时还到枝头散散步，看看春天是否快要来临……这些“仙山”真是太神奇了！
云南真是一个好地方，云南一年四季很难分，都如春，一山有四季，十里不通天。云南在我心幕中就是：上有天堂，下有云南！美丽的云南是我有生以来去过景点最漂亮的一个！
我爱这有趣而美丽的云南！我每走一步就是一个奇怪、奇特的景点！
