好的文章动静结合、张弛有度有节奏感。句式也是一样,要有变化性,这不仅能使文章更生动,也是语言表达方式的需要和表达能力的体现。句式的`变化,主要是要注意两点:
● 不要从头至尾使用一种句型。
● 长短句结合。
由于语言功底的欠缺和惯用思维,很多人写的文章一种句式到头,如:
I think …
I hope…
He does it.
He will take it
这样的文章虽然意思表达出来了,却显得呆板,欠生动。解决的办法是:
1.间或使用主从复句。
Because he is very much determined, he will carry it out this time. (原因
比较:He is very much determined. He will carry it out this time.
2.使用分词结构句。
The weather being fine, a large number of people went sightseeing.
比较:The weather is fine. A large number of people went sightseeing.
Africa is the second largest continent, its size being about three times that of China.
比较:Africa is the second largest continent. Its size is about three times that of China.
3.使用不定式句。
To be or not to be, that is a question. (莎士比亚
To study or not to study, that is much different.(引申
To do it well, you must plan it well.
比较:You want to do it well. And you must plan it well.
4.倒装句
Only when we fully recognize its importance can we have control of its essence.
比较:After we fully recognize its importance, we can have control of its essence.
No sooner had he arrived home than it began to rain.
比较:He arrived home. And it began to rain.
5.失衡句
whether or not he will come is still unknown to all the people present.
比较:No one present knows whether he will come or not.
That he has done it all by himself is known to everyone.
比较:Everyone knows that he has done it all by himself.
当然,句子并不是越长越好,也不是越复杂水平就越高。凡事皆有度。太多长句的堆砌让人觉得是买弄。有时侯,一个短小精辟的句子可以起到画龙点睛的作用。特别是在文末段尾。比如:
●As a creature, every one knows.
●Actions speak louder than words.
●Practice makes perfect.
1+1不一定等于2,人生的道路也不是只有一条,真理亦是可以被打败的。最后重复一句,1+1不一定等于2。
我想随着科技飞速的发展,所有的平房已经被一幢幢高楼大厦代替了,人们都住上了漂亮舒适的房子。 每幢大厦旁边都有一座小花园,花园里有各种各样的花草树木。花园里假山,假山旁有个大水池,池里有许多美丽的小金鱼,在自由自在地游玩。公园里还有许多石凳,如果工作累了,在这里坐一坐,心情就会舒畅起来。以前狭窄的小路已经变成了一条条宽阔而又明亮的柏油马路,路旁还种着高大的.树木。
我们的学校也变成了现代化教学基地。一进到学校。一排排绿树成荫的大树,一幢幢整齐的教学大楼,教学黑板已经变成了大屏幕,每个学生都有了多功能电脑,老师也会采用先进的教学方法,让每个学生愉快轻松地掌握所学的知识,另外,还有封闭形体育场,资料齐全的图书馆,天文台等等,全都是学生学习的小天地。
工厂已经搬到政府指定的地方,排出的废气,废水已经被高科技净化了,小河已经清澈见底,许多小鱼、小虾在水里游来游去,汽车排出的废气也被高科技净化了,空气已经清新怡人,天空湛蓝深远……
我想,我的家乡一定会在不久的将来变成这样美好的!
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