五年级一周学习安排表英语作文【一】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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五年级一周学习安排表英语作文【二】
(一）时序贯穿式
人物的性格成长、事件的发生发展，总是处在一定的时间“线条”上的，所以，一般人在写记叙文时均会自觉不自觉地采用时序贯穿式的结构。如陕西一考生的满分《窗外的牵牛花》就采用了这种结构，该文先叙述“我”细致观察“爸爸”在“窗外”种的“牵牛花”，再写“我”获得了“努力拼搏，微小的生命也能结出累累硕果”的生活感悟， 最后写“我”理解了“爸爸”良苦用心。像这样的结构安排就使该文在线索上十分明晰，很有特点。
另外，为了增强记叙文形式的美感，有时候也可将贯穿全文的时序特别地“凸显”出来。现仅节选某同学所写的《的惨痛经历》作文的前三自然段，相信同学们能很容易地从中感受到这种写法的好处：
7：30 进入教室，8：00就要考试了，赶紧占个靠后的\'位置。
7：40 已经把所需要的公式写在了桌子上。提前准备，百战不殆。
7：50 老师走进教室，原来是号称“四大名捕”之一的谭老师，还有平日一贯严肃认真的教导主任毕老师。
（二）空间转移式
人物的活动和事件的展开都要以一定的空间为背景，所以，人们在写记叙文时也常常会采用空间转移式的结构。这种结构的记叙文，作者或者处于固定的观察位置，然后由此分别观察处于不同位置的 几个事物，或者处于行动之中，按照行 动路线，逐个展现观察到的不同事物。但不管是哪一种情形，“空间”的不断“转移”使文章条理清楚、内容充实就成了这种结构记叙文的最大优点。如湖北宜昌一考生的满分作文《我梦中的小屋》中这样写道：
山上，飘逸的云朵，婆娑的树木，瑰丽的花朵，奇崛的岩石，每一处都是一幅美丽的风景。
屋前，几株梅，几枝兰幽幽地开花；屋后，挺直的松，苍翠的竹在风中摇曳，地上的 青苔也仿佛跟着摇曳了起来。
远处，苍翠的青山蒙着一层淡淡的薄纱，极力想掩饰住自己的那份绿，可是 怎么遮挡得住呢？连空气中都似乎可以嗅到“绿色”的味道，苍翠欲滴是它最好的写照啊！
很显然，上面三段文字在写“我梦中的小屋”时就采用了“空间转移式”的结构：作者通过不断地“转移”观察“空间”，分别写了“山上 ”、“屋前”、“屋后”及“远处”的优美景色，大大拓展了“我梦中的小屋”的内涵，而观察思路由上（山上）而下（山下）、由 近（屋前）而远（远处），又确实使文章脉络异常分明起来。
（三）时空交互式
“时空交互式”结构顾名思义，是指将时间和空间相互糅合在一起，以此来组织材 料和编排内容的一种结构。这种结构的记叙文，其内容一般都是时间跨度较大，而空间转移又比较频繁的人事等。采用“时空交互式”，有利于对处于不同时段不同空间的人事等有条理地进行叙述。如满分作文《精彩的乡村夜》中有这样的几段：
傍晚的太阳终于顶不住那沉重的夜幕，在昆虫和各种动物的催促下，被压下了地平线。……
这时，张家的小郭……
渐渐地，夜越来越深。这时，田野的各种昆虫……
……
夜更深了，……
限于篇幅原因，上面的几段文字，略去很多，但我们从中仍不难“估摸”到“乡村夜”的种种“精彩”之处。
（四）逐层深入式
逐层深入的写法符合人物性格形成、事件发生发展的规律，所以，“逐层深 入式”的结构也是记叙文常用的一种结构。这种结构比较容易掌握，因为只要我们能让文章在内容前后上表现出某种“意思”的 “递进”便可以了。如满分作文《最美丽的苍蝇》中有这么几段，从节选的每一段仅有的一两句话就可以看出它们在内容上“意思” 的“递进”：
大赛开始了，……
首先出场的是昌昌小姐，……
莹莹小姐姗姗来到台上，……
最后出场 的是美美小姐，……美美小姐获得了全蝇界的选美冠军。之后，评委们和观众边争吵边吃糕点去了。
（五）并列组合式
并列组合式的结构就是将有关“意思”相近的内容“并列组合”在一起，以达到充分揭示主旨的一种文章结构。如南通一考生的满分作文《感受四季?感悟芳香》就采用了这种结构模式，该文将春、夏、秋、冬四季的“感悟”并列在一起，还用“春之颂”、“夏之恋”、“秋之思”及“冬之盼”等四个小标题对其作了高度的概括，而小标题的形式也使全文在结构上显得极为新颖别致。
五年级一周学习安排表英语作文【三】
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五年级一周学习安排表英语作文【四】
其实这个英语课程也挺不错的，每天上午40分钟的电脑学习和40分钟的教师拓展。我个人认为，这个方法非常好，第一节课摆脱了教师的整体知道，自己根据自己的漏洞来学习；而第二节课则是阅读理解拓展，正好也是我的漏洞，所以这380元花得值。最令我难忘的则是第一天，并不是因为电脑的事。 在上敏特英语的第一天，我起晚了，7：15才起的床，我以最快的速度洗漱完毕，穿好衣服，以豹子舨的速度飞奔向学校。虽然速度快，可还是迟到了，晚了5分钟。我想到学校的老师基本上都很严厉，迟到一会就会“没命了”，我不由得紧张起来，我只听到咚咚的声音，原来是我的心脏跳动的声音。我不由得放慢了脚步，反正已经迟到了，早受罪不如晚受罪。我走到机房门口轻轻地敲了一下门，我只见到一位和蔼可亲的\'老师，她对我说：“今天迟到了，下回不要这样了，去开机吧。”我没想到我竟然奇迹般的躲过了一劫。我打开了电脑，班长坐在我旁边，他笑呵呵地对我说：“咱们真够幸运的，遇上了和蔼的老师，否则你就……”电脑打开了，我认真地学习初三的英语单词，不知不觉中，35分钟过去了。 第二节课我也必须要提一下。进入了第二节课，老师发给了我们一张卷子，让我们先做，这里面的题对于我来说不算太难，但依然有难题。尤其是完型填空，最让我头疼。这位老师在学生中漫步，看到了我就剩一道题，她面带微笑地对我说：“又遇到难题了？自己仔细想想，你肯定能想出来。”我同时似乎吃了信心丸，努力想，终于在老师讲题之前想出来了。
时间如流水，敏特英语已经学习了8天，这就预示着过完年了，要开学了，英语学的怎么样不是说就能所表达出来的，别人不知道，自己却心知肚明。开学了，你准备好了吗？
