“啊!三十八度七,高烧呀!妈妈看着温度计叫了起来。“赶紧去看看!妈妈七手八脚的给我穿上衣服,背上水壶拉着我出了门。我家住在六楼,并且没有电梯,妈妈二话不说一把把我背在背上,一分钟没到就下了楼,大步流星地走向马路,其间连一口气也没喘一下。汗水把妈妈的刘海都打湿了,看着气喘吁吁的妈妈,我的幸福感油然而生。
妈妈把我放在马路边,就急着去拦三轮车。可是深更半夜半天也没拦下一辆。实在是没办法,只好向叔叔、奶奶求救:“童童生病了,你们快来呀。打完电话后赶忙坐在我身旁,让我倚在她的肩上。一边不停的给我喂水一边说:“可不要脱水了,你多喝点儿。
不大一会儿叔叔和奶奶一前一后地赶来了。奶奶摸了一下我的头着急地说:“我现在就去找三轮车。童童,你跟妈妈先在这儿坐一会儿。“我……我去七中那边找。叔叔急得话都说不利索了。奶奶的脚骨裂过,走路像只大肥鸭摇摇晃晃的。尽管如此,奶奶还是努力的让自己跑起来。
过了许久,奶奶沮丧地走来无奈地说:“没有,咋办呀?咋办呀?奶奶急得满头大汗,不停地搓着手。“不行,咱们三个轮流背过去算了。正说着叔叔气喘吁吁地骑着自行车过来了,后面还跟着一辆三轮车。大冬天的,叔叔的羽绒服敞开着,露出了冒着热气的毛背心。他高兴地大喊:“找着了!找着了!快点坐上来。看着满头大汗的叔叔,心里暖暖的.。
坐上三轮车,妈妈就给医术高明的舅舅打电话。“咦!没人接。妈妈眉头皱的可以夹一只大苍蝇。我的脸烫的像要着火了一般。妈妈又着急地拨了起来。半天里面才传来一个懒散的声音:“咋啦?“童童病了。一瞬间舅舅的声音大了起来:“咋回事儿?我就睡在诊所,快来吧!
车刚到诊所,舅舅就打开了大门。帮着妈妈把我抱到了椅子上。把早就准备好的体温计夹在了我的腋下,并随手拿起了一旁冰凉的听诊器放到自己的衣服里暖了起来。过了五分钟,舅舅吃惊地说:“都三十九度了。他掏出了暖热的听诊器放到了我的胸口上,那个暖暖的听诊器像一个熨斗一样抚平了我的难受。
舅舅给我打了一针,抓了几包药。吃完了药,我带着满满的幸福进入了甜甜的梦乡。
那是开学以来第一次写作文,作文题目多样,可我选择了《我的理想》这一篇作文。我开始自己写真实的作文,但这么一想:如果你这篇作文写得好,说不定给老师留下好的印象。我的心里这么一想,就有了主意抄作文书上的。
晚上,我将作文书上的《我的理想》这篇范文抄了下来,不过中间有些改动,作文抄好后,我的心里有些害怕,老师在课堂说过,我们可以看作文怎样写,但不可以抄。想到这,我的脸上感觉到有许多小蚂蚁在爬来爬去。可我自己一直在安慰自己:抄,又没有什么关系,又没人知道。因为我将中间人名改了,不会有人知道。即使老师知道我就不能撒谎吗?说我爸爸指导我写的不可以吗?我的这么一想,心才慢慢平静下来。
第二天,鲍老师走到讲台说:“我们哪位同学上来把他的作文念给大家听” 。开始谈颜妍上去读了,同学们用热烈的掌声鼓励了他。我心里想:如果我把这篇作文念给同学们听,他们一定会用更热烈的掌声鼓励我。这股擎天撼地的力量使我举起了手。我在读的过程中,心里直发抖。可读完了同学们真的用热烈的掌声鼓励了我,我高兴得像一只小鸟一样一下飞到位子上。“同学们,她的作文写得好不好。”老师带着赞许的目光问。我的心里更加高兴,像吃了蜜一样甘甜,我高兴太过份了。“她的作文是作文书上的范文,我曾经看过这篇作文”。同学们七嘴八舌地说。我的心里像打了十五桶的水——七上八下。我紧张地回了一句话:“那是我的爸爸指导我写的。”我不知道老师信不信我的话,不敢抬头看老师。可我的眼前立即出现了老师严肃的目光,好像在说:“你怎么可以抄作文,不是不准抄作文的吗?你一点儿也不诚实,我讨厌你这样的学生。”也好象许多同学不停地说:“你这个骗子,竟然用范文当作你的作文来唬弄我们,我以后再也不理你了。”我的心咚咚咚地跳个不停,大概连我同桌都听见我的心跳声。
第三天,老师讲了关于昨天演读作文的事,老师虽然没点我的`名子,可老师说的一些话直往我的心里钻。这时候呀,我恨不得找个地缝钻进去。我一直责备自己:“你怎么这么笨呀,连自己写的作文和抄的作文难道老师都分辨不出来吗?那么老师还当什么老师,不如回家做农民罢了。”
这件事发生后,每当碰到老师看我的目光,我就十分害怕。还有,每当下课,同学们就问:“丁新欣,上月球做宇宙飞船怎样感觉,跟我们说一说呀,说不定我以后还有可能坐宇宙飞船上月球呢,看一看是不是你说的那样?”他们都在嘲笑我。我想:不诚实的孩子就是这样下场吧!我以后一定要做一个诚实的孩子。希望同学、老师原谅我的过错,我多么想还能和以前一样做他们的好朋友啊?
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:23
互评(刘兴顺评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:23
互评(战越评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:
互评(李春霞评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:
Computer is a very useful machine. Some of them are big, but some of them are very small .Many people like playing computer. Computer has many functions, so that people can do a lot of things by computer, like watching movies, listening to the music or playing games. It can make our lives very colorful and convenient. Various people can make good use of computer. Children can use computer to learn and play games. Parents can use computers to work. I think computer is a kind of wonderful and interesting machine, so I like computer very much.
电脑是一种很有用的机器。有的电脑很大,但是有的'很小。很多人喜欢玩电脑。电脑有很多功能,人们可以i用电脑做很多事情,比如说看电影,听音乐或者玩游戏。它可以使我们的生活充满色彩和便利。各种各样的人都可以好好利用电脑。小孩子可以用电脑来学习和玩游戏。父母可以用电脑来工作。我认为电脑是一种神奇有趣的机器,所以我很喜欢电脑。
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